Feedback Feedback: One Month

[Mylo Thorne]

I know it might seem a lil early to be doing one of these, but I didn't do many when I was on Chaos some moons ago, and I wanted to establish a better routine for it! I'm thinking every 1-2 months, maybe three. Still trying to decide. Anyways I'd love some feedback, mostly on how I've been writing, and particular areas I could improve.

However that's just a guideline, any feedback is appreciated!

 

[Iris Arani]

Mylo is fantastic! I love interacting with him, and the wonderment he has over Jedi is something Iris has been trying to figure out. If anything, I just want more threads with him!

Also, yee. I usually do a feedback thread like once a month cause feedback is the best!