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Keltach Weaponry

Corporation Name: Keltach Weaponry

Headquarters: Correlia

Locations: Correlia

Operations: weapons/armor manufacturer

Rationale: Jai inherited this company from his great great grandfather, Tethrak Katan on the occasion of his incineration by bounty hunter Kallum Tesk. Tethrak won this company in a sabacc game with notorious smuggler and gambler Tiros Fell. it has been neglected somewhat since Jai's induction into the Jedi Order, but has recently been renewed to its former state, a correlian-wide arms factory. The business has slightly been increasing in size over the last year or so, but will most likely remain a smaller company. Jai has been struggling to keep the business intact, creating new, more efficient weaponry, lighter armor, and better ammunition.

Tier: 2

Description: This company isn't very restricted, as they service all business transactions. Keltach is a Mandalorian-owned company, so of course we offer discounts to Mandalorians. Any deals on armor/weapons are all transacted legally. Also, every rotation, Keltach makes donations of 10% of their profit to the Jedi order. This agreement keeps them in good standing with Jedi, but does not restrict them from doing service to other factions as well. It has been rumored that Keltach does business with Hutts, but that's yet to be confirmed.

Subsidiaries: N/A

Parent Corporation: N/A

Primary Source: N/A
 
RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
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Hi [member="Jai Katan"]! I will be reviewing this submission.
  • You need to have at least one location (Even if it is the same as the headquarters.)
  • Please expand on the rationale a bit more.
  • Please expand on the description a bit more.
 
[member="Jai Katan"]

Thanks for updating the locations :) The rationale & description have a factory rule requiring a minimum of five sentences per section. Would you mind increasing those two a bit more?
 

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