Approved Vehicle Saotome Soni

[Matsu Ike]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent:To create a vehicle for the Ranger's and others
• Image Source: M35 Mako
• Canon Link: N/A
• Restricted Missions: N/A
• Primary Source: Dela Transport

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Saotome Foundry
• Model: Saotome All Terrain Troop Transport
• Affiliation: Closed-Market (Any character can use this if they have explicit permission through, for example, a marketplace purchase)
• Modularity: Interior Configuration
• Production: Mass-Produced. (Anyone.)
• Material:
  Quadanium steel (frame)
• Sasori Nnth (hull)
• Crystasteel (viewports)
• 
  Internal Components
  
• 
  Sasori Agena (component)
  

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Armored Transport
• Role: All Terrain Transport
• Height: 4m
• Length: 10m
• Width: 5m
• Weight: 60 metric tons
• Minimum Crew: 1
• Optimal Crew: 3
• Propulsion: Repulsorlift
• Speed: Average 220kph (normal) Very Fast 380kph (with booster)
• Maneuverability: Average (normal) Very Low (with booster)
• Armaments: Moderate
  1x Heavy particle cannon
• 2x Nd-53 double laser cannon
• 2x Rocket pod
• Stun panel (secondary plates)

[*]Defenses: Moderate

• Sasori Shielding
• Redundant Shielding System
• Saotome Recharger
• Saotome Shield Booster
• De-ionizers
• Cap Drains

[*]Squadron Count: 6
[*]Passenger Capacity: 14
[*]Cargo Capacity: 100kg
[*]Misc. Equipment:

• Performance Booster
• Standard Life Support
• Pressurized Atmosphere
• Attitude Thrusters
• Vertical Thrusters
• Inertial Compensator
• CO-0012 com-scan
• Optional Droids
  Saotome Astromech
• Saotome Bodyguard/Commando Droid
• Saotome Protocpl/Defensive/Training Droid

SPECIAL FEATURES

• All around protection (laser, grenade, slug, emp, lightsaber, energy): The armored alloy uses reinforced duraplast and absorbital to create a very protective layer between enemy weapons and the occupants
• Sasori Agena: An organic component to the vehicle that allows a strong enough force user to connect and control with their mind the vehicle

Strengths:

• Maneuverability: Built with a performance booster to create several seconds of boosted speed or thrusters to move around
• Calming: The agena circuits are a semi living organism allowing one to connect to it and make the transport almost like a semi living entity

Weaknesses:

• Booster: When the booster is used the maneuverability of the vehicle takes a drastic dip. The speed booster and thrusters can be used as needed
• Lightside Beacon: There is no hiding it, the transport is a beacon for anything that hunts the lightside of the force
• Agena: Almost a living being, the fluid within the circuits can be controlled by a strong enough force user who knows how to connect and distract it

DESCRIPTION
Designed based off of the Chai La vehicle, what has been designed is a better produced and protected version of it. More made for other ships and everything that they would be able to get onto planets. With a few more things the jedi and engineers at Sasori and Saotome have come to see a couple of the other more impressive parts. Saotome's new improvements make it more to be a balanced transport then the highly offensive quasi tank the mandalorian company made. It delivers just enough in terms of its defensive, offensive and transport capabilities without going over in terms of specializing.

 

[Venthis Zambrano]

<p>Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.</p>

 

[Venthis Zambrano]

Nice submission. However, I do have some qualms with it. First off:

Strengths: Maneuverability: Designed to get around and take troops where they need to go while offering just enough in terms of weapons and shielding to protect them. It is a very average and balanced instead of specialized

Something being average is not a strength. This needs to be removed, you can choose to remove it or leave it out.

Balanced: Average in most respects and scales, the transport carries just enough weapons to deliver, just enough troops to maybe make a difference and has just enough defenses and secondary systems that it can be used for getting around. Compared to others it is not specialized and so won't excel in any area for conflicts

Similar to this. You are basically saying the vehicle is average, neither does average mean something is a weakness. It's just average. However, I do believe the following need to be placed in their respective area.

Very Fast 380kph (with booster)

Being placed into Strengths.

Very Low (with booster)

Being placed into Weaknesses.

After this is complete, we can continue.

[member="Matsu Ike"]

 

[Matsu Ike]

[member="Venthis Zambrano"]

alright edited it

 

[Venthis Zambrano]

SPECIAL FEATURES All around protection (laser, grenade, slug, emp, lightsaber, energy)

Right, next is this. Protection, but what is protecting it? Is it armor? Please go into more detail, or at least explain it properly.

[member="Matsu Ike"]

 

[Matsu Ike]

[member="Venthis Zambrano"]

yes, the alloy used has decent protective qualities and so I was listing them.

 

[Venthis Zambrano]

Please explain that in the Special Features section, as it isn't clear. Aswell as I believe the 'Sasori Agena' should be within the special features as it is 'special'. Please elaborate on that in the section, aswell.

[member="Matsu Ike"]

 

[Matsu Ike]

[member="Venthis Zambrano"]

edited

 

[Venthis Zambrano]

Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review. [member="Jamie Pyne"] [member="Raziel"] [member="Darth Ananta"]

 

[Cira]

<p>Approved.</p>