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Edard

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[SIZE=10pt]NAME:[/SIZE][SIZE=10pt] Edard Kel Sovellai[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10pt]FACTION: Republic
RANK: padawan

SPECIES: human[/SIZE]
AGE: 19
[SIZE=10pt]GENDER:[/SIZE][SIZE=10pt] Male[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10pt]HEIGHT:[/SIZE][SIZE=10pt] 6'2"[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10pt]WEIGHT: 198 lbs
EYES: completely white, no pupil.

HAIR: Short silver/blond

SKIN:Very Tanned
FORCE SENSITIVE: exceptionally sensitive to the patterns of the flow of the force, how it flows and where, its how he sees. may have potential for other force abilities.[/SIZE]
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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES (Required: 2 Weaknesses Minimum) :Edard is blind. Has a hard time relating to other people due to being an outcast all his childhood. but having the training of a mercenary he is adept with the sword and proficient with long and short ranged blaster weapons. his main strength is in stealth. at his bet he can manuever through a room full of people and no one will remember him or remember seeing him. also due to his adaptation to his blindness, he can fight at one hundred percent in total darkness. due to his lack of social life and his nearly non-existing education, he has no knowledge of politics or high society
[SIZE=10pt]SHIP: none[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10pt]BIOGRAPHY: Edard was born to a tribal family on tatooine. his mother kept him hidden due to his eyes and in an effort to keep the tribal leaders from killing him as a demon. as a child he grew up in caves in absolute darkness. Although he was blind he had an innate ability to avoid danger. his mother visited often, bringing food and clothing. At the age of ten she stopped coming and hunger drove him in search of food. He was found by slave traders and sold to the huts as an oddity. The huts caged him and made him to fight for food against other slaves. he didnt always win but when he did it was spectacular. Once, his opponent was a man of twenty seven with sword. After delivering several cuts and scrapes to Edard, the man grew tired. not knowing edard was blind he had been playing and taunting him. Enraged he ran at Edard and struck at him with the crude sword, and missed. Edard had felt a barely palpable tuft of something push him backward and he obeyed. this tuft had saved his life many times, and at other times, he was dealt blows that hurt like hell. it seemed like the only time he felt those puffs were when his life hung in the balance. The man charged again and Edard followed the guidance of the puffs slid sideways tripping his opponent and slamming his weapon, a rock, into his skull again and again. these victories were few and far between, and for the most part Edard learned to use his other senses in order to survive, if not win those fights. the hut who owned him gradually took interest and eventually found out he was blind. when he was fourteen he was removed from these fights and placed under the training of a mercenary who worked for the hut who owned Ed. by the time he was fifteen he was an adept swordsman and could dodge some blaster fire. The hut employed Edard as a security measure until he was seventeen when a mercenary bought him and took him with him as a servant/bodyguard. While on an assignment the mercenary was killed, leaving Ed in the bowels of coruscant wandering and starving to death. As Edard lay near death from thirst he felt the little puffs he had kow all his life swell into torrents lashing out like fiery winds, and in them he could "see" the walls and ceiling around him in a mental image. He lay processing that information and trying to figure it out when he heard footprints down the corridor. H e heard a voice talking and another responding, whispering. Suddenly he could sense through the "wind" he could now perceive, two figures crouching low and slowly moving toward him, then bowing over him one felt his throat. he was so weak that when he moved to brush the hand away he passed out. The two figures were jedi knights pulled into the underground by the force compelling them to search these chambers. [/SIZE]
 
Thanks for the advice, I was exhausted last knight when I wrote this, and I just copy pasted what i wrote from microsoft word. I made an edit to reflect the changes.
 

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