Approved Starship Axe Class Corvette "Last Word/Final Line" (Known by Both)

[Talon Aegis]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Talon's Personal ship
• Image Source: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/qyVJe
• Canon Link: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Talon Richwood
• Affiliation: Talon Richwood
• Model: TIE (https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Twin_ion_engine)
• Production: Unique
• Material: Durasteel(https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Durasteel)

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Personal Transport
• Length: 50 Meters
• Width: 45 meters
• Height: 10 meters
• Armament: Average

Servo Turrets (https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/1D_servo_turret) (On the back)
Spitfire Rapid-fire Laser x2 (https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Spitfire_rapid-fire_laser_cannon) (on the sides of the nose)
Concussion Missile Tubes (2 Missiles each) (https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Concussion_missile/Legends)

• Defenses: Average

Ion Shield (https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ion_shield)
Deflector Shield (https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Deflector_shield)

• Hangar Space: N/A

• Hangar Allocations:
  B-W Medium Fighter (http://starwarsrp.net/topic/65440-b-w-medium-fighter/#entry975703)
• Maneuverability Rating: High
• Speed Rating: High
• Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2

STANDARD FEATURES
Ion Shields
TIE
Deflector Shields
Servo Turrents
Spitfire Rapid-Fire Laser x2
Concussion Missile x4 (2 tubes)
a storage room with 10 m x 10 m x 4 m (Length, width and height)
2 sets of quarters
one armory room

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
B-W Medium Fighter


Strengths:

• Speed: The Ship is very fast
• Escape Ship: It has a hatch below the hull and cockpit

Weaknesses:

• Shields: The ships shields aren't the best, not too much power, one well placed missile would take it down

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Description: The Final Line is Talon's personal Corvette, he uses it for transport and he cares for it dearly. It has an extra ship attached below the hull (B-W Medium Fighter) facing the opposite direction. It is a fast ship without the most power but it can effectively fire the weapons but at the cost of it's shields.

 

[Runi Verin]

[member="Talon Richwood"]

Defenses:

Missing the rating here. Judging from the loadout, I would put Average.

Defenses:

Another missed rating. Again, I feel Average is appropriate.

Hangar Space: 1
Hangar Allocations: B-W Medium Fighter (http://starwarsrp.ne...edium-fighter/)

A vessel of this type needs to be much, much larger in order to be able to support a fighter. Please see the spoiler for reference.

Spoiler

Hangar Space: (Please provide the amount of fighters/support craft this submission can hold in it's hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )

• 100 Meters: [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 0 | Moderate: 0 | High: 0 | Very High: 1 | Extreme: 2]
• 200 Meters: [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 1 | Moderate: 1 | High: 2 | Very High: 3 | Extreme: 4]

In order to keep the ratings balance, you would need to increase the size of the vessel to 200m. Which judging by your intent, I think goes against what you're trying to achieve here. I recommend removing it entirely. Up to you, however.

 

[Talon Aegis]

[member="Runi Verin"] I have made the updates, but please notify me if at all possible I can have that ship on it, while keeping the size. Thank you

 

[Runi Verin]

[member="Talon Richwood"]

If this is only one escape ship, I'm okay with cutting a break on this. Add it back in on the hangar, but also mention it in the Advanced Systems if you would. Give me a nudge when this is done and I'll review.

 

[Talon Aegis]

[member="Runi Verin"] done, thank you very much

 

[Runi Verin]

<p>Approved.</p>