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Rain didn’t fall clean on Nar Shaddaa. It dragged itself through layers of traffic and exhaust before ever reaching the lower platforms, thick with residue, warm enough to cling but never comfortable. It gathered along the edges of durasteel walkways, ran in thin streams through seams in the plating, and pooled into shallow mirrors that fractured the city’s neon into something distorted and restless.
The transport hissed as its doors opened, releasing a brief breath of stale, recycled air into something only marginally better.
Emberlyn stepped down with the others.
No one looked at her twice—not really. A passing glance, maybe. A silhouette beneath a rain-darkened poncho. Another traveler, another body moving with purpose through a place that punished hesitation. The fabric shifted with her stride, loose enough to obscure, heavy enough to cling where the rain had already soaked through. Beneath it, the lines of worn overalls and a simple shirt—practical, unremarkable, chosen that way on purpose.
No tools. No visible trade.
Just a woman who looked like she belonged to no one in particular.
The air carried the sharp tang of ozone and overworked circuitry, undercut by something metallic and old. Power bled through everything here—into the lights, the signage, the bones of the city itself. It hummed beneath her feet, a constant vibration threaded through the structure.
Movement flowed around her, not chaotic—structured, in its own way. Patterns. People avoiding eye contact, adjusting paths half a step too early, conversations cut short when proximity shifted. Transactions happening without words. A city that taught its inhabitants how to move before it ever taught them how to survive.
She didn’t stop walking.
The poncho’s edge brushed against her wrist as she adjusted it slightly, more out of habit than need, gaze lifting just enough to take in the nearest stretch of market-lined corridor ahead. Lights flickered where they shouldn’t. A vendor stall running on uneven power. Another patched into a cleaner line—more stable, more deliberate.
Supply differences.
Which meant access.
Which meant cost.
Her pace didn’t change, but her path did—subtle, almost unnoticeable, angling toward a section where the glow was steadier, the noise just a fraction more controlled.
Better parts didn’t advertise themselves.
They hid behind people who knew exactly what they had.
Her boots met the surface with a muted, wet impact—water dispersing outward in shallow ripples that distorted the neon beneath her feet. Not a splash. The rain here was too thick for that. It clung, resisted, turned every step into a measured contact with the city itself.
Another step. Another soft displacement of oil-sheened water.
The rhythm settled quickly—controlled, even—unbothered by the uneven plating beneath her or the subtle give of poorly maintained sections. Nar Shaddaa didn’t reward missteps. It remembered them. The corridor began to open. What had been a narrow artery of transit bled outward into something wider, louder—alive in a different way. A market, if the word still applied. Less structured. Less honest.
A flickering sign overhead sputtered against the rain:
KESTRAL ROW
The letters buzzed unevenly, one corner dimmed where the power feed struggled to hold.
It fit.
Stalls pressed in along both sides of the street—if it could be called that—assembled from mismatched plating, repurposed bulkheads, ship hull fragments welded into place without symmetry or care for aesthetics. Tarps stretched overhead in places, sagging beneath collected rainwater that spilled intermittently in heavy sheets, forcing those below to shift or endure it.
Light fractured everywhere.
Neon signage reflected across the soaked ground in broken bands of color—violet, green, harsh amber—bleeding into one another with every step taken through them. Figures moved through the glow like silhouettes cut from static, faces half-seen, intentions less so.
The sounds layered over each other. Low conversations.
Haggling that never quite rose to shouting.
The distant whine of power tools.
A generator coughing somewhere deeper in the row, its output unstable—cycling too fast, too hot.
Emberlyn slowed.
Not enough to draw attention—just enough to let the environment come to her instead of forcing her way through it. Her head tilted slightly beneath the poncho, just a fraction, as her gaze tracked across the nearest stalls without lingering too long on any single point. Patterns emerged quickly.
Cheap components near the front—mass-produced, worn, resold.
Further in, less visible—items kept off-display, behind counters, under tables, traded through conversation instead of signage.
Power distribution told the rest of the story.
One stall to her left flickered erratically, its lighting stuttering in uneven pulses—draw inconsistent, wiring sloppy. Another, just beyond it, held steady. Clean line. Reinforced feed. Someone there invested in stability.
Or needed it.
Her path adjusted again—subtle, deliberate—carrying her deeper into Kestral Row, toward the steadier glow.
A group passed close on her right, their movement slightly too tight, too coordinated to be coincidence. Not aggressive—just aware. Territory, maybe. Or routine.
She didn’t react.
Didn’t need to.
The city pressed in, but it hadn’t closed yet.
The poncho shifted faintly with her next step, rain tracing along its edge before falling away in thin streams. Beneath it, the outline of her frame moved with quiet efficiency—nothing wasted, nothing uncertain.
Another stall ahead—this one quieter than the rest.
No shouting.
No visible signage.
Just a dim, consistent light… and a figure who wasn’t trying to draw attention.
Better parts didn’t advertise.
They waited.
And for the first time since stepping off the transport—Emberlyn stopped.
Shan
