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Approved Location Dune Repairs

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Name: Dune Repairs
Location: Mos Eisley, Tatooine
Affiliation: Jan Valdum
Description: The building may look like regular yellow colored Tatooine brick, but on the inside is a monstrosity of metal and scavenge welded together. It may not be pretty, but it make the building more stable and fortified from the elements. It has many windows for natural lighting, and a ventilation system to give some comfort from the heat of Tatooine. There is no lobby or place for customers to request repairs. People usually just talked to Jan, and he let them drive their speeders or hover crafts into the garage. The garage has three areas inside of it. In the middle of the garage is the repair area. It has enough space to house 2-3 speeder bikes or 1 hovercraft. This takes up a major portion of the garage and takes up most of the space in the building. In the garage is also a kitchen where all Jan’s groceries and cooking utilities are stored. This area is located to the left of the repair area. Finally, to the right of the repair area is where all Jan’s supplies, parts, and repair equipment is stored. Jan is the only person who works in the shop. Partly, because he has trust issues. Mostly because it is also his home, and he doesn’t want people being around and messing with his belongings. Jan’s favorite part of the garage is a 4 foot scorch mark in the back wall, where he accidentally blew up a custom speeder when he was a little kid.(Picture of Garage on left of page.)


The Dune Repair Shop is Jan’s Residence. He decided to make a storage closet(on left of page) in the back his room. It is quite a mess. Parts and scavenge are scattered all over the floor, and some of Jan’s leftover food. There is one desk made of durasteel that Jan bought off a trader. It is his personal work space, where he works on personal objects and his weapons. There is one small bed in this room that Jan sleeps on. It is never made. There is one source of natural light in the room that comes from a window next to Jan’s bed. The window is made of one-way glass and reinforced with wire. Most of the time it is closed with blinds.
Finally, the last area of the building is actually underneath it. It took a few permits, bribes, and explosives but Jan was able to dig a tiny cavern underneath his room in storage. Underneath his bed is a durasteel hatch. When opened, it shows a ladder that goes down 20 feet into the ground. After climbing down 20 feet, you come into Jan’s Office(first picutre shown). It is an adequate space about the size of the repair area of the garage. It contains all of Jan’s weapons, his personal equipment, armor, and his private connection to the Holonet. Jan even has his own custom transmitter/receiver that will notify him immediately when a new job offer comes up.

History: This is where it all began for Jan Valdum. It was like a second home to Jan growing up. Dune Repairs used to belong to Jan’s family, specifically his mom. It was a shop that fixed speeders and hovercraft on Tattoine for everyone, (especially the Hutt Cartel). After his parent’s death, Jan lost home and the Dune Repairs shop to the Hutt Cartel.
Years after scrounging through the dirt and making a living for himself; Jan finally had enough money to buy the shop back. It wasn’t that hard to convince the owner of it to sell it to Jan. The shop had hit rock-bottom, and was abandoned and considered a place for squatters to find shelter. So Jan decided to get to work, and bring this place back to it’s former glory.

(I do not own any of the pictures that are in the links.)
Artist of storage closet: A post-apocalyptic room by Hrormir on deviantART)
Artist of Garage: A Mechanic's Garage by Eliott Lilly )
Artist of Jan's Office: A Rebel desert Hideout by John Broadway)
 

Liliane

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Looks very nice, has solid work put into it. Very good. :)

Another judge will now take a look at this as well.
 
[member="Jan Valdum"]

You will need to source the artists of the images you intend to use in this submission. Saying you don't own them is not proper sourcing.

Also, when linking, please link directly to the image itself and not the webpage it appears on. There are too many hazardous sites out there and I do not want Chaos to have mouseholes to them. Fix these things in the sub and it will be approved.


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