Factory Denied Organic Blaster Pistols

[Emerald]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a generic blaster pistol.
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: Blaster Pistol

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Emerald
• Affiliation: Closed Market
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Mass-Produced
• Material: Biological Materials, Photosynthesis, Force Crystals, Alkahest.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Blaster Pistol
• Size: Small
• Weight: Light
• Ammunition Type: Force Crystals, Solar Energy.
• Ammunition Capacity: Average | 50 (Force Crystal.)
• Effective Range: Personal
• Rate of Fire: High
• Damage Output: Low
• Recoil: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Can fire in fast, sustained volleys due to the barrel construction

STRENGTHS

• Will not overheat due to continuous fire.
• Can't be EMPed.

WEAKNESSES

• Effective range limited due to compact design.
• 50 Shots per Force Crystal.
• 10 shots per Solar Energy Charge.
• Force Nullification would render it useless.

DESCRIPTION

A blaster created by Emerald . This was made by him out of biological materials as opposed to the materials used by most species in conventional blasters. Created by means of Alkahest like techniques applied to Force Crystals, and bio engineering, these blasters were made so they could be be used by those with metal allergies of any kind whatsoever. These were the result of his work.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Under Review

 

[Krass Wyms]

Emerald

Alright lets get started

Production: Mass-Produced

Per factory rules

Generally speaking the more powerful the submission becomes, the less of them there should be. The production range of a submission with alchemy or nanotechnology ranges between Unique and Minor. Please use the history and other parts of the submission to flesh out its power and potency. A Factory Judge is allowed to ask for more depth, if they believe that the submission needs a little bit more work to it.

Anything utilizing the force cannot be mass produced.

Material: Biological Materials, Photosynthesis, Force Crystals, Alkahest.

What are the biological materials being used?

• Ammunition Type: Force Crystals, Solar Energy.
• Ammunition Capacity: Average | 50 (Force Crystal.)

Force crystals and solar energy would be two different types of ammunition. You should have two different capacities listed here.

• 50 Shots per Force Crystal.
• 10 shots per Solar Energy Charge.

An ammo count is not a weakness.

Force Nullification would render it useless.

How does force nullification render solar energy useless?

A blaster created by Emerald . This was made by him out of biological materials as opposed to the materials used by most species in conventional blasters.
Created by means of Alkahest like techniques applied to Force Crystals, and bio engineering,
these blasters were made so they could be be used by those with metal allergies of any kind whatsoever.

Your description is three sentences literally all saying how the guns were made, no details about how they function, how they are used, maintained, given purpose. Based on the lack of any details the description doesn't match the intended purpose or production, power levels and means.

Overall this is going to require substantial work to function at the most basic levels. Force crystals alone are not ammo clips you just change out. Your description needs a large reworking as a description.

DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)

Yuo need to show how it functions, its limitations, fleshing it out as this has ambition but nothing to it. The factory doesn't have word counts as a requirement but this shouldn't have less then 500 words at the least to explain these blasters.

 

[Emerald]

Krass Wyms Archive.

 

[Emerald]

Krass Wyms Archive.

 

[Krass Wyms]

As you wish