Approved Tech Geverok's Gambit

[Ri'ven Gevrok]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: A personal weapon for Ri'ven Geverok
• Image Source: Pinterest
• Canon Link: N/A
• Restricted Missions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Ri'ven Geverok
• Model: Sword Axe
• Affiliation: Ri'ven Geverok
• Modularity: No
• Production: unique
• Material: Cortosis and Alusteel blade with a Veshok wood handle

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Sword, axe
• Size: One-handed
• Length: Total Length: 52 cm Hilt: 17 cm Blade: 35 cm
• Weight: 1.5 kg

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Lightsaber resistance and capable of shorting out lightsabers striking the weapon.
• blaster resistant
• Extremely sharp

Strengths:

• Resistance: This weapon is lightsaber resistant and is capable of shorting out lightsabers that strike the blade.
• Maneuverable: This blade is quite maneuverable if one has the training and talent for it.

Strength and Weakness:

• Sharp: This weapon is extremely sharp but it's also double edged and as such can be turned on it's wielder.

Weaknesses:

• Magnetic: The weapon is highly magnetic.
• Slugthrowers: While the weapon won't shatter completely it will break, dull and crack.

DESCRIPTION
During a job were Ri'ven had to get a hold of a self titled sith initiate, he saw the need to have something to content with the force users of the galaxy and their lightsabers. After failing the first time he faced the target he made another attempt after crafting this weapon.
Seeing it's effectiveness against this target he decided to keep it in case of other such jobs or fights come his way.

The hilt is engraved with Echani symbols of strength and finesse while along the middle of the blade are Gen'dai symbols of similar intent. It's blade is almost black in a dark steel like coloration, this is due to both the Cortosis and Alusteel blend used in it's crafting, with a dark brown Veshok wooden handle.

 

[NightSister]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[NightSister]

Image Source: Pinterest

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SPECIAL FEATURES Lightsaber

I believe this is missing 'resistant'.

Weight: 1 kg

This is too light for the weapon's size, please bring the weight to around 1.5kg.

Weapon: This weapon is a melee weapon and as such suffers from those limitations.

A melee weapon being a melee weapon is not a weakness, please add a weakness that hinders the weapon in PvP.

Slughthrower resistance

Cortosis is brittle, it would not have much resistance against slugthrowers. Please drop this.

[member='Ri'ven Gevrok']

 

[Ri'ven Gevrok]

Made the changes, I thought that the alusteel blend would help with Cortosis's brittleness.

[member="Aria Vale"]

 

[NightSister]

Extremely close range: This weapon while a melee weapon has limitations in extremely close combat making manipulating it when in brawling engagements hard.

This is still not a legitimate weakness. Give me at least one good, valid weakness that the sword-wielder's opponent can actually use in a PvP scenario and I'll stamp this.

- [member=Ri'ven Gevrok] -

 

[Ri'ven Gevrok]

Made changes hope these suffice.

[member="Aria Vale"]

 

[NightSister]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Cira"]

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Approved.