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Holographic Cloaking Projector/ Model Number: HZ-10x

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Image Source: http://www.halopedia.org/John_Forge/Found through Google images
Intent: A cloaking type device for the Dark Claw Syndicate, and for anyone who wants to purchase one with approval from the Dark Claw Syndicate.
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Manufacturer: http://starwarsrp.net/groups/768-dark-claw-intelligence-syndicate/
Model: HZ-10x Holographic Cloaking Projector
Affiliation: Dark Claw Syndicate, Open Market
Modularity: No.
Production: Minor
Material: Stygium Crystals, Advanced holographic generator parts, durasteel
Strengths: This device can create a holographic illusion over a ship. (e.g. A Corellian Corvette uses one and makes it have the appearance of a transport instead.)
The outer "skin" of the holographic illusion is impenetrable by any type of sensors, and gives any sensors the illusion of just a standard transport, etc..
It can maintain the illusion even while landed.
Weaknesses: This device draws on a large amount of energy to maintain. This requires a large, powerful, and usually expensive generator if this is to be active along with other ship systems (including engines, sensors, hyperdrive, weapons, life support, etc.). Which means not only would a ship have to be modified to hold his device, it would also have to have the generator upgraded. Most ships under 100 meters don't have this capacity. But there are exceptions.
Ships or people getting to close to a ship using the projector leave risk of discovery as the projection is not solid, as it is made to appear.
If anything interferes with the holographic field, it can lead to glitches and discrepancies in the field.
Description: The Holographic Cloak Projector was designed as a cheaper alternative to a full scale cloaking device. The device emits a holographic static field around any ship that uses it. This can make any ship that can carry the device, appear as any ship the owner wishes. The field not only projects the illusion that the ship is what it is not, it also prevents scanners from puncturing the outer shell of the holograph and instead sends out a signal that give all the specs of the holographic shape, rather than the actual ship within the field. The projection is not on the surface of the hull, rather it creates a field, such as the old time cloaking generators. The field can expand or shrink, the smallest being the size of the ship that is holding the device. Usually only ships from 100 meters upward have the capacity to hold such energy reservoirs that are necessary for this devices operation. The field can create an illusion up to 1000 kilometers in length. However, the bigger the range, the more risk there is of discovery. Because the shield is not solid, the user must take great care to not allow the edges collide with anything, or people will undoubtedly find it suspicious as to why an asteroid passed through your ship without damage to itself or you. Ships larger than containment field cannot use it, or have have multiple device connected via programming in the same computer network. This device is recommended for infiltration units, either for bounty hunters, special military groups, or espionage groups.
 
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Hi [member="Adson Tracyn'kemir"]! I will be reviewing this submission.



Adson Tracyn'kemir said:
Image Source: Google Search
  • Please link the original source (Google is a big place.)


Adson Tracyn'kemir said:
Development Thread:

Adson Tracyn'kemir said:
Manufacturer:
  • Please link the manufacturer

Adson Tracyn'kemir said:
Production: Minor
  • A development thread of 10 posts will be required for unique/semi-unique production. 20 posts for limited, and 35 posts for minor production.


Adson Tracyn'kemir said:
Weaknesses:
  • I need more clearly defined weaknesses. Requiring "a lot of energy" is mostly a fluff weakness. I also have no idea what you mean by if the projection is not solid. Projections and/or illusions are by their very definition not solid. The third weakness honestly seems like the second weakness, only slightly reworded.


Adson Tracyn'kemir said:
The field can create an illusion up to 1000 kilometers in length
  • How does this work if a ship that is 1,000km uses this to project a holographic image of a ship half its' size? It would be physically incapable of doing so as the ship would be larger than the projected ship, and thus the remaining 500km of the ship would be exposed to anyone visually looking at the vessel, or any scanners reading it. The only way I can see this device working is when smaller ships use it to appear larger. Please clarify what you mean or how this is possible.
 
[member="Jamie Pyne"]

Hi! Okay, I edited the description, and highlighted the changes in red. Okay, I got in on the development thread. I'll need a little time for that though. Could you clarify the thread on production? Thanks!
 
[member="Adson Tracyn'kemir"]

This describes what each level of production is worth: (The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (Only A Handful of Characters), Limited (Only A Select Group Of NPCs/PCs), Minor (Any Character, Only Select Groups Of NPCs), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.))

Restricted materials cannot go above minor production, so depending on what level of production you wish to have will determine how many posts in your development thread will be required to achieve that level of production. 10 posts for Unique/Semi-Unique, 20 posts for limited, and 35 for minor.

Also, can you switch the text color so that it is uniform?
 

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