Approved Tech M924 Grenade Launcher

[Talon Aegis]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: An automatic grenade launcher for the few
• Image Source: https://halo.fandom.com/wiki/MG460_Automatic_Grenade_Launcher
• Canon Link: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Talon Richwood
• Affiliation:

Talon Richwood
Adenn Kyramud (x2, he is assigning people it)

• Model: Juggernaut Launcher
• Modularity: Removeable sight, and grenades can be changed
• Production: Semi-Unique
• Material:

Cortosis
Beskar
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Grenade Launcher
• Size: Very Large
• Weight: Very Heavy
• Ammunition Type: Grenades
• Ammunition Capacity: 15
• 
  Reload Speed: Average
• Effective Range: Average
• Rate of Fire: Very High
• Stopping Power: Extreme
• Recoil: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

Detonator

Strengths:

• The Grenades have two modes, Controlled detonation (Hold trigger, and release) and grenade (Normal grenade launcher)
• EMP effect with each grenade (Controlled Detonation)
• Fast Rate of fire, with big magazines
• High stopping power

Weaknesses:

• Grenades have thin casing to fit many in there, meaning if shot they will explode
• Very Heavy Large
• High Recoil

DESCRIPTION
The M924 Grenade Launcher is a high powered grenade launcher that uses an EMP effect to disable vehicles. It has been overshadowed by other weapons with high damage, this is considered a very unique weapon in its own right. The reason few exist, they were too costly to produce many, so Talon made two and scrapped the idea.

 

[Runi Verin]

Under Review.

 

[Runi Verin]

[member="Talon Richwood"]

DESCRIPTION The M924 Grenade Launcher is a high powered grenade launcher that uses an EMP effect to disable vehicles. The explosions can fire through an unshielded 3 feet of Durasteel.

I'm afraid this sentence is tripping you up this time around. You're basically dictating damage at this point, which isn't something we can allow to pass in the factory.

Spoiler

DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)

As you can see from under the spoiler, we actually ask members to provide a decent paragraph around powerful submissions. Extreme rating on the stopping power and a very high rate of fire would definitely qualify this weapon there. Not asking for War & Peace here, but please can you beef it up and flesh out accordingly as it is very bare bones at the moment.

 

[Talon Aegis]

[member="Runi Verin"] Updated

 

[Runi Verin]

[member="Talon Richwood"]

It was made to be able to tare down armies for disabling vehicles and taking out large groups with a single shot.

Okay, yeah, that's... Uh, still calling damage there, chief. I was requesting more about the overall functionality of the weapon. That sentence is even less likely to make this weapon pass than the first.

I recommend looking at similar weapon submissions already approved within the factory if you need inspiration.

 

[Talon Aegis]

completed the edits, Runi Verin

 

[Runi Verin]

Talon Richwood

It was made to be able to tare down armies for disabling vehicles and taking out large groups with a single shot.

Again, this submission cannot be approved with this sentence. Please remove it.

 

[Talon Aegis]

Runi Verin Done, thanks

 

[Runi Verin]

Approved.