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Logan Grey's Claws

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION



  • Intent: To sub Logan Grey claws for use
  • Image Source: here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Logan Grey
  • Model: N/A
  • Affiliation: Logan Grey
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Bone-marrow, Phrik coating
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Claws
  • Size: Dual Weild
  • Length: 26 cm
  • Weight: 4kg
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Retractable
  • Lightsaber Resistant
  • Blaster Resistant
DETAILED SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Retractable: The claws that have been build into his hands have been made so that he can retract them whenever he wants to and also unsheathe them as well.
  • Lightsaber Resistant: Due to its Phrik Coating the claws are resistant to lightsaber attacks.
  • Blaster Resistant: Due to its Phrik Coating the claws are resistant to blaster shots.

Strengths:
  • Phrik Coating: The Phrik Coating allows it to have extreme penetration in its attacks causing it to go through objects easier.
  • Resistant: The Phrik Coating gives it resistance to lightsabers and blaster shots.
  • Retractable: The claws are retractable allowing for easy concealment.
Weaknesses :
  • Permanant: Due to the claws being in the skin and connected to the body it is almost impossible to remove, if attempted the user would die of blood loss.
  • Thickness: The blades aren't that thick causing it to be unreliable to use to absorb or deflect a blaster shot.
  • Claws: They're claws and are very unconventional to sue in combat, causing unique form of style requiring the user to be in great physical shape.
  • Activation: To get the claws to retract or unsheathe the user has to do a very specific hand motion to get them to the action.
DESCRIPTION
Experiment X, also known as Logan Grey was implemented with these claws due to his uniqueness of his race. Being that he is Firrerreo he has a quick healing attribute that helped him heal faster then the damage could be done while putting the claws in. Inside his hand the claws have a retractile system, the base of the claws read his certain hand motion that will then activate the claws and then will retract when the exit motion is given.


The Claws activate in the matter of seconds allowing the user quick and efficient way of killing. The designers for this system had the unique idea after seeing animals in the wild and wanted to see the implementation on a humanoid species. After long months of attempting to find a subject they found Logan Grey and his quick-healing abilities.
 
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So after a bit of discussion and thought, sadly I'm going to have to deny this for the following reasons :

  • Firrerreo have quick healing abilities. Minor wounds (like a scratch or cut) will heal in minutes. Major wounds would be a few hours to several hours. Claws entering in and out of the skin would be a major wound. In the hours of you trying to heal yourself you couldn't fight, walk around ,etc. Essentially you'll be bleeding out.Even an extended use (battle) you'd be bleeding everywhere.
  • The claws would constantly be cutting your character, thus in constant extreme pain. Firrerreo are still able to feel pain in an extreme amount.
  • Constant cutting of nerve endings after healing - would the implants be able to work after extended use? I'm sure Firrerreo have limits of healing.


I would highly, highly recommend to make these into gauntlets/bracers. If you feel my decision is unfair, please submit this for a second chance.
 
This submission has been denied and moved to the Archives.

You may request a Second Chance within the Factory Discussion Forum and tag Cira for review.

Thank you!
 

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