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Approved Tech Chase Combat Umbrella

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: Umbrella Weapon
  • Image Source: Kingsman
  • Canon Link: n/a
  • Restricted Missions: n/a
  • Primary Source: n/a
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Charric
  • Size: Average
  • Weight: Light
  • Ammunition Type: Power Cell
  • Ammunition Capacity: 20 charges
  • Reload Speed: Very Low
  • Effective Range:Personal
  • Rate of Fire: Average
  • Stopping Power: High
  • Recoil: Average

  • Resistances
    - Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): Very High
    - Kinetic: High
    - Lightsabers: Very Low

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Transparent HUD
  • Blasterproof
  • Integrated charric
Strengths:
  • Stylish
  • High Protection
  • Surprise Armaments
  • Blaster Reflecting
Weaknesses:
  • Limited Ammunition
  • Limited Range
  • It's an Umbrella

DESCRIPTION
The Chase Combat Umbrella is a stylish accessory for rainy days. The Umbrella is based on a prototype used to fight the Sith [member="Velok the Younger"] on Thyferra. The original prototype was torn to ribbons by the large whiphid and lost in the ensuing battle however having held its own against a Sith Damian Starchaser decided it was worth investing in.

Hidden within the shaft is a charric weapon with an internal power source capable of firing semi automatic with a capacity of twenty shots and an effective range of a twenty meters. Because of the compact and internalized power source hidden within the umbrella a special charging dock is needed in order to 'reload' the weapon. This effectively gives it a limited combat efficiency. The Charric weapon is capable of shooting in a stun mode which is accessed through a HUD. As per standard with a charric it cannot be deflected by a ligthsaber and the added kinetic damage present in the weapons design means that a user attempting to do so might have their weapon thrown from hand.

Sleek and elegant the Umbrella has a core made of sturdy Concordian Cedar with durasteel runners holding a a layer of deflex and a layer shell spider silk. The Umbrella is capable of deflecting blaster bolts and taking hits from both energy weapons and slugthrowers. On the bottom side of the top is a transparency display showing what is on the other side of the umbrella allowing a user to stay shielded while returning fire on an opponent.
 
Hello, I will be reviewing your submission today.

Your Submission looks pretty interesting and cool, though there were two things that I noticed. First, you accidentally placed your Item's info twice, not really a big issue. I also would like to ask that you add some stuff from the armor template due to the shield like performance of the umbrella. Mostly just looking for a resistance section is all, that way its not a shock for anyone on the end of this thing.

Thank you. [member="Damian Starchaser"]
 
[member="Edric Vanyan"]

In fairness if you caught it immediately I actually pasted it 4 times. Have no clue why it did that lol. Anyways I added in the armor resistance line. Also added in the blaster deflects to the strengths because yeah it deflects blasters so it warrants a second mention.
 
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