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Approved Tech Deathmaster's Mantle.

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Intent: A powerful Piece of Armour to Even the Odds.
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Manufacturer: Iziz, Ferus & Yun
Model: Vong Null-Cloak (Deathmaster's Mantle)
Affiliation: Iziz & Yun (Rookie)
Modularity: Colour
Production: Unique. (Two Exist.)

Material: Terentatek leather, Miriskin, Dashade, Phrik armourweave & a dash of alchemy
Classification: Anti-Force / Anti-Energy
Weight: 7 Kilograms
Quality: 10

Defensive Properties:
  • Force Resistance: 10
  • Blasters: 9
  • Light Sabers: 8
  • Electricity: 5
  • Piercing: 4
  • Kinetic: 3

The Quality of the armour comes not from its overall protective stopping power, but from its vast success in protecting against what it is catered for. The quality of the armour stems from it being forged by Ferus, a powerful Sith Alchemist and Darth within the one Sith as well as Yun, a potent Shaper of the Yuuzhang Vong. Together, their masteries combined to create a horrifying abomination not only able to defend against light-sabers and blasters and electricity due to the properties of the phrik armour-weave but also, the ability to defend against the force. Making the Null Cloak a devastating weapon against force users.

Special Features:
  • Living Armour:
    Like many of the Yuuzhang Vong armours, the Deathmaster's Mantle is a living material much like that of a manta, the living flowing being is not unlike a vong formed Ysalamiri allowing the cloak to keep its biological functions. The Phrik armour weave is meshed with the exterior of the creature to grant in an armour plating instead of having a natural chitin plating making it resistant to energy and strikes but far more vulnerable than the impressive near invulnerability of crab armour.

  • Force Resistance:
    The primary goal of the cloak was to create a substance which acted as a wall against powerful force users and their projectile abilities. The experiment was successful. Tempered further through the addition of Terentatek hide and true Miriskin, created by using Vong Shaping on live Ysalamiri to preserve fragments of their unique power within the chimera which resulted. The natural resistance combined further with its ability to project a skin tight variant of its bubble like a personal shield across its skin. allowing the user to wield force powers through the openings of the head and arms, but not through the Mantle.The power held within it makes the null cloak an extra-ordinary weapon, and is considered an artifact of great power.

  • Energy Resistance:
    More as a bi-product of the materials used as well as enhanced by the presence of a light Phrik armour-weave overlay. The cloak is moderately resistant to blasters and light-sabers as well as electricity due to Phriks defensive properties and unique quality of dispersing electrical charges. This defense applies to the point of being able to withstand some attacks and providing a fair sum of protection. While the cloak is not capable of resisting heavy weapons it is almost impervious to pistols and side-arm fire, while being moderately resistant to light-sabers. Though, as a cloak, and not a plated armour, the Mantle does little to nothing to resist against physical impacts, and well placed repeated blows from a light-saber will hew the Phrik weave reinforcing.
Description:
The Deathmaster's Mantle, also known as a Null Cloak is a chimeric amalgamation of rare and unique materials which all share a single common denominator, that they are resistant to the core functions of a force user. Each of the arranged components were taken and maintained through various means in order to preserve their nature of resistance in the force, some of the killed hosts had their organic material medically stabilized in storage vats, keeping synthetic circulation flowing as the tissue was kept alive for some time after the death of the donor. While others, such as the elusive Ysalamir, had to be kept alive in an atrium of Iziz's own creation until such a time that they would be able to be used to create the prestigious vestments.

The process did not go without hindrances however, the first and most harrowing of the trials was defeating the likes of the Dashade and the Terentatek, each were powerful foes especially against a force user, though, with the aid of Ferus as well as the forces of the Sith Assassins and their cunning, each of the materials found their way into the hands of the diminutive Jawa, taking them in hand and moving on with his plan. The Ysalamiri were another difficult find, as the creatures' claws dug deeply into the trees that they were rooted into, Iziz spent a great amount of time looking into the creatures, studying them, attempting to find a means of taking them back to his ship with them... Iziz had failed in removing the creatures from the branches of their preferred trees, and found it best to simply remove the branches with them on them, their death like grips proving to be their own undoing in the end. Combined with the collection of a few eggs, Iziz had more than enough material there...

Together with his master Ferus, Iziz began. With blood made into an alchemical basin from victims of the Sith Assassins' attack on Ssi-Ruu in which they claimed themselves a base. Iziz and his master worked some magic into the materials they could, forging the components of the Phrik, Dashade and Terentatek into the shape of the mantles that would be created for his master and himself, the broad shape was befitting that of a grown man, and a single Jawa. Far from finished however, the Mantles at this stage showed promise, but little finesse, due to the Ysalamir components being immune to the effects of Alchemy... another means was needed to be found to complete the combined material, merging it together into a single form in which their power was maintained... So the single question of 'how' was raised.

The answer, was Yun.

The mysterious Vong shaper who had aligned recently with the One Sith, fought side by side with Iziz in a grand battle to earn the trust of the Sith faction, as well as Iziz gaining the trust and favor of the shaper. Having previously attempted to look for a Vong colony with his master Ferus, several camps had been dried up due to attacks from the republic military... in honest, It was a miracle that Yun was found. However, through war, the two developed a respect, and when Iziz asked Yun if he would assist in creating the mantle he sought, the Vong agreed, but at the cost of receiving a copy of the mantle himself. Iziz agreed, forsaking the model that he had intentionally meant to bestow on his master as a gift...

The Vong worked his magic on the live Ysalamiri, (On all except a runt born from the eggs Iziz had captured who was destined to become a beloved pet. ) Shaping their flesh and warping their bodies to combine with the preserved leathers that had been shaped by alchemy and the force. Shedding the proverbial slag from the cloak with his incredible artform, while balancing the amounts of each material in such a manner that they would not counteract one another but rather work in tandem like that of tamahagane, supporting one another to create a greater strength. Yun managed to finish the cloak grafted to the phrik overlay, uniting the powers together like folded steel as their abilities compounded and came together in trace sums, which added to create a greater living whole of the creature which had finally been created.

The Mantle itself is a hooded long cloak, much like that of the sith, but thicker than most normal robes or leather due to the armour-weave grafted over-top of the hide. Without altering, the leather is a pitch, mat, almost tar-like black, which seems to almost absorb sunlight that it touches. The only sheen it seems to give off is a light rain-bow like colour when exposed to direct sunlight, much like the effect of oil under sunlight. The long sleeves are fitted nicely to the wearer's proportions as well as the tails of the cloak falling down to just behind the wearer's shins. Some hardened leather plates, buckles and belts embellish the cloak but offer little additional protection other than some utility and serving to decorate the cloak to look more regal and impressive. Done as Iziz uses this cloak to replace the mantle standard issue to the Sith Assassins, and was modeled to impress thusly. The creature itself, is not unlike a deep sea creature, blind to the world, interior gills breathing and feeding of plant matter in the air such as pollen and airborne seeds.

Example:

The end result was a mantle which was able to protect against light-saber strikes and electricity due to the phrik component and tough hide comprising the armour. While the living being possessing the ability to project a very small skin-tight Ysalamir "bubble" around itself almost like a personal shield, as well as being resistant to effects of the force which came into contact with it due to the dashade and terentatek components. The resistance worked to an extent that direct damage through the cloak would become difficult from 'most' sources. This allowed the user to be protected from techniques ranging from telekinesis, force lightning, drain and most projectile powers and even (though to a much lesser extent) shielding the user from extra sensory perception and even mental attacks while the hood is up. However the mantle itself was not without drawback, hurling foreign objects at the armour would find no resistance and it not only were the powers of the enemy resisted, but also the powers of the user. Meaning that force powers which attempted to enhance the cloak as well as effect the cloak such as Phase, repulses, screams and other powers which were required to pass through the living material and its barrier, were rendered almost useless to the user so long as the mantle was worn.

But so long as the user did not rely on such skills,

The Deathmaster's mantle was a near ultimate shield against the force itself.

A prize for any warrior.



"This skin will protect you Iziz, but it cannot protect you from the Dangers within."
-Snikch
 
Iziz said:
true Miriskin, created by using Vong Shaping on live Ysalamiri to preserve their unique power within the leather,
The abilities of a Ysalamir are not biological, they are a force ability. Vong Shaping would remove any and all force connections of this "leather", and no force powers can effect a living Ysalamir. Sith alchemy and force imbuement (and other methods of using the force in an arcane manner) are the only methods shown to be capable of preserving the abilities of the force, of which the Ysalamir would completely negate. Attempting to use alchemy on dead ysalamir to recreate this ability would also fail, as it is canon that miriskin is a hoax (see wookiepedia article here) and a ysalamir's ability is only present while they are still alive (as it is an active force ability, they are not inherently immune to the force). If it isn't clear where I am going with this, this needs to be removed.



Iziz said:
the null cloak has little weakness, and is considered an artifact of great power.
This statement needs to be removed. It is either superfluous or intended to be taken as fact, which is what all information in a factory submission should be. If it is the latter, it should be extremely clear that it is not acceptable for something in the factory to be pushed through with little to no weaknesses and a large variety of strengths, such as quality 10 armor and completely nullification of the force, heat, electricity, energy, and so on.



Iziz said:
Acquired Phrik
Please hyperlink the relevant posts where phrik was acquired.



Iziz said:
Acquired Terentatek Leather.
Threads within a faction are not permitted to be used as development threads.



Iziz said:
he final component was a portion of Yun's own Vong DNA, shaping vong flesh into the armour to cement its properties and finish the terrifying creation.
I am not an absolute expert on Yuuzhan Vong, but it is to my knowledge that only their living subjects undergo the changes into becoming force dead.
 
  • Vong Shapers have the ability to create force sensitive creatures, they have several uses for them with communication and telepathy, so not everything that is vong shaped is force dead, but Vong DNA is, which some is added to the mix. Nowhere near enough to warp the whole product however, in any case, this is an exercise in genetics, not just banging them together. The properties are combined in such a way as to reinforce each other, not compete.
  • Ysalamir also don't neutralize the force, they stop people from being able to exert control over it. So, something that has a naturally passive and non controlled interaction with the force, in theory should not be effected at all. "Ysalamiri did not actually negate the Force; since all existence was infused with Force energy, this would not be possible. Rather, they projected a bubble inside which users were unable to exert any influence over the Force." So, as when the bubble is made, everything doesn't die, a terentatek would not loose its natural resistance, nor would a dashade.
  • But, if you think that vong shaping while the creature is alive would just do nothing, like so many before, I could have this so that the whole product is alive, like a cloak-like crab armour that hangs off me. Or we could just say that the Ysalamiri element is just inconsequential. Because not everything needs to work. I'm not looking to use the bubble, just have the cloak be a barrier to the force.
  • Weakness, will edit that, as it does have weaknesses and plenty of them
  • Really? But I'm pretty certain that thread was used by Ferus to help make the Assassins Cloaks with the Terentatek hoods >.> Could it be moved? It's just a thread, could be moved the closed section just fine. I've been working up to this Dev for a while (as you can see) and that was one of my first threads on site, i was rather new at that point.
  • The Idea isn't or the armour to 'be' force dead, it was to use aspect of the Vong's force death as well as aspects of the others to create a chimeric sheet of force resistance. Partial force death, multiple resistances, A force power which also prevents active control of the force moving through it. As long as they're all in balanced and calculated amounts and structured right, i would not see them clashing.

Those are my thoughts, im interested to hear yours in response. Sorry for kinda reasoning against it... i did kinda work hard to get to this point :/ That's a lot of threads that would just kinda be wasted if this doesn't work.

[member="Bianca"]

PS. Edits made
 
Iziz said:
Vong Shapers have the ability to create force sensitive creatures, they have several uses for them with communication and telepathy, so not everything that is vong shaped is force dead, but Vong DNA is, which some is added to the mix. Nowhere near enough to warp the whole product however, in any case, this is an exercise in genetics, not just banging them together. The properties are combined in such a way as to reinforce each other, not compete.
This cloak, however, is not alive. Adding Yuuzhan Vong DNA to this would be akin to draining the blood of a member of the species and then using it as a dye, there will be absolutely no effect here unless the cloak is a living thing.



Iziz said:
Ysalamir also don't neutralize the force, they stop people from being able to exert control over it. So, something that has a naturally passive and non controlled interaction with the force, in theory should not be effected at all. "Ysalamiri did not actually negate the Force; since all existence was infused with Force energy, this would not be possible. Rather, they projected a bubble inside which users were unable to exert any influence over the Force." So, as when the bubble is made, everything doesn't die, a terentatek would not loose its natural resistance, nor would a dashade.
A terentatek's natural resistance to the force does not exist, canonically, post-mortem. It is chaos canon via alchemy, not something which persists after it is dead. The ability of terentatek leather to resist the force was introduced by Rave Merrill to the site via extensive alchemy work, prior to that it has never shown itself to be resistant to any force abilities in canon or otherwise as a leather after the death of the animal it was on. Ysalamir, as shown in canon, do not retain their ability to stop force sensitives from interacting with the force, either with them or around them. Miriskin, on every capacity - from the miriskin itself, to the surrounding area - does not do anything at all. Unless you are going to be wearing a living Ysalamir then the ability to nullify the force (as the submission states it does) needs to be removed.


Iziz said:
The end result was a mantle which was null to the force, slightly more-so than that of a Yuuzhang Vong



Iziz said:
if you think that vong shaping while the creature is alive would just do nothing, like so many before
Unless it continues to remain living both prior/during the process and after, then yes - that is exactly what I believe is happening. It is not the Ysalamir's skin which projects this bubble, it is a force ability (something that, theoretically, a normal human being could project). That, being said, would be completely nullified/unusable (even if replicating the Ysalamir's ability was possible) because of making this cloak force dead.



Iziz said:
much as how a Yuuzhang Vong is dead to the force, so too partially is the Null-Cloak

Iziz said:
Tempered further through the addition of Terentatek hide and true Miriskin, created by using Vong Shaping on live Ysalamiri to preserve fragments of their unique power within the leather, the null cloak is an extra-ordinary weapon and is considered an artifact of great power.
You cannot have it both ways. You either have partial resistance from the materials which resist the force, or you can have a force dead cloak. A force dead material would cancel out the force propagated by a living Ysalamir cloak (assuming you intended to take the above request to incorporate living ysalamir into the cloak).



Iziz said:
Energy Resistance: More as a bi-product of the materials used as well as enhanced by the presence of a light Phrik armour-weave underlay, the cloak is highly resistant to heat and electrical damage to the point of nullification in most events. While the cloak is not capable of resisting tank or ship class weapons it is almost impervious to small-arms fire, while being moderately resistant to light-sabers. Though, as a cloak and not a plated armour it does not do much to resist physical impact and well placed repeated blows from a light-saber will hew the weave.
I'm going to go ahead and assume the quality 10 armor classification was for the energy resistance, and this development is perfectly fine for a 10 class armor that is highly resilient to energy-based phenomena, like blasters and so on, but complete protection from the vast majority of the force and described near-invulnerability to energy based weapons will not fly. Being unable to use a selection of force powers and being unable to shrug off slugthrowers and other physical weapons does not make up for a complete resistance of energy and the force.



Iziz said:
Acquired Phrik
I need each of the relevant posts, or the last post (I can backtrack from there), in which the phrik was obtained to be listed. You can either hyperlink to the posts or you can provide the post numbers.



Iziz said:
Shaper Forged // Completed
As with the phrik thread, I need all relevant posts linked here so I can find the posts pertaining specifically to the development of this submission.
 
Made edits.

  • Removed force dead and vong DNA period
  • Made the Armour alive to adress concerns
  • Lightened the energy resistance
  • Gave the end posts for those threads. (First posts for each thread are on page 2.)
  • a few general tweaks to abilities.
Yeah, the point of this armour is to be force resistant, I don't really care about the energy resistance at all. I Just want an artifact that can protect a Jawa from having every bone in his body broken from any form of telekinetic wave used above the rank of padawan :p

Sorry that this took me a while.

[member="Bianca"]
 
Iziz said:
Removed force dead and vong DNA period

Iziz said:
Material: Terentatek leather, Miriskin, Dashade, Vong DNA, Phrik armourweave & a dash of alchemy

Iziz said:
The experiment was successful, much as how a Yuuzhang Vong is dead to the force, so too partially is the Null-Cloak, rendering that protection to the user. Tempered further through the addition of Terentatek hide and true Miriskin, created by using Vong Shaping on live Ysalamiri to preserve fragments of their unique power within the leather, the null cloak is an extra-ordinary weapon and is considered an artifact of great power.
Portions which refer to both still remain throughout the submission, please check through and ensure they no longer persist.
 
[member="Iziz"]
To clarify, the objective for the Phrik is devastating defeat here?



Iziz said:
Force Resistance: The primary goal of the cloak was to create a substance which acted as a wall against powerful force users and their projectile abilities. The experiment was successful. Tempered further through the addition of Terentatek hide and true Miriskin, created by using Vong Shaping on live Ysalamiri to preserve fragments of their unique power within the chimera which resulted. The natural resistance combined further with its ability to project a skin tight variant of its bubble like a personal shield across its skin. allowing the user to wield force powers through the openings of the head and arms, but not through the Mantle.The power held within it makes the null cloak an extra-ordinary weapon, and is considered an artifact of great power.
Upon further review, discussion, and research into vong-shaping, it has been decided that a Ysalamir whom is vongshaped would be unable to continuously provide its force suppression ability due to the natural effect of the eventual arrival at being force dead, and it would only be able to retain its power by remaining alive. What this means is that without further development you will have a miriskin which acts just like it did in canon, providing no further resistance than the Terentatek leather which it is combined with.

However, I will allow you to be able to obtain a retention of its abilities so long as you provide further development solely towards the research and development of this vong-shaped Ysalamir. You have about 12 posts to it at the moment, so I'll ask for another 48, which should leave you at an even 60 in the end. By toning down the resistance you can knock off a few posts of development, but it is still going to need to be substantial. Keep in mind that the development needs to be about the research and development, not using it after-the-fact.



Iziz said:
Quality: 10 The Quality of the armour comes not from its overall protective stopping power, but from its vast success in protecting against what it is catered for. The quality of the armour stems from it being forged by Ferus, a powerful Sith Alchemist and Darth within the one Sith as well as Yun, a potent Shaper of the Yuuzhang Vong. Together, their masteries combined to create a horrifying abomination and weapon against force users.
I would suggest listing out individual qualities for ease of reference for the average reader. Example:
  • Kinetic: 3
  • Piercing: 4
  • Force Resistance: 10
  • Blasters: 10
  • Lightsabers: 7
Generally this isn't advisable for vanilla and normal armor, where the armor is designed towards protecting from a general array of damage, rather than specialized protection seen here.



Iziz said:
light Phrik armour-weave overlay, the cloak is moderately resistant to heat and electrical damage to the point of being able to withstand some attacks.
I believe here you are referring to energy weapons, such as blasters and lightsabers, rather than heat and electricity - the latter two will not be protected by phrik, as phrik is a metal and would conduct both rather well. Please correct this, you can simply state that it protects from energy-type weapons rather than being specific to heat and electricity.
 
Sorry, i had a hard time understanding the question, yeah, that is the case.

Verun was an Anzat in full lightsaber-resistant heavy armour which had dual redundant energy shields... Iziz didn't even have a means to 'harm' him at that point in my story... even with a friend helping ^_^

[member="Braith Achlys"]
 
[member="Iziz"]
The challenge is to suffer a devastating defeat, which basically means being severely injured and escaping with your life. If you would like to use that duel as a challenge I can arrange for it to continue, but I will have to hand this submission over to someone else (I am Verun Hans). Right now it doesn't complete the objective required.
 
[member="Braith Achlys"]

Just understand that, most of the time, Iziz can't actually take damage from opponents directly, because he will just die. Instantly. Especially from someone like Verun.

He's the Shedinja of the Sith Assassins.

Example, in lujo, he took a knick from a force repulse while he was travelling in the same direction, just the knick put fractures through most of his ribcage and arms and he only lived because of his reinforced spine and the fact he's using Ataru, so he's enhanced himself. I could just edit my final post saying that fallout from the thermal det injures me severely. Would that be acceptable?
 
[member="Iziz"]
We can work out indirect damage, or you can change up the post to take damage indirectly from some action on Verun's half, of which I will go in and throw up a post for him to exit the fight and signal an end to it. In either case, it needs to be a direct, physical, loss. There's no reason that you need to consider your character that fragile, especially when the other writer (myself, or another) would be perfectly fine with you surviving.

I am aware that the fight was essentially a stalemate, as Hans could not hit Iziz and you could not do much damage to him, but the objective is for a devastating defeat, as elaborated upon in my first post. If you can make it work via an edit I will sign off on it, if not then you will either need to complete the objective in that thread or use another thread.
 
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