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OOC Information
Intent: A way for Tanaski to duel sabre wielding opponents
Image Source: http://www.medievalcollectibles.com/p-8593-bamboo-mat-wakizashi.aspx
Cannon Link: NA
Restricted Missions: If needed
Primary Source: NA

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacture: Tanaski Yumi
Model: NA
Affiliation: Tanaski Yumi
Modularity: NA
Production: Unique
Materials: Durasteel, wood, cortosis

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Vibo Swords
Size: One handed
Length: 60 cm
Weight: 1.3 kg each
Special Features: Cortosis coating for dealing with light sabres.

Strengths and Weaknesses

Cortosis coating: Though not a pure Cortosis blade, for health reasons, the swords can still parry against and short out most sabres.

Light: Though heavier then sabre's the swords are both relatively light and easy to wield.

Short: The length of the blade makes it harder to hit your opponent unless up close.

Electrocution: The blade is susceptible to electricity and cause the energy cell and vibrator generator to explode.

Description:
Tanaski was always more suited for blades rather then sabers, the feeling of the weight and the more silence approach to things that other weapons did not match drew towards becoming a blades-man. As a response with the help of his family in tacking down the materials he constructed two duel vibro blades, to compliment his take on Ja'Kai fighting style. These blades serve as his primary weapons to use in a fights and assassination, and are at the most deadliest when being drawn from the sheath in a wide are swing.
 
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Tanaski Yumi said:
  • Please link the website or author of the image, not the image itself.
Your template has several fields that have been changed from the original. Please reformat your submission to fit the standard.



Tanaski Yumi said:
a frequency modulator to change the intensity of the blades.
  • What frequency are you talking about here? Vibroblades are generally just on or off.
  • Speaking of which, please make it clear in the Classification field that these are vibroblades, as it is currently only mentioned in the Description.
  • As vibroblades, they also carry a major Weakness you need to add:
    Electrocution, however, would be the wielder's last concern. Traveling up the length of the blade, the electricity would connect with a vibroblade's energy cell and ultrasonic vibration generator. The result would be a miniature explosion with enough force to take off a hand.
Also expand on the Description, please. It needs to be a good-sized paragraph.
 
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Tanaski Yumi said:
  • Just put N/A here, please. Primary Source is for submissions that inspired your own.


Tanaski Yumi said:
Electrocution: The blade is susceptible to electricity and cause the
  • This line is unfinished. Please complete it by adding the full Weakness to electricity as stated by the Wookieepedia article.


Tanaski Yumi said:
would it be possible to insulate the blade against electric attacks?
  • Theoretically yes, but removing that Weakness here will leave you with an unbalanced submission, so it's going to stay.
 
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