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Approved Location Rionda

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Name: Rionda

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Classification: Kingdom.

Location: Rishi

Affiliation: The adopted parents of Enduri Jaii and Enduri Jaii. The parents are Queen and King and Enduri is the Prince.

Population: 20000 citizens.

Demographics: 30% human , 20% Rodian , 10% Twi'lek and 40% various other species that have minor citizens to make percentages.

Points of Interest: The Castle: This is were the important political members of Rionda come together to talk about the future of it , changes of laws . The Castle is also home to the Royal Family of Rionda and a place for parties.
The Market: The market is located in the center of Rionda and is one of the most important places of this walled in city. It is where the people of Rionda buy and sell their goods, such goods including , clothing , food , beverages and other stuff important for the economy. It's the most visited place in the city , since everybody needs to buy their needs, thus making it the most social point of the city aswell.
The Holocinema: Located in the south area of the city , this building , let's citizens come in and watch original movies played by actors from all across the Galaxy , in HoloD!
The Main Gate: It's how things get in and out of Rionda. It is heavily guarded to ensure , nothing that isn't supposed to be in the city comes in. The children love to gather around to observe the mechanical door that works every time the door opens and closes and build their replicas.

Description: Rionda is a walled in city , with active commerce. It is currently ruled by the adoptive parents of Enduri Jaii. The political system of Rionda is consisted of , in order of dominance:
King and Queen:Both the Royal Monarchs have equal control over the city;
Prince;
1st General;
2st General;
Economical Guardian;
Every session is scheduled 2 months before the date of it succeding , and the King, Queen and the Prince listen , to the request of the Econominal Guardian and then the Generals. The Prince sorts trought the most important and the ones deemed time wasting , go to a pile that is to be examinated with minor priority. The ones that pass the examination proceeded to the King and Queen to decide , alter or scratch the ideas.

The citizens of Rionda are mostly middle-class , and some are rich merchants. There are no poor people thanks to the great job of the Economical Guardian. The middle-class live in the lower part of the city , having the market in the middle and then in the higher part of the city , nearest to the castle there are some rich merchants houses.
The average life of a middle-class would include , waking up to a breakfast with their family or by him/herself , followed by the work period , which is normally 6-7 hours. Normally , most citizens like to play with their children , or come and visit to the Castle, but there are some who like to practice sports, such as running and football.
The average life of a rich merchant includes , waking up to discuss business , while having their breakfast. They normally come and visit the Royal Family , to discuss business quotas. After their discussions with the Royal Family , they either go home and manage business , practice sports aswel.
History: Rionda started as a camp for the great-great-great-great adoptive grandfathers of Enduri. They decided it was a good place to stay and started building houses for them , shortly after , some people looking for protection , joined and continued joining. By about the second great grandfather generation , the city was almost as it is and the reign as been passed on ever since. In the generation of the great-grandparents
of Enduri , the city got attacked by Pirates. Luckily, they defeated the Pirates, but decided it would be safer to wall off the city, to keep it safer. The wall was finished building while Enduri's greatparents were alive.
Intent: To provide a city to fit in Enduri's backstory.

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Okay, so nothing is wrong with this sub per se, however it is severely lacking in content in nearly all areas:

  • Points of Interest - Please add a description of each of these locations, and maybe add some other PoI. The description should be about a paragraph for each location.
  • Description - This need to be a lot larger, at least a paragraph. Talk about life in the kingdom, the system of governance, ect.
  • History - This is optional, but it is very useful to have a history section for a city. You can talk about how it started off, and how Enduri's parents came to power.
Any extra detail in other categories would also help to fill out this sub.

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Much better, but it still needs a little more in the description - you could mention the layout of the city, or the lives of the people living there (are they poor, rich, ect.). The history section could also do with an extra sentence or two.

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