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Lorale's Garage, Kascalion's Attic

The Devil | Kavar Lok Kas'Oni
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: [ State why you are making this submission and what purpose it will fulfill in RP. ]
  • ​Image Credit: [ Link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help. ]
  • Canon: [ Is this a canon species? If yes, link to the original species wiki here, if no simply put N/A. ]
  • Links: [ Provide links to any relevant threads, characters, companies, locations, equipment, etc here. ]
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Aegirdi
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Origins: [ This can be a planet (canon or Chaos canon sub), a company's lab, a region of space, extra-galactic, etc. Provide a link if applicable. ]
  • Average Lifespan: [ In standard years. An average age or range is required. ]
  • Estimated Population: [ Unique (Only One Member), Semi-Unique (An extremely small number, first or last of their kind), Rare (A few groups, often limited to a single world), Planetary (A Large Concentration on a single world or system, rarely found off-world), Scattered (Smaller groups or individuals found in many places around the galaxy), Inter-Planetary (Multiple larger populations found within numerous star systems), Common (Can be found in most any space-worthy colony around the galaxy)- Optional: include a population number. ]
  • Description: [ Provide a short paragraph that describes this species at a glance. More in-depth descriptions can be added in distinctions below. ]
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: [ Type of atmosphere or medium it breathes. ]
  • Average Height of Adults: [ In metric. ]
  • Average Length of Adults: [ In metric. If not applicable put N/A. ]
  • Skin color: [ Their commons skin colors. ]
  • Hair color: [ Their common hair colors, if any. ]
  • Distinctions: [ Describe the unique physical traits that define what they are and set them apart from more common species like humans. Be sure to include any differences between male and female, as well variations between differing regional groups if any, and characteristics that denote a matured or aging specimen. ]
  • Races: [ Not subspecies, distinct cultural or physical races (aka, just like human races). ]
  • Force Sensitivity: [ Force Dead (members of this species are Force Dead with the bonuses and drawbacks inherent to that. Ex. Yuuzhan Vong.), Non-Sensitive (no members of the species are FS), Rare (very few members are FS. Ex. Hutts), Low (Some members are, but many are not), Standard (Some are, some are not, it is neither common nor uncommon), High (Many of its members are sensitive to the Force. Ex Humans, Twi’leks, etc), All (Every single member is born sensitive to the Force, but lack training. Ex. Neti, Vahla). For Force Dead and All Force Sensitive Species, see the Species Rules for guidelines before submitting. ]
Strengths:
  • [ Provide, in list format, some strengths of this submission. 2 recommended. ]
Weaknesses:
  • [ Provide, in list format, some weaknesses of this submission. 2 recommended. ]
CULTURE
  • Diet: [ Herbivore, Omnivore, Carnivore, Other (please explain). Note down common foods and preferences, what is poisonous, etc. ]
  • Communication: [ How do they communicate? A spoken language (if so, tell us which), through barks and yips, body language, telepathy, etc. ]
  • Technology level: [ Describe their societal technology level if it differs from Galactic Standard. ]
  • Religion/Beliefs: [ If this species has a prominent religion or set of beliefs, describe them here. ]
  • General behavior: [ Describe general behaviors such as: family life, values, how they raise their young, how they find mates, how they interact with the world and other species around them. Do they hunt? Do they build? Are they inventors? Are they explorers? Are they nocturnal or diurnal? Do they attend schools? Etc, etc. ]
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
[ Include a description of the species history here. If your species is genetically engineered or Sithspawn please describe the process through which they were created, by who, and why. Explain the various challenges encountered during their creation. Most galactic species will be quite old - include major events relevant to the species in how they evolved and developed into what they are today where appropriate. Including Chaos canon events, where they impacted the history of this species, is a plus. ]
 
The Devil | Kavar Lok Kas'Oni
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: [ Describe the plan for your planet. NOTE: This section alone can have your planet dismissed. Planets created on a whim or for purposes to undermine the integrity of Star Wars will not be approved. ]
  • ​Image Credit: [ Link to where you found the images, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help. ]
  • Canon: [ Is this a canon planet? If yes, link to the original planet wiki here, if no simply put N/A. All canon planet submissions must be tagged "Canon" in Topic Tags. ]
  • Links: [ Provide links to any relevant development threads, characters, companies, locations, etc here. ]
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Aegir
  • Demonym: [ What a resident of this planet would be called. Ex. Residents of Coruscant are called Coruscanti. ]
  • Region: [ Link the region this system resides or describe its location relative to local star systems on the map. You can pick from the following: Deep Core, Core World, Colonie, Inner Rim, Expansion Region, Mid Rim, Outer Rim Territories, Tingel Arm, Wild Space. Unknown Regions. ]
  • System Name: [ Example: Abrion, Herrik. ]
  • System Features: [ Here you may list suns, moons, other planets, important asteroid belts, spatial anomalies, or other features of the star system. You may also include orbital position, rotational period (length of day), and orbital period (days in a year) in this section. if you have submitted Astronomical Objects for this system, you may link them here, and if you would like to expand on the system in more detail, you may use that template to do it at your leisure. ]
  • Location: [ This can be coordinates based on the old map, a screen shot of the hex on the map, or 'in X planet's hex' where X is an existing planet on the map. ]
  • Major Imports: [ What the planet frequently buys from other planets. Common materials and ores should just be listed (Ex. Durasteel ore), while anything special or rare should be linked. ]
  • Major Exports: [ What does the planet produce and bring to the galaxy, note that not all planets have to produce things. They can be barren or have riches yet to be discovered. Common materials and ores should just be listed (Ex. Durasteel ore), while anything special or rare should be linked. ]
  • Unexploited Resources: [ Does this planet have resources that are not yet utilized by the population? Common materials and ores should just be listed (Ex. Durasteel ore), while anything special or rare should be linked. ]
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: [ Standard is Earth-like. Use terms such as "Twice Standard" to describe other types of gravity. ]
  • Climate: [ Temperate is Earth-like. Make notes of anything substantially different yet similar to Temperate. Add Controlled for when most of the climate is controlled by technology. Use words such as Arid or Frozen to describe single biome worlds. ]
  • Primary Terrain: [ Significant types of terrain that can easily be found. Examples: Grassland, Mountains, Oceans, Tundras, Forests, Artificial, Synthetic, etc. Multiple can be used. ]
  • Atmosphere: [ Choose one of the following: Type I, Type II, Type III, or Type IV. Full descriptions of each can be found on the Wiki here. ]
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: [ What is the name of the planet’s capital? ]
  • Planetary Features: [ What are interesting artificial features of the planet? Ruins, interconnected cities, floating urban platforms. This field is used to sketch out artificial features, adding RP opportunities, but without the need for specific details like in the the major locations field. You can also include if the planet is primarily Wild, Rural, Suburban, Urban, or a Mix. ]
  • Major Locations: [ What are the major locations on your world? Include an explanation on each. ]
  • Force Nexus (Optional): [ If you wish to add a Force nexus (light, neutral, or dark), you are required to justify it through your submission and history. ]
    Intent: [ Provide the reasoning and motive for this force nexus. A request for a force nexus may be denied on this premise alone. ]
    Nexus Name: [ Name of the nexus if applicable. ]
  • Nexus Alignment: [ Light, Dark, Neutral, Other (explain). ]
  • Size: [ Small (A small location on a world much like a grove or oasis. Ex. Dark Grove), Medium (A moderately sized area, large compounds, lake, etc Ex. Great Temple), Large (A location that spans a large area, a valley, mountain ranges, etc. Ex. Valley of the Jedi). Planetary (Influences everything on the planet. Ex. Byss). ]
  • Strength: [ How strong is the Nexus? How much influence does it exert on those near it? Weaker nexus are easier to overlook, while stronger ones are impossible to miss. Stronger Nexus will be more closely scrutinized for balance and fairness during judging. Choose one: Weak (A weak influence on the area and the people on it. A fragile nexus that can potentially be altered by people or events, i.e. a lightside nexus could be corrupted by atrocity or a dark side nexus cleansed by the actions of a mass of Jedi.), Moderate (A moderate influence on the area and the people on it. Could be altered with a great enough event.), Strong (A strong influence on the area and the people on it. Powerful enough to be renewed in the event of a great cataclysm, and unlikely to be altered.) ]
  • Accessibility: [ For Small, Medium, or Large Nexus only. Describe logistical information on how easy it is to find/access this location. Is it hidden? Is it isolated from society or is it in the middle of civilization? Is it guarded? Open to the public or private access only? Keep in mind that the Strength of the Nexus above must be reflected in this field. ]
  • Effects: [ What sort of effects does this Nexus confer? An aura of fear? Reinvigorating those on the world? Perhaps it induced tricks of the mind, to test the visitors. These effects can be positive, neutral, or negative, and should reflect the nature and history of the Nexus. ]

POPULATION
  • Native Species: [ Species that have always lived there. Links to uncommon species are appreciated, but not required. ]
  • Immigrated Species: [ Immigrant species with significant populations. Links to uncommon species are appreciated but not required. ]
  • Population: [ Choose from: Uninhabited, Insignificant, Sparse, Moderate, Heavy, Crowded - Optional: include a population number. ]
  • Demographics: [ Please describe the population assortment found on this planet. Is it primarily human inhabitants with only a small percentage of aliens? Or perhaps the other way around? Is this a place open to all kinds of races or is there a strong theme of racism and xenophobia? Specific race percentages are welcome but not required. ]
  • Primary Languages: [ Include any languages primarily spoken on this planet. Galactic Basic is an example of a language speaking across the Galaxy. ]
  • Culture: [ General overview of the inhabitant's behaviors. This should include information about daily life, society, arts, sports, religion. ]
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: [ Federal Republic would describe a government such as the United States. Other general terms can be used. ]
  • Affiliation: [ Does this planet fall under the rule of a certain person or faction? Company or group? Link any relevant characters, faction pages, or groups. ]
  • Wealth: [ Poor, Low, Medium, High, Wealthy. Describe, briefly, why. ]
  • Stability: [ Low, Medium, High. Are there major issues causing unrest? Is this a planet of chaos or one of peaceful law abiding citizens? Is it dangerous for travelers to visit or are you safe as an outsider? Describe the general feel and theme of any overarching government or rulers/leaders in this city. ]
  • Freedom & Oppression: [ Describe the atmosphere of freedom on this planet. Are the people fairly free or is oppression of society and commerce heavy? Does it have a dictatorial ruler? Is fear of the ruling body prevalent? Relaxed and open? Is anything unusual illegal or permitted? ]
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: [ Describe the military capabilities of this planet. Is it completely demilitarized? A fortress world complete with heavy defenses? A space-faring world with a substantial navy? Is it a hive of scum and villainy with no discernible defense structure other than what it's inhabitants have to offer? Or maybe due to low tech the people here are still in the bronze age. ]
  • Technology: [ A description of how technologically advanced the planet is relative to the galaxy. If there is nothing of note, simply put ‘Galactic Standard’. ]
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
[ Include a history of the planet here. Be sure to cover the following information:
How was the planet discovered? How was planet settled? When was it settled? Why was it settled? What major events specific to the planet helped shape its inhabitants to what they are today? If there is a Nexus, how did it come about and how did it influence the history of the planet?

Remember that these custom planets may be submitted the map for the community to enjoy. The more background you set down, the more clearly others will be able to understand your view of your creation. ]
 
The Devil | Kavar Lok Kas'Oni
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: [ State why you are making this submission and what purpose it will fulfill in RP. ]
  • ​Image Credit: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/wnLOw
  • Role: [ Is she your character's daughter? Is he your squad's sniper, the man you trust on overwatch? Is she your longtime pilot and occasional lover? Are they the Force ghost who appears to give you cryptic guidance? Is he your mortal enemy? Did she put a bounty on your head? Explain the role this NPC will play. ]
  • Links: [ Provide links to any relevant threads, characters, companies, locations, equipment, etc here. ]
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: [ Please keep it sensible. ]
  • Force Sensitivity: [ Choose from: Force Dead, Non-Force User, Untrained Force Sensitive, Apprentice/Padawan, Knight, Master. ]
  • Species: [ Remember to consult the Banned Species List, and be very careful about how you use banned species which are allowed to be NPC'ed. Provide a link to the species. ]
  • Appearance: [ Describe the NPC. Height and build? Any distinguishing marks? Do they show their age? What do they usually wear? ]
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Ja'tel Heznya'st
  • Loyalties: [ Faction affiliation? Is he an NPC companion for a certain character? Is she part of a specific military unit? Only themselves? Link any relevant characters, faction pages, or groups. ]
  • Wealth: [ How wealthy are they? Where does that wealth come from? Are they stakeholders in existing corporations? If so, link to them. ]
  • Notable Possessions: [ Describe or link any notable possessions they might own. ]
  • Skills: [ What skills does this NPC have? Are they a pilot, a farmer, a mechanic? Do they paint or knit in their free time? For Force users if they have any special abilities that are rare list them here. Be reasonable. ]
  • Personality: [ Describe the NPC’s personality. Acerbic? Friendly? Ditzy? Annoyingly calm and superior? What about mannerisms or habits? ]
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: [ Military blaster rifle? Toy lightsaber? Bioweapons? Wits? Charm? The Force? ]
  • Combat Function: [ Combat is difficult to avoid -- after all, this is Chaos. Should your NPC wind up in combat, what would they be good at? How would they work alongside you, or would they be a liability? Remember: An NPC is weaker than a PC of an equivalent level, and will not match them in power, skills, or abilities. ]
Strengths:
  • [ Provide, in list format, some strengths of this submission. 2 recommended. ]
Weaknesses:
  • [ Provide, in list format, some weaknesses of this submission. 2 recommended. ]
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
[ Include a description of the NPC's history here. ]
 
The Devil | Kavar Lok Kas'Oni
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: [ State why you are making this submission and what purpose it will fulfill in RP. ]
  • Image Credit: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/stormtrooper-elite-concept
  • Role: [ Is this unit serving as protective detail to your character? Is it a portion of the rank and file of your faction? Is it a strike team for your company? Explain the IC role this unit will fulfill. ]
  • Links: [ Provide links to any relevant threads, characters, companies, locations, etc here. ]
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: The Darkwolves
  • Affiliation: [ Who is this unit loyal too? Usually a faction, company, or character. Link any relevant character bios, faction pages, or groups. ]
  • Classification: [ What type of unit is this? Choices include, but are not limited to: Conscript, Infantry, Engineers, Recon, Artillery, Fighter Pilots, Black Ops, etc. ]
  • Equipment: [ If your unit possesses any specialty equipment (weapons, armor, combat tools, star fighters, landing ships, etc.) list them and provide links here. Check the table below for production level and affiliation of any Factory submissions based on the unit's size and availability- those that are inappropriate will need to be changed. The unit may use equipment of the listed production or higher production values, but not lower. ]
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  • Description: [ Give a brief overview of this combat unit. Notable appearance, if they have a unit emblem, general mindset and behavior, etc. ]
COMBAT INFORMATION: The combination of Unit Size and Availability below is the indicator of how numerous your unit is. Stormtroopers for instance would be considered Large/Common, while Rogue Squadron would be a Small/Unique unit. Majority Force User Units are prohibited from being Common or Large. The stronger and more specialized your unit is (FU or NFU), the smaller and less common it should be.
  • Unit Size: [ This is how many individuals make up a single unit. Choose from Small (each unit is small, comprising a dozen members or less), Medium (moderately sized units, often specialized), Large (many individuals, often compromising the rank and file). ]
  • Unit Availability: [ This is how many units are available for deployment. Choose from Unique (only one), Rare (very few, difficult to replace, may have long training times), Uncommon (some, replaceable, enough to support), Common (many, easy to replace, likely with more always in training). ]
  • Unit Experience: [ How experienced is this unit? Choose from Rabble, Recruit, Trained, Veteran, Elite. Veteran and Elite are more appropriate to smaller, less common units with lower casualty rates than the rank and file, while Trained and lower are appropriate for larger, more common units with higher replacement needs. You are encouraged to update the units, as they grow through RP in experience, through the submission modification thread. ]
  • Combat Function: [ Describe this unit’s general function in combat. Put things like tactics, habits, goals, how they interact with other parts of a larger army, do they need support or are they the support, etc. ]
Strengths:
  • [ Provide, in list format, some strengths of this submission. 2 recommended. ]
Weaknesses:
  • [ Provide, in list format, some weaknesses of this submission. 2 recommended. ]
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
[ Include a description of the unit’s history here. How they were formed and by whom, past noteworthy battles, moral affecting defeats, where they are stationed if applicable, etc. ]
 
The Devil | Kavar Lok Kas'Oni
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To detail the armor of the Lion Guard and revamp an old submission for wider use.
  • Image Source: (Please link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help.)
  • Canon Link: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/AV-1A_Assault_Armor
  • Primary Source: (X)
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Kascalion Giedfield, Dotouki Engineers
  • Affiliation: The Lion Guard
  • Model: The Armor of Lions
  • Modularity: No

  • Production: Semi-Unique
  • Material: Hellsteel, Heavensteel, Cortosis
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multipurpose Black Ops Power Armor
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Resistances
- Blasters- Very High
- Kinetic: Very High
- Lightsabers: Average
- Sonic: Very Low
- EMP/ION: Very Low
- Elemental: Average
- Electric: Very Low
- Force: Average
- Acid: Average
- Pressure: High
- Radiation: Average
- Heat: High
- Cold: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

  • Personal Environmental Control Systems

  • Advanced Combat and Command Systems

  • Long-Range Visual and Auditorial Systems

  • Personal Universal Translator

  • Automated Medical System

  • Cortosis Gauntlets
Strengths:
  • Resistances: Being made out of the strongest materials the Koignalteth and Noxian smiths can procure from their domain, the Armor of Lions boasts a great deal of resistance to physical damage and some non-physical damages, making it one of the best suits of armor the Band of Champions will see on the field of battle.

  • Personal Environment Suit: This suit possesses a full suite of life-support functions for operation in hostile environments, an automated medical system to provide some level of first aid to a wounded wearer and a highly advanced and fully integrated tactical targeting and threat analysis system.

  • Cortosis Gauntlets:
Weaknesses:
  • Battery Operated: The armor, like its parent model, runs off an advanced series of large chargeable battery packs located in the abdomen, lower back, and backpack of the armor as well as emergency packs located in the forearms and pauldrons. However, due to the vast number of systems that can be run at once, the batteries can drain at an astonishing rate, something opponents fighting on the defensive can use against the wearers.
  • Weakness to EMPs, ION blasts, Sonic Energy, and Electricity: Similarly to the Sith suits of old, such as Darth Vader’s, this armor is highly vulnerable to persistent attacks from EMP, ION, Sonic, and Electric sources, resulting in the internal systems failing and even offering the potential of outright injury or death. This is due to the metals used in the construction of the armor having great resistance to physical damage and some non-physical damage, but also being highly conductive for energy, making it vulnerable to such forms of attack.
DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)
 
The Devil | Kavar Lok Kas'Oni
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: (Example: 'A personal weapon for Darth Scabious' or 'an advanced armored personnel carrier for the Republic')
  • Image Source: (Please link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help.)
  • Canon Link: (Please link the canon link if applicable canon item.)
  • Primary Source: (Please link and cite the sources which you are modifying for your use in your submission.)
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: (Kuat Drive Yards, BlasTech Industries, [Character Name], etc.)
  • Affiliation: (Individual Character Name (an individual PC/NPC who is permitted to use this item), Company Name(s) (Companies authorised to use this submission), Faction Name(s) (Factions authorised to use this submission, Closed-Market (Any character can use this if they have explicit permission through, for example, a marketplace purchase), Open-Market (May be used by any character without permission from the Manufacturer), other potential options include a submitted NPC unit, or another general organisation/group.)
  • Model: Sword of Storms
  • Modularity: (Can components of this submission be swapped out for other components? Is it especially easy to modify? For most submissions, put 'No'.)

  • Production: The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (A single small unit, squad, or squadron), Limited (Only one small group of characters. IE: Small task force, not entire factions.), Minor (Large groups of characters. (IE: Multiple factions, companies, or groups.), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.) Characters refer to NPCs & PCs.
  • Material: (What is it made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable, to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel, blaster components.')
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: (Dagger, Sword, Whip, etc.)
  • Size: (Please choose a size between Very Small, Small, Average, Large, Very Large and Extreme.)
  • Weight: (Please choose a weight between Very Light, Light, Average, Heavy, Very Heavy and Extreme.)
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • (Detail briefly in a list format actual contents of the known abilities, special features, qualities of note, etc. - If these are notable enough to be strengths, please add them to strengths. )
Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)
 

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