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Approved Location Fort Abenaki

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Name: Fort Abenaki
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Classification: Naval Station
Location: Alexandria, situated on a large island to the south of Mandurah Harbour
Affiliation: Commonwealth


Population: 27,400
Defenses:
  • [1] Planetary Shield Generator
  • [1] Deflector Shield
  • [2] Anti-Orbital Cannon
  • [10] Anti-Aircraft Guns
  • [10] Anti-Infantry Turrets
Points of Interest:
  • Laneway
  • Hangers
  • Planetary Shield Generator
  • Fort
Description:
At the turn of the century the Kingdom of Alexandria was felled by a swift campaign by Horus, over the following decade would follow an intense guerrilla war cultivating into a last ditch effort to retake Alexandria. This was the turning point of the war, the Kingdom had lost, and with the Commonwealth Navy and Army ready to finish off the loyalists, the Naval Intelligence finally conceded defeat and joined the Commonwealth.

They warned the Commonwealth of the pending attack and over the following months a vast network of bases were constructed across Alexandria to facilitate for the defense of the planet. Although originally intended to be a temporary position, implementing anti-orbital cannons and a planetary shield generator, once the war ended rather than dismantling the base it was populated by Commonwealth Navy and continued to see construction across the base.

Defended by a deflector shield and a network of turrets both anti-air and infantry, Fort Abenaki is a secure facility with routine patrols and surveillance services. It is home to the 31st Navy Wing, with a population residence of 27,400 officers, enlisted, navy civilian technicians and contractors.

History: N/A

Intent: As a militant nation the Commonwealth holds a vast array of military outposts, forts and bases across their homeworld of Alexandria.

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[member="Horus"] [member="Darth Prazutis"]

I was about to ask you to fill out the history section but upon referencing the original template I saw that it was, originally, an optional section. You may leave it blank if you wish within this sub however the notation for optional has been removed from the template for future location submissions.

Now, concerning this sub. This is a very nicely formatted and written sub, but heavily fortified locations like this we usually like to see some form of development for. Have you any IC threads where this location has been used as a setting?
 
[member="Lorelei Darke"]
Addressing the first concern, I wrote the description as a mix of description and history.

As for the second, we have no IC threads. The planet was only recently subbed as a stratocratic government, and the faction is only new.
 
Understood.

I would like to see a 15 post development thread for this base, however, due to the array of heavy defenses. Don't think of this requirement as hindering the faction, think of it as an opportunity to flesh out how your faction works and getting a sense for this setting. Have your faction members help you with it as a teamwork building exercise to work on the lore of the Commonwealth.

[member="Horus"]
 
[member="Lorelei Darke"]
We've got the minimum 15 posts total. Either way, we'll be continuing to thread in there, if it is required or not, it's surprisingly useful for social interaction with new peeps.
 
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