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 Mr. Wembley! It's happening again!(feedback Caltin 2.0)

Be careful what you wish for.
Back in December ( I think) I looked for some big guy feedback. Well, I'm looking to get into the Nanowrimo contest in Novmber. So I want to get things going. So that means refocusing on him. Now, I'm not looking for breakfast cereal critiques. I mean I welcome any good thing you have to say, but I welcome the room for improvements" too. There was a long time(even here) where I could say to myself "time for a big guy post" and in less than 5 minutes be posting a well thought out piece. I want to get back to that.
 

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