Approved Tech R-17 Armor

[Jorco Czeku]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Armor for a upcoming militia
• Image Source: https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/40954677841596349/
• Canon Link: N/A
• Restricted Missions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: POM Security
• Model: R-17 Armor
• Affiliation: POM Security: Open Market
• Modularity: Environmental suit helmet
• 
  Production: Minor
  
• Material: Durasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Multipurpose
• Weight: Average
• Resistances: Average

- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): Average
- Kinetic: High
- Lightsabers: None
- Other: None

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Mechanical Servo on right arm, providing enhanced strength to the arm and some extra protection
• Environmental Suit with helmet

Strengths:

• Affordable

Weaknesses:

• Susceptible to ionic damage
• Unprotected Lower Half

DESCRIPTION: Originally was an armor used by POM Security contractors, this was later hand me downed to the Rodian Defense forces to avoid purchasing new armor. This particular armor seeing more use in a law enforcement roll then military. Being used by breaching teams. It does a good job at dealing with slug throwers. But lacks more against blasters. This armor can be easily turned into a enviro-suit with the inclusion of a helmet when dealing with hazardous environments. The right arm acts almost like an exo-suit. Giving the wearing extra strength and defense. Also helping in using heavier weapons.

 

[Natasi Fortan]

Under Review.

 

[Natasi Fortan]

Hello there [member="Jorco Czeku"]! Thank you for your submission! I have a couple of things we'll need to work on before we can proceed:

• Your formatting is a little bit broken - sometimes this can happen when bulleted lists are copy/pasted. Can you please remove all the empty bulletins and make sure your submission matches the template?
• Please elaborate on the "mechanical servo" mentioned in the special features. What does it do? If this is notable enough to be a strength, you must add them to the strengths.
• The source you've provided is not the actual source of the image. Please attempt to identify the original source of the image.
• "Mild" and "Moderate" are not an acceptable entry for resistance. Please enter a choice from the applicable list: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme
• Please remove the wrist blaster from this submission (if you wish, you can create a separate weapon submission for it), as this template is for armor only. You may wish to include the wrist blaster under Modularity to indicate that one can be attached. Be sure these changes are reflected in the Description section.
• Please include the helmet under Modularity.

Please tag me when you're ready for me to review. Thanks!

 

[Jorco Czeku]

[member="Natasi Fortan Vitalis"]

Alrighty, I hope I fixed the problems you pointed out.

 

[Natasi Fortan]

[member="Jorco Czeku"] Hello! Thank you for making your edits. I've done a little digging myself to see if I could locate the source of the image you used, but I was unable to find it. In the absence of being able to locate the artist more precisely, I will say that we should go back to including a link to the Pinterest page where you found the image. I don't see a way to identify the artist or original source, but that is probably the most sensible way to do it. Other than that I think we are looking good!

 

[Jorco Czeku]

[member="Natasi Fortan Vitalis"]

Okay, I understand. I did try looking for the original post, but I ended up with nothing more then what I had originally.

 

[Natasi Fortan]

Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.

[member="Jamie Pyne"], [member="Lily Kuhn"], [member="Zef Halo"]

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Approved.