Approved Tech Ring of Malice

[Taji Nelson II]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a ring that can discharge a blast of Force Energy out of it.
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link:
  
  
• Quadanium Steel
  Aurodium
  Sith Alchemy
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source:
  
  
• Quadanium Steel
  Aurodium
  Sith Alchemy

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Taji Nelson II
• Affiliation: Taji Nelson II
• Market Status: Closed Market
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Unique
• Material: Quadanium Steel
  Aurodium
  Sith Alchemy

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Force Item
• Size: Small
• Weight: Light
• Ammunition: Force Energy
• Ammunition Capacity: Low | 1
• Effective Range: Personal
• Rate of Fire: Low
• Damage Output: Low
• Recoil: None

SPECIAL FEATURES

STRENGTHS

• Easy to Conceal
• Lightweight

WEAKNESSES

• Single Shot Only
• Requires Recharge after use.
• Easy to break.
• Not Lightsaber Resistant
• Obvious Dark Side Aura
• Weak to Force Light

DESCRIPTION

An experimental foray into Sith Alchemy made by Taji using texts and other research materials one could readily acquire. This ring was made because he needed a compact way to smuggle an easy to conceal weapon most places. Due to the fact that most people would check for Blaster Pistols, and the like, he was inspired to use a ring for the design. Applying Alchemy to said ring, he was able to make it able to hold a single blast of force energy that he can unleash. The ring is something he's constantly working on, though it is something he hasn't deemed finished yet.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Taji Nelson II

Alright let us begin. I will go from obvious to glaring.

Easy to Repair / Fix.

Easy to break.

These contradict each other, it practically negates it as a weakness and will need to be removed.

This ring was then made so that it would only work for the intended user - him. No one else is able to call upon the power within the Ring.

In what way is it able to differentiate people using the ring? Is it via blood meaning the user has to be constantly wounded and hurt to be in contact. Is it a force focused bond that requires divided their concentration? Is the ring sentient enough to tell the difference and not work? These are details needed.

No one else is able to call upon the power within the Ring.

What happens if someone does have the ring, simply not working doesn't mean much if it is only a single low grade blast. If anything them keeping it and not using it merely denies you the ability to use it.

Intent: To create a Ring that uses the power of the Force in order to shoot out low powered beams of energy

Applying Alchemy to said ring, he was able to make it able to hold a single blast of force energy that he can unleash

These contradict each other, is it a blast or beams of energy.

 

[Taji Nelson II]

Krass Wyms Fixed.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Taji Nelson II

Alright it looks acceptable

Approved