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Approved NPC Sera Alkan

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]PHYSICAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Age: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]17[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Force Sensitivity:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Force Sensitive/Untrained[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Species:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Twi’lek[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Appearance: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Sera is a young twi’lek girl with blue skin and blue eyes. She is very tall, but not as much as her father. She has a very nice body that would often make males and females admire her. Her juvenile smile and face tell that she is nothing but a young girl. She inherited her mother's appearance, looking just like a Twi’lek, but being more tall than normal because of the vah’la blood that she inherited from her father.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]SOCIAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Name:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Sera Alkan.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Loyalties: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Loyal to Nyx and herself.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Wealth:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Enough to live. Makes her wealth working with her father as a Smuggler.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Notable Possessions:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] A talisman that once belonged to her mother, Darth Umbra[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Skills:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Sera is very skilled at talk people over doing her bindings. When talk is not enough, she can shoot a person between their eyes with her eyes closed. But her greatest skills is her affinity with technology, she can craft droids and slice almost every system. By having vahla blood, she has a natural connection to the force.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Personality:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Sera did not get her father serious attitude, she is very outgoing and likes to flirt with almost everyone. But in the end she is a teenager, and like most teenager she is quick to anger and actually thinks that she knows everything while the rest of the galaxy is plain dumb.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]COMBAT INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Weapon of Choice: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Two fast blasters.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Combat Function: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]She is very good with her blasters and can take care of herself, but when fighting alongside her father she tends to let herself go to impress him and show that she is as good as him, if not better, which usually ends with Nyx trying to save her.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]HISTORICAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Sera was born in [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Nar Shaddaa [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]to a Sith Lord and a Republic agent, a union that brought almost end the life of her father. She never knew nothing about her mother, a Twi'lek Sith Lord, but she always knew that her birth was a mistake. Why other motive would her father refuse to talk about her mother and always become angry? Despite this, see also knew that her father loved her more than anything, is his cold and strange way of showing. Since her childhood, Sera fly to planet to planet, system to system, never really having a home besides her father ships. She knew what her father do to keep her warm and feeded, she knew that he was a criminal, and she admired that. The life of a smuggler, never answering to anyone but herself, that was the life she wanted to herself, and she work for that. Everyday she trained her skills with blaster and swords until she was as good as her father, but her true love was creating androids and hacking systems for fun, a skill that proved to be very useful for her father, and because of this he start to taking her to one job here, one job there, nothing that would put her health or sanity in risc, of course. But one day her father will see her for the very good criminal she is..[/SIZE]
 
[member="Nyx Alkan"]

Hello there,

Could you go into a little more detail about what traits this character has picked from each race? I'll also need you to link to both the Vahla and Twi'lek wiki entries.

What was the exact method of conception? Was it natural, or assisted by genetic manipulation or alchemy? I'm not seeing anything to support natural hybridization between the Vahla and Twi'lek.
 
Hey there,

Is natural, as her mother is a twi’lek sith and her father a vahla (included her mother profile on links), also included the natural connection to the force that she has due to being half-vahla, mentioned how she has all the appearance of normal twi’lek except for the size, due to her vahla blood. Also include link the links to the wiki.

Sorry for the trouble.

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]
 
[member="Nyx Alkan"]

Okay, for the most part this NPC checks out, the only issue I was having was with the method of hybridization. I don't really see anything that supports natural conception between a near human and a non-human like a Twi'lek. If you can find some evidence of this, then this would be okay, but otherwise, this can only happen with some kind of outside assistance like genetic engineering or alchemy.
 
[member="Nyx Alkan"]

Thank you for the edits.

Last thing I need you to do is add links to the bios (not the profile page) for the characters referenced here, including your own. Also links for the Twi'lek and Nar Shaddaa. If she's no longer part Vahla, you can go ahead and delete that link.
 
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