Approved Starship CNS Salvatore | Project 001

[Cypher Rage]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION​

• Intent: To Finally Submit The Flagship of Fleet Marshal Cypher Rage
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: The Confederate Corps. Of Engineering
• Affiliation: Cypher Rage, The Confederacy
• Model: (Salvatore type Experimental Weapons Platform
• 
  Production: Unique
  
• Material: (Durasteel, etc.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: (Command Ship, Heavy Battlecruiser
• Length: (5,000 Meters
• Width: 2,000 Meters
• Height: 3,000 Meters
• Armament: Very High
• 575x Heavy Turbolasers
• 575x Ion Cannons
• 5x Hypervelocity Cannons
• Defenses:Moderate
• Defense Shields
• Hangar Space: Extreme (48)
• Hangar Allocations:
  Starfighters: 40
• Support Craft: 8

[*]Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
[*]Speed Rating: Very Low
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average 1 Backup 12
STANDARD FEATURES
Bridge
Troop Barracks
Conference Room
Command Center (See Strengths)
Etc.

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
Hypervelocity Cannon
Kybe Focused Ion and Turbolaser Cannons
Strengths:

• Command Center: The Ship is the only vessel in the entire Confederated Navy that features a State of The Art Command Center. This is due in fact that the ships Commander, Fleet Marshal Cypher Rage, directs the entirety of the 3rd Fleet from here. The Command Center has the ability to be used as a secondary bridge and at all times has secondary control over the ships most vital systems and if the main bridge is immbolozied, the Command Center can take over at a moments notice.
• Hangar: The ship has a huge hangar that can house up to forty-eight squadrons of fighters and support vessels.

Weaknesses:

• Over Exposed Bridge: That would be why the C&C was installed in the ship. The old time saying a commander needs to be where he can see the battle went strongly into the design of this warship and as such, a over exposed bridge was the result. The ship's bridge controls the Artificial Gravity and Shield Systems which cannot be rerouted through the C&C which bascily leaves the ship ready for the kill

Description: The CNS Salvatore is the brainchild of the Confederate Techno Union and much credit is gone to them for the overall design and production however the massive Battlecruiser serves a more dignified purpose serving as the flagship of the 3rd Defense Fleet Attached to the Mirinda Sector Armada under the command of Fleet Marshal Cypher Rage, the Armadas Senior Tactical Officer formerly under High Marshal Kiff Brayde and now under the direct authority of Exarch Adron Malvern. The ship is a feat of old technology however it is a beast in ship to ship combat. The ship is classified as Project 001, and is just beginning initial testing phases. It is, of course destined to become affiliated with glory as time marches on

 

[Ettiene Kharne]

[member="Cypher Rage"]

Just checking in to see if there is any update on this or if it can be archived or moved over for active judgment

 

[Cypher Rage]

[member="Alden Akaran"]

Oh Yes! It can be moved for live judging

 

[Runi Verin]

Under Review.

 

[Runi Verin]

[member="Cypher Rage"]

Hey there. As this has been sitting in the pile for a few days now, I'll cut straight to the chase and get the review on the show.

Image Source: Halo

As I'm fairly confident this isn't a Halo vessel, please replace this with the actual image source and hyperlink it accordingly.

Manufacturer: The Confederacy, The Techno Union

Please can you hyperlink the manufacturers.

Affiliation: Cypher Rage, The Confederacy

Similarly, please can you hyperlink the CIS faction.

Material: (Durasteel, etc.

Please list and hyperlink the materials used in the construction of this vessel.

Armament: Very High
1,500 Quad Turbolasers
5x Hypervelocity Cannons
1,500 Ion Cannons

I am genuinely at a loss where you're getting these numbers from. This is quite frankly an obscene amount of weapons for a vessel of this size, class and Armament rating. Very few Star Dreadnaughts even had arsenals of this size.

Please note that the Resurgent-Class has 1,500 combined total for turbolasers, point defense cannons and ion cannons. Emphasis on the combined. I'd also point out that these are not quad turbolaser banks. Nor do they include hypervelocity cannons. This is beyond a 'Very High' rating.

If you make the above changes and then we'll come back for another pass.

 

[Cypher Rage]

[member="Runi Verin"]

On it!

 

[Cypher Rage]

[member="Runi Verin"]

I believe I fixed it all

 

[Runi Verin]

Approved.