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Approved Tech Lu's Lobotomizer

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Lu Talbahar
  • Model: na
  • Affiliation: Lu Talbahar
  • Modularity: no
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Beskar
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: blade
  • Size: One-handed
  • Length: .3 meters
  • Weight: 3kg
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • the blade is a razor sharp leaf shape blade made of beskar.
Strengths:
  • lightsaber resistant
  • very sharp
Weaknesses:
  • offers little range due to being fixed to wrist
  • little flexibility as a result it can be snapped
DESCRIPTION
a Baskad blade fixed in to Lu's cybernetic arm. the blade was created as a stabbing weapon as well as a tool.
the blade is fitted in her arm and can be " popped "at will.
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the blade is made of Beskar therefor it is saber resistant.
it is intended as an enhancement to hand to hand combat and is intended to be used like a Scissor and used like a punch.
 
Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.
 
[member="Lu Talbahar"]

Couple of issues before we can get this approved.



Lu Talbahar said:
Material: Void steel
Void Stone: With two or more characters that your character does not already know, get trapped in Otherspace by a hyperdrive accident and escape. OR: Perform a mining operation, a raid, an excavation, or steal to obtain small amounts of Void Stone from any of the following planets: Kayri, Elrood, or Caeliar. As with all restricted materials, this objective applies to the use of derivative materials (such as voidsteel or Velokite). Note that derivative materials often have specific affiliations.
  • If you wish to use Voidsteel, you'll need to do the listed RM mission for it.
  • Voidsteel is also limited – Affiliation: Mandalorians (PCs only) – and your character is a member of the Galactic Alliance, not the Mandalorians.


Lu Talbahar said:
he blade is a razor sharp leaf shape blade made of a mic or voidstone and beskar.
  • Here you mention beskar, which isn't listed under Materials. This also presents us with the second big issue:

    Cira said:
    6. Only in rare instances are two restricted materials allowed per submission, but it's all dependent on intent. New alloys created by blending two or more Restricted Materials are not allowed.
  • As the beskar here would bypass the 'weakness' of Voidsteel as a material, this isn't going to work. Pick either beskar or voidsteel, and edit the other material out of the submission.


Lu Talbahar said:
Length: .6 meters

Lu Talbahar said:
the blade is fitted in her arm and can be " popped "at will.
  • An average forearm is about half the length of the blade you want. Even when 'sheathed', half of this blade would still be sticking out.

Please address the above issues, and then we can move on with the judgment.
 
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