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[Aiden Porte]

Haven't done one of these in a while. I figured I'd give it a go after I closed in on 1,500 posts. Just need some feedback on Aiden and myself as a writer, give me all. Goods and the bads! Any feedback at all would be greatly appreciated my friends!



1. Based on what you have read so far, what stands out most strongly about Aiden's personality? What feels most consistent about him across different scenes?


2. Are there any aspects of Aiden's motivations that feel unclear or underexplored? If so, what would you want to understand better about why he makes certain choices?


3. Is there anything about Aiden that feels too controlled, restrained, or polished as a character?


4. Overall, what keeps you invested in Aiden as a character, and what would make you even more invested going forward?



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Primarily questions about how I am as a writer and and how I come across via Discord. Same as above. Give me all, goods and bads! And in reference to other characters I write, Elian Abrantes Cassian Abrantes


1. Do my characters and scenes feel clear and easy to follow, or are there moments where you feel confused or unsure about my intent?


2. Do I come across as open and collaborative when plotting or responding to scenes, or do you ever feel hesitant to suggest changes or ideas?


3. In Discord conversations, do I come across as approachable and easy to talk to, or more serious and focused? How does that affect your comfort level interacting with me?


4. What is one thing you think I could do differently to improve collaboration or clarity when writing with others?


5. After interacting with me and my writing, what impression do you walk away with most often?

 

[Kitter Bitters]

I'm a long-time fan and I've enjoyed roleplaying with you for over a decade!

I think for Aiden he seems really well put together and honestly he comes off as a Jedi Master in his calm demeanor and his skill level. I could see him making that rank soon. To me his level head and quiet strength is what stands out the most.

On Discord you are so nice and always boosting up people. You do seem genuinely open to write with anybody who needs it.

 

[Sibylla Abrantes]

1. Based on what you have read so far, what stands out most strongly about Aiden's personality? What feels most consistent about him across different scenes?
I like how he is still very empathtic and does his best despite his struggles to find the hope and bright light in every situation. Very few chars do this as they tend to be trauma ptsders

2. Are there any aspects of Aiden's motivations that feel unclear or underexplored? If so, what would you want to understand better about why he makes certain choices?

I think I'd like to see more on what I read from the Set and Vere storyline in the world between worlds, and mature himself into the Jedi or indivdual he wants to be but not be under the shadow of his father.

3. Is there anything about Aiden that feels too controlled, restrained, or polished as a character?
I don't think so, I think you do your best based on what he has had tossed in him.

4. Overall, what keeps you invested in Aiden as a character, and what would make you even more invested going forward?
I enjoy reading his stories and seeing where he aims to go to. However, perhaps slowing down on the arcs and taking your time may help better understand and see the growth he gets from them.


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Primarily questions about how I am as a writer and and how I come across via Discord. Same as above. Give me all, goods and bads! And in reference to other characters I write, Elian Abrantes Elian Abrantes Cassian Abrantes Cassian Abrantes


1. Do my characters and scenes feel clear and easy to follow, or are there moments where you feel confused or unsure about my intent?

Yes they are easy to follow and I like that you push the story forward so that all writers can contribute to the story and not just be a response to what someone else is saying.

2. Do I come across as open and collaborative when plotting or responding to scenes, or do you ever feel hesitant to suggest changes or ideas?

Open and colaborative.

3. In Discord conversations, do I come across as approachable and easy to talk to, or more serious and focused? How does that affect your comfort level interacting with me?

I think you come across approchable and easy to talk to!

4. What is one thing you think I could do differently to improve collaboration or clarity when writing with others?

You write so much and so fast which is great, but then it also makes me feel a little behind on the story. Not a big issue it is just you post wonderfully fast and then I have a double take on what has occured. Not a bad thing, just means I am a little delayed on what is going on.

5. After interacting with me and my writing, what impression do you walk away with most often?

That you are a super fun writer and a consistant poster who is open to interacting and ploting all kinds of wonderful plotlines!