Approved Starship Palleon-Class Battlecruiser

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a front line Battlecruiser for the Fel Empire Expansion Fleets.
• Image Source: https://b-312.deviantart.com/art/Pellaeon-class-Star-Destroyer-281467913
• Canon Link: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Pellaeon-class_Star_Destroyer
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: The Fel Empire
• Affiliation: The Fel Empire
• Model: Destroyer Class
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  Production: Limited
  
• Material: Quadranium Steel Hull with Alusteel Supports

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Destroyer Class
• Length: 4792 Meters
• Width: 1233 Meters
• Height: 540 Meters
• Armament: Very High
• Defenses: High
• Hangar: Very Low-9
• Maneuverability Rating: Low
• Speed Rating: Low
• Hyperdrive Class: 2

STANDARD FEATURES

• Heavy Turbo Laser Cannons
• Ion Cannon Batteries
• Proton Torpedo Cannons
• Overlapping Shield Arrays
• Long Range Comm Relays
• HIMS
• Comm Jammers

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• Molecular Shielding
• HIMS

Strengths:

• Sloped Hull: Like the ancient vessel the Palleon Battlecruiser is named after, the vessel has a angled and sloped hull. This forward point allows for an overwhelming amount of fire to be focused in a single direction, while the sloped build allows for several levels of weaponry to target a single objective.
• Rear Hangar: The Palleon Battlecruiser has its primary hangar placed in the rear of the vessel, protecting any departing ships from most enemy fire while at the same time offering a fast response to any ships that get around the Palleon.

Weaknesses:

• Firing Arcs: Given the Palleons sloped hull design, those weapon mounts on lower levels of the vessel have limited turning ability, mostly only able to fire in one eighty degree arcs. More maneuverability is added as you go higher up in levels, though there are fewer guns.
• Dependent: The Palleons focus on ship to ship weaponry and large scale combat called for the focus on heavy weaponry and shielding, providing only limited amount of space afterwards for point defense weaponry and fighter capacity. In combat, to supplement this loss the Palleon is often deployed with a small squadron of anti-fighter corvettes to help cover it.

Description: The Palleon Class Battlecruiser is the brain child of Toran Fel and Fel Engineering. Taking note of the flaws of previous Star Destroyers, the Palleon was designed to negate some of the tactical disadvantages in the Imperial line, though in doing so it created a few of its own. With the ship serving as the front line of the expansion fleets, a HIMS system was added to ensure the Palleon's could jump into any situation at a moments notice, with Molecular shielding added to help protect the vessel in the intense firefights it would experience breaking through blockades.

 

[Gir Quee]

Under Review.

 

[Gir Quee]

Affiliation: The Fel Empire Model: Destroyer Class Production: Semi-Unique

At semi-unique, this affiliation should probably be more narrowly specified than just the Fel Empire. Alternatively, you could name the individual starships so that we can keep track of them that way.

Hangar: Very Low 2000 Meters: [None: 0 | Very Low: 3 | Low: 4 | Average: 7 | Moderate: 8 | High: 11 | Very High: 15 | Extreme: 18] 2500 Meters: [None: 0 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 5 | Average: 9 | Moderate: 10 | High: 14 | Very High: 18 | Extreme: 22] 3000 Meters: [None: 0 | Very Low: 5 | Low: 6 | Average: 11 | Moderate: 12 | High: 17 | Very High: 21 | Extreme: 26] 3500 Meters: [None: 0 | Very Low: 6 | Low: 7 | Average: 13 | Moderate: 14 | High: 20 | Very High: 24 | Extreme: 30] 4000 Meters: [None: 0 | Very Low: 7 | Low: 8 | Average: 15 | Moderate: 16 | High: 23 | Very High: 27 | Extreme: 34] 4500 Meters: [None: 0 | Very Low: 8 | Low: 9 | Average: 17 | Moderate: 18 | High: 26 | Very High: 30 | Extreme: 38] 5000 Meters: [None: 0 | Very Low: 9 | Low: 10 | Average: 19 | Moderate: 20 | High: 29 | Very High: 33 | Extreme: 42]

This needs to be edited from the template. Very low at this size would be "9" squadrons.

Description: N/A

This needs a small description, which should specifically explain or mention some of the features not talked about in the strengths& weaknesses sections (such as the HIMS device).

 

[grammaticus]

[member="Gir Quee"]

Edited.

 

[Gir Quee]

[member="Toran Fel"], this is a little bit underpowered. If you would like, you can increase one or two ratings.

 

[grammaticus]

[member="Gir Quee"]

Raised armament and production.

 

[Gir Quee]

[member="Toran Fel"], we're overpowered by one rating now.

 

[grammaticus]

[member="Gir Quee"]

Lowered firepower.

 

[Gir Quee]

Awesome. Pending Secondary Approval. Thanks! [member="Jamie Pyne"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Length: 4792 Meters

Production: Minor

The maximum production value for ships from 2000 meters to 5000 meters is limited. Please lower your production to that, or change the size of the ship accordingly.
(Chart for reference, located in our templates page)

 

[grammaticus]

[member="Lily Kuhn"]

Edited

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Approved.