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[Caden Evesa]

Hello!

So I've been back a while now, and as much as I said I wouldn't the majority of this return has been spent writing Caden.

Which begs the question, how does Chaos in general feel about him? Not only that, but my writing as a whole. I feel like there's a few cool ideas in the works for Caden so I'll be interested to see what people think!

Thank you in advance!

 

[Jasper Kai'el]

I like Caden a lot. It's nice to see characters that are headstrong and reactionary that also don't go unpunished. He get's the job done, but he gets scraped up in the process, which is something I like that you committed to. Uh, I don't know if I can think of any specifics for potential character routes, but I think an arc where he works towards being less reckless could be fun. Maybe by needing to be a roll model perhaps? I wonder what might cause that >:^). But yeah. Caden good. Do more.