Approved Tech Dark Jade

[Warren Century]

• Intent: To provide another crystal for the Crystal Desert of Setus Prime, and to provide a crystal for a Force Relic that I am going to write soon.
• Image Source: Ocean Optics

• Development Thread: If needed
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Name: Dark Jade
• Manufacturer: Narrikians
• Homeworld (optional): Setus Prime
• Production: Minor
• Affiliation: Closed Market
• Modularity: This can be put inside Force Relics, and can be alchemically treated. It could be altered on a molecular level or changed with Alchemy or similar techniques.
• Material: The substances/materials that comprise Lightsaber Crystals.

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Gemstone
• Weight: Medium
• Quality: N/A
• Color: Dark Green

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Force Storage

DETAILED SPECIAL FEATURES AND THERE USES

Dark Jade can hold and contain Force Energies more easily than other Lightsaber Crystals that are found on Setus Prime. This crystall can absorb Force Energy to a certain degree.

Strengths:

• Contain Force Energy: Dark Jade has the unique property of being able to absorb and contain Force Energy that is directly directed against it, or artifacts that contain the Dark Jade.

• Fillable: This crystal can be filled with the Force when the Force is not being used against it. The Crystal is an emerald in terms of appearance, but is able to store a week's worth of power for a city block.

• Tappable: The Crystal acts as a "battery" for the Force, storing and containing the energies that are directed against it. As a result, should a Force User know of the existence of the Crystal they would be able to tap into the crystal with a lot of effort, and draw upon the reserves inside of the crystal, depleting it.

Weaknesses :

• Overload: At maximum, Dark Jade can only store enough force energy to power a city block for a week at maximum. Should the crystal overload, it will explode in a tremendous explosion of Green Fire that cannot be put out by traditional substances, due to being filled with Force Energy.

• First Come, First Served: The First individual of any race to do work on one of these crystals is the only one who can use it, for the purpose of enhancing it with the Force or turning it into part of an artifact. All other attempts by others would render the crystal just a simple emerald essentially. This crystal bonds with the first person to use it, but it can be mined by anyone.

DESCRIPTION

Dark Jade is a material that the Narrikians discovered in the Crystal Desert. This can act as a Lightsaber Focusing Crystal but that is not the primary function of Dark Jade. Dark Jade is a crystal that can hold Force Energy more efficiently than traditional crystals, allowing it to be used as a sort of "Storage cell" for force energies. What this means is that the crystal when properly modified the crystal could act as a portable reservoir of Force Energy. The Crystal can only be used by the first Narrikian to mine, and begin the work on the crystal unfortunately. As a result of this, the use of the Crystal is limited. Dark Jade possesses an ability when used properly or put in Force Relics to absorb Force Energy and store it. This can only hold enough Force Energy to power a small city block for a week.

 

[H3xle]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[H3xle]

[member="Sirius Nova"]

Overload: At maximum, Dark Jade can only store enough force energy to power a city block for a week at maximum.

This needs a bit more clarification, what happens when it reaches a maximum amount of energy? What happenes if it overloads?

Influenced: Dark Jade can be influenced by the Light Side, and the Dark Side of the Force. Tappable: This can be tapped by Jedi or Sith, if they know of it's existence.

What do these mean? How are these weaknesses rather than just traits? What do you mean by tapped?

The Crystal can only be used by the first Narrikian to mine, and begin the work on the crystal unfortunately.

This seems like a notable weakness, you might want to sub it out for one of the ones you currently list. It will also need clarification. Is this crystal only usable by Narrikians or does it bond with the first being to mine it?

 

[Warren Century]

[member="Taryc Ap'Irae"]

I believe I've made sufficient edits, correct me if I am wrong however. Are there any other things that you want changed, just so I can knock them out as well?

 

[H3xle]

[member="Sirius Nova"]

The edits look good, I just have one last question.

Does it only store energy used against it? That is the way it seems at the moment, and I wanted to know if you had meant it that way before we move forward.

 

[Warren Century]

Revised that, to make it more clear.

[member="Taryc Ap'Irae"]

 

[H3xle]

Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.

[member="Jamie Pyne"] [member="Raziel"] [member="Braith Achlys"]

 

[Cira]

Tappable: The Crystal acts as a "battery" for the Force, storing and containing the energies that are directed against it. As a result, should a Force User know of the existence of the Crystal they would be able to tap into the crystal with a lot of effort, and draw upon the reserves inside of the crystal, depleting it.

This is a strength, not a weakness.

Please add this to strengths.

 

[Warren Century]

[member="Cira"]

Edits have been completed.

 

[Cira]

Approved.