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Approved Tech IP-007 "Artemis" Slugthrower Rifle

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a nice slugthrower.
  • Image Source: Linus Scheffel
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  • Canon Link: Slugthrower.
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Imperial Heavy Repeater.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Draklory Arms.
  • Affiliation: Closed-Market.
  • Model: IP-007 "Artemis" Slugthrower Rifle
  • Modularity: Large, scope can be add alongside gun barrel can be shortened or not, handle can be changed for better comfort.
  • Production: Mass-Produced
  • Material: Durasteel, ebony, ivory and other slugthrower compenents.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Slugthrower Rifle.
  • Size: Large
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Ammunition Type: Variable.
  • Ammunition Capacity: High | 300 on automatic, 50 on semi-automatic.
  • Effective Range: Average.
  • Rate of Fire: High.
  • Stopping Power: Average.
  • Recoil: Average.
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Dangerous.
STRENGTHS
  • It has a high rate of fire and a moderate spread pattern in any occasion.
WEAKNESSES
  • Lowered accuracy in fully automatic.
  • The gun needs constant care so that it does not rust or cause any kind of problem, such as jamming because it has not been properly lubricated.
DESCRIPTION
In the museums of Kaikielius, several slugthrowers have always been seen hanging on their walls, some are venerated in the homes of their nobles as relics of the days that the elzeri flew in floats through the galaxy in search of a home. To celebrate the anniversary of the landing on the planet, the brilliant minds of Draklory Arms tried to develop Artemis for the celebration of the festivities, then trying to produce a capable weapon that was mass produced for their soldiers. Perfect for hunting and even for civil strife, Artemis is a reliable weapon for any situation.
 
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Aldric

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Heya!

Under Image Source, could you hyperlink the artist's name to the actual source? This should be the one.

Also, in your Ammunition Capacity could you change "High" to "Large" to comply with the template, assuming that's the rating you meant here?

In your Strength section, the wording you use is a little strong for a fire rate of High, instead of saying "extremely rapid rate of fire", could you tone it down to "high rate of fire", "very rapid rate of fire", or something to that extent?

King Iedolas Solidor King Iedolas Solidor
 
Heya!

Under Image Source, could you hyperlink the artist's name to the actual source? This should be the one.

Also, in your Ammunition Capacity could you change "High" to "Large" to comply with the template, assuming that's the rating you meant here?

In your Strength section, the wording you use is a little strong for a fire rate of High, instead of saying "extremely rapid rate of fire", could you tone it down to "high rate of fire", "very rapid rate of fire", or something to that extent?

King Iedolas Solidor King Iedolas Solidor

Done, and thank you very much for the suggestions and corrections. You are the best
 
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