Approved Tech Demon Carbine

[Pyramid Head]

Image/Credit: http://destraudo.deviantart.com/art/AR-41-Assault-Rifle-model-48395899

Intent: To give Maleificar a superior rifle for the battle field, that is durable, and has decent amount of accuracy.

Dev Thread: N/A Will make if needed

Manufacturer: Sobuch Industries

Model: None

Affiliation: The Horde

Modularity: Yes. A silenced can be attached, along with a basic scope, as well as a flash light. As well as capatable with various round types. (Etc. Cyro, shock, acid, explosive.)

Production: Minor

Material: Durasteel. PLASTIC clips

Description: The Demon Carbine is a simple yet durable rifle, it comes in black, and various camo depending on the mission. Its slightly heavier then the average Carbine as well. Its ment for spec ops missions, as its not the rifle ranged weapon accuracy stays clean by 200 yards.
It isn't ment to be shot at long ranges mainly because the Maleificar are short range fighters, getting in close, and personal.

Strengths:
Double Burst: The weapon has a more accurate fire rate, shooting two rounds per squeeze.
Durable: It can be dropped on rocks, it can be rained on.
Mobililty: Its roughly smaller than a average Carbine, giving better monuverablity.
Terrain Durable: Can't be broken by average hits, (etc. Smashing it into a rock wouldn't dent it)

Weakness:
Not A Suppresser: The lack of automatic fire makes it not the just ideal weapon to fight in a army of grunts, more of a spec ops weapon.
Short Range: This weapon wasn't ment for long distance, its a spec ops rifle, giving it shorter range accuracy.


Class: Slug Thrower

Size: Two Handed

Length: 30 inches

Weight: 10 lbs. (Ment to be heavier then normal as all the gun is made of Durasteel except Tue clip)

Range: 350 yards (not as accurate as 200)

Clip size: 26 rounds

Round Size:
5.56

 

[Popo]

@[member="Incubus"]
Mkay. Coupla things here. Let's get to work.

First off, in modularity, unless you want the ammo modularity to only include Cryo rounds, just state "compatible with most slug thrower bullets/rounds/ammunition". That way you have more versatility in a firearm.

Second, Force Dead only applies to organic items. The Vong themselves are Force dead and applied those traits to their own creations where were, canonically, biological. There are no known instances of non-biological items or machines having a Force-dead trait. Short of a wookieepedia link contradicting such, those traits will need to be removed.

The weakness that states the weapon cannot be submersed in water has two problems. First, if it's able to withstand rain, it should be capable of withstanding heavy rain and monsoon type rain conditions, which are pretty near to submersed conditions to an extent. Also, slug throwers are capable of use after submersion, with varying degrees of working function. As a slug thrower, this is not accurate.

Please clearly specify if the weapon is a slug thrower. If it is not, please clearly specify if it is a blaster, slug thrower hybrid, etc.

The average weight of a carbine/submachinegun is about 6-8lbs. Unless this is specially designed to fit a larger body type of user, I can't see this weapon being accurately portrayed at 16lbs which is the average weight of an unloaded M249 SAW (US light machinegun).

@ me when edited and we'll go from there

 

[Pyramid Head]

@[member="Popo"]

 

[Popo]

@[member="Incubus"]
Awesome. Looks good. Approved Pending Secondary

 

[Lief]

Approved.