Loonion Music+ INC.

[Lusko Loonion]

Corporation Name:[SIZE=10.5pt] Loonion Music+ INC.[/SIZE]


[SIZE=10.5pt]Headquarters:[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt] Pilot's Guild headquarter- Ylix[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Locations:[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt] Just Ylix. One Factory. Lusko's hut.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Operations[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: -Instruments[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt] ​[/SIZE]
-Ships
[SIZE=10.5pt]Rationale[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: Lusko Loonion started this company from scratch. It began as a small hut and eventually turned into a full scale factory following winning a huge bet. Lusko has put all his life into this factory. He secured this bet from a casino in Mos Espa a few years back. Lusko asked the for the help of his father, but he died before the company was even laid out. The factory took two years to build because of some minor delays. These delays were result of a fire fight between the workers and some space pirates. The pirates were eventually wiped out, but not without damage to the factory. Business has started out strong and has only gotten better. The plan is to make this company galaxy wide one day.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Tier[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: 2, little influence but a decent sized factory. Flutes are hand made by Lusko himself so they are as authentic as possible.[/SIZE]
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[SIZE=10.5pt]Description[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: LM+ INC is designed to produce musical instruments but occasionally me make guns and sleek stealth ships. This explains the big facility in which we work. All Chindinkalu flutes are handcrafted by Lusko himself in order to assure it is authentic as possible. This is not a criminal organization, but we make ships for those with deep pockets. This company will not support criminals, but they do provide all kinds of weaponry such as rifles and ships. The mission statement is to provide the best experience with these products. With that being said, specialty items may be requested. These items take longer to make but are more valuable. We hope you enjoy LMI![/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Subsidiaries[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: None at this time[/SIZE]

Primary Source: not canon

 

[Hailyn]

RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review

Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Lusko Loonion]

thanks

 

[Hailyn]

Operations: We make instruments such Chindinkalu flutes and Red Ball Organs. We also make ships and other things.........

This should be in list format, here's an example:

• Starships, Musical Instruments

Keep in mind a tier 2 company should only have around 2 operations, which you currently list.

Rationale: Lusko Loonion started this company from scratch. It began as a small hut and eventually turned into a full scale factory following winning a huge bet.

As a tier 2 company I'll need this lengthened to at least a paragraph of detail.

Description: LM+ INC is designed to produce musical instruments but occasionally me make guns and sleek stealth ships. This explains the big facility in which we work. All Chindinkalu flutes are handcrafted by Lusko himself in order to assure it is authentic as possible. This is not a criminal organization, but we make ships for those with deep pockets.

As with the rationale, I need this expanded.

Headquarters: Pilot's Guild headquarter- Ylix
Locations: Just Ylix. One Factory.

As a tier 2 you can have two to three locations (including headquarters), so you may choose more locations if you'd like.

 

[Lusko Loonion]

done
[member="Bianca"]

 

[Lusko Loonion]

Hello...
[member="Bianca"]
[member="Draco Vereen"]
[member="Reshmar"]

 

[Hailyn]

[member="Lusko Loonion"]
I will be with you shortly, please do not bump submissions - I work the majority of the day time.

 

[Hailyn]

[member="Lusko Loonion"]
A tier 2 company should only have 2 operations, or a third - very closely related - operation. Starships, guns, and instruments + custom ordered specialty products are a bit too much, please tone down the amount of operations to 2.

 

[Lusko Loonion]

done, my sincere apologies. I thought you were ignoring it. I was inconsiderate. Again my apologies.

 

[Hailyn]

This company will not support criminals, but they do provide all kinds of weaponry.

This still references a removed operation, please alter it.

 

[Lusko Loonion]

Done [member="Bianca"] but not sure what you meant.

 

[Hailyn]

<p>Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Jacobs"]</p>

 

[Cira]

Approved.