Approved Tech Jake's Sword

[Jake Ateris]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Give Jake his sword.
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Jake Ateris
• Affiliation: Jake Ateris
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Unique
• Material: Durasteel and Titanium

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Sword
• Size: Very Large
• Weight: Extremely Heavy

SPECIAL FEATURES

• N/A

STRENGTHS

• Sturdy: The sword is a very sturdy blade due to the weight of it.

WEAKNESSES

• Heavy: The sword is a heavy sword that requires specialized training in order to wield properly.
• The Force: It has no protection against the Force.
• Lightsabers: It has no resistance to Lightsabers.
• Acid
• Intense Heat
• Intense Cold

DESCRIPTION

A sword created by Jake when he awoke in the current era after he created Frostbite. This sword was made as a replacement for the original blade he had because he couldn't find it anymore. This was the second creation he made. Due to his exhaustion from making Frostbite he was unable to enhance the sword with the power of the Force. This is why it is an ordinary blade.

 

[Krass Wyms]

under review

 

[Krass Wyms]

Jake Ateris

Old: The sword is an ancient blade. As a result, it would be easy for someone to damage.

Created by means of applying Alkahest to Durasteel and Titanium, Jake made this sword for his own use.

How old is Jake? If the blade is an ancient blade did he reforge it? These two things contridict each other with the wordking.

The sword can channel the energies of the Force in order to send out Slash Waves.

This would be a strength.
However please explain these slash waves and what is being used to augment it to create them?

 

[Jake Ateris]

Krass Wyms Removed the Slashwave.
Jake is going to be over 2000 + years old.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Alright Jake Ateris thank you

Magnets: Magnets could cause damage to the sword.

How are magnets able to harm the blade?

Environmental Damage: Environmental Damage would be effective against the sword.

What sort of environmental damage? ou already have acid, heat and cold as a weakness so is this padding?

 

[Jake Ateris]

Rip it apart with Magnets.
Crush it with Gravity, and the like.

It's not an attempt to add padding, but I was trying to give it more weaknesses due to the sword being practically a museum piece.
Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Jake Ateris

You stacked weaknesses that are mostly situational and fluff and for a blade imbued with the force wouldn't actually be weaknesses. if it can clash with a saber it can stand high levels of heat and gravity as a weakness could mean it isn't usable on any planet with a gravity well. The blade being old means little as a blade enhanced by the force can last for thousands of years and maintain its sharpness.

As it stands none of your weaknesses are substantial enough to be considered a weakness. I would suggest looking at some other force blades for ideas (do not just copy what they have) to do it. I will start it off with it being a force blade so force nullification would reduce it to the standard materials.

 

[Jake Ateris]

Krass Wyms Hopefully the sword is good enough now.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Jake Ateris

Un-Enhanced: The Sword possesses no special properties of any kind.

Very Sharp: The sword has been sharpened to the point where it can cut through a Speeder Bike with Ease by Jake.

How is this not a special property. It is cleaving through different metals.

• 2H Sword: The sword is a 2H sword and thus prevents the use of extra weapons, or shields due to the weight.
• Requires Constant Sharpening: The sword requires constant sharpening.

These are at best situational, when you use the sword is it having a chance to be dull going to factor into it in anyway?

 

[Jake Ateris]

Krass Wyms There, hopefully it's good now.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Jake Ateris

• Heavy: The sword is a heavy sword that requires specialized training in order to wield properly.
• Swing and a Miss: Without the specialized training needed to even lift the blade, most swings would miss their opponent.

These are almost the exact same weakness.

 

[Jake Ateris]

Krass Wyms Are my edits good?

 

[Krass Wyms]

They are acceptable enough Jake Ateris

Approved