K.B Kolbacca (Assault Ship)

[Kolbacca]

Intent: Personal protection and travel.

Image Source: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=292004

Canon Link: N/A

Restricted Missions: N/A

Primary Source: N/A

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Manufacturer: Space Pirates

Model: Quad Turbothruster

Affiliation: Kolbacca

Production: Unique

Material: Ultrachrome, Farium, Durasteel

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Classification: Assult

Length: 200 Meters

Width: 75 Meters

Armament: High

Defences: High

Hangar: 1

Maneuverability Rating: Low

Speed Rating: Average

Hyperdrive Class: Very Fast

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Features:

* Prototype cloaking device that was used on the Stealthship made from the republic that goes invisable to the eye and sensors you need to turn off shields and weapon systems to go in.
* 1 HR-lO4 Ion Railgun
* 12 SW-8 Ion Cannons 2 Front, 2 Back, 4 Each Side
* 4 LC-9 Thermite Torpedo launchers 2 each side
* 2 Energy Torpedo launchers 1 each side
* 2 KX-4 Laser cannons 1 back and 1 front
* Ray Shield generator
* 49-v99 Deflector shields


Strengths:

* Super Stealthy
* Good at combat

Weaknesses:

* Very vulnerable when in cloak mode
* Burns a lot of fuel and energy.

 

[Gir Quee]

Under Review.

 

[Gir Quee]

Welcome to the Factory.

Material: Ultrachrome,

We treat Ultrachrome as a restricted material because it can be quite powerful. You can either do a restricted materials mission to obtain this, or change this to a different material.

Length: 200 Meters Width: 75 Meters Armament: High

It looks like we're missing the "Height" field in here.

Armament: High Defences: High Hangar: 1 Maneuverability Rating: Low Speed Rating: Average

These ratings a little high even at unique production. If you would drop two ratings from wherever you'd like within the design (Armament "High" to "Moderate", etc), we should be good to go.

Features: * Prototype cloaking device that was used on the Stealthship made from the republic that goes invisable to the eye and sensors you need to turn off shields and weapon systems to go in. * 1 HR-lO4 Ion Railgun * 12 SW-8 Ion Cannons 2 Front, 2 Back, 4 Each Side * 4 LC-9 Thermite Torpedo launchers 2 each side * 2 Energy Torpedo launchers 1 each side * 2 KX-4 Laser cannons 1 back and 1 front * Ray Shield generator * 49-v99 Deflector shields

Please separate this area into "Standard Features" and "Advanced Systems" per the template. If you're able to hyperlink these to wookieepedia articles, I also recommend that.

* Prototype cloaking device that was used on the Stealthship made from the republic that goes invisable to the eye and sensors you need to turn off shields and weapon systems to go in.

* Very vulnerable when in cloak mode

The cloaking device could use some more expansion in terms of detail, especially in how this ship managed to get a one-of-a kind technology that is almost a thousand years old.

Lastly, we're missing the description field:

Description: (Describing your submission's history is optional. Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc.. There is no requirement for amount of words here so long as you meet the minimum requirements for your advanced systems.)

 

[Kolbacca]

Would you be able to just delete it i would have to pretty much make a new ship its not worth

[member="Gir Quee"]

 

[Gir Quee]

Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag [member="Jamie Pyne"], [member="Nadja Keto"], or [member="Taryc Ap'Irae"]