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Approved Species Eroded

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Viridian

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  • Intent: Codify one of the experiments Viridian will be performing as he sinks towards the Dark Side of the Force. Also give him Golems since he can’t use Battle Droids due to a metal allergy.
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  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Eroded
  • Designation: Semi Sentient
  • Origins: Created by Viridian in his ship.
  • Average Lifespan: 500 Yearsa
  • Estimated Population: Common (10000)
  • Description: The Eroded are essentially creations that are similar to Golems. These were made from rock and stone. Limited treatments of Alchemy were done to them to give them their abilities.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: N/A
  • Average Height of Adults: Varies
  • Average Length of Adults: Varies.
  • Skin color: Brown, Gray. Crystalline.
  • Hair color: N/A
  • Distinctions: These Golems have no gender - but appear to be made out of stone and crystal. These also have glowing eyes when they are active. The Golems do not wear any clothes whatsoever. They can appear to be male, or female, though.
  • Races: [ Not subspecies, distinct cultural or physical races (aka, just like human races). ] N/A
  • Force Sensitivity: Standard
Strengths:
  • Enhanced Durability
  • Enhanced Strength
  • Quick Learning of Tasks
  • Stabbing / Slashing Immunity: Due to the stone bodies they possess, they are immune to Slashing, Stabbing, and the like.
  • Energy Blasts: They can morph their arms into "cannons" that can shoot blasts of Energy that can either have a stun setting or a kill setting.
  • Expertise with Weapons: They are programmed to be able to use most weapons, easily.
  • They can shoot crystals that can explode, or be used to grow crystals to trap people out of the "cannons" their arms can turn into.
Weaknesses:
  • Force Nullification
  • Energy Draining
  • Vibrational Weapons
  • Blunt Force
  • Slug Throwers: Slug Throwers of higher calibers would be able to wipe them out easily.
  • Water Pressure: They can't survive intense water pressure.
CULTURE
  • Diet: Force Energy
  • Communication: They can "Project" their thoughts out as speech.
  • Technology level: Galactic Standard
  • Religion/Beliefs: N/A
  • General behavior: Essentially these are obedient to the will of their owners. They are droid-like, obeying the will of whoever owns them. They will obey them, and do their best to carry out any task. They're also very protective of their masters, and will do anything to keep them safe from harm. They also are able to think on their own, and love to forge items / work with the Force to build things. They love to learn new skills.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Inspired by Sith Spawn, and Droids, Viridian decided he would create something for his own purposes. The idea was something made out of rock and stone. He eventually created the Eroded as an experiment in order to replace the need for droids that most species had, and also to create a means to crew his ship without the need for such, given his allergies. These are his first attempt to create his pet project, and see what they can do in a fight.
 
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Viridian

Ok, I like the idea, but there are a few things. You have multiple sections that have nothing typed out. Canon, Permissions, Links, and Description all need to have something in them. The first three can just be N/A, but you need a Description.
 
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Looks good. One other thing that I would suggest is to write the sub as if the species already exists, and just go into their making in history, but if you're like the sub as is consider it approved. Just tell me so I can make it official.
 
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