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Name: Arch (Named after the Arch Family that discovered it)
Coordinates: F11
Climate: Cold climate. Temperate climate for the most part, with four season cycle. Humid in the coastal regions.
Terrain: Oceans, and plains, with occasional mountains, make up most of the planet. Arch has artic poles. Part of the continent Slian is an active volcanic zone.
Rotation: 28 standard hours
Inhabitants: There are no sentient organisms. It does hold an assortment of fauna. The most known native to Arch is the Yali.
Resources: Arch has some deposits of Farium (found mostly on volcanic area of Slian), Alumabronze (common on Cnuruodo) and Mullinine (rare; generally found in the volcanic Slian and the dormant underwater volcanoes near the Cnuruodo coastline) scattered throughout the planet. Agriculture is a main resource of Arch.
Government: Arch is controlled by the Arch Family, a noble Chiss family that discovered the planet. The planet is technically a part of the Chiss Ascendancy.
Economy: Arch holds the standard Chiss economy.
Culture: There is no particular culture on Arch. The Arch Family is seen on high regard on the planet, due to establishing a strong presence on the planet.
Technology: Arch holds modern Chiss technological capabilities, though is not as colonized as much as other Chiss planets, as to keep the natural beauty. It is equipped with modern farming capabilities and hold standard Chiss defenses.
Satellites: Arch holds a moon called Thrawn, named after the Grand Admiral of the same name.
History: Arch is mostly inhabited by the Arch Family during one of the many Chiss expansions decades ago. On the edge of Ascendancy space, it was meant to be converted as a relay station for further expansion, enabling docking, repairs, and supplies, especially foodstuff. Since its colonization, which was kept at a minimum, Arch has remained under Arch authority. During the rise of Arch control over the Imperator position over several successions, Arch became a Chiss emergency headquarters, equipped to run the Chiss Ascendancy were anything to happen to Csilla. However, in the current day and age, Arch is mainly used to supply food to the southern area of the main Chiss Ascendancy space and to ship supplies to the Rattatak area. Its coastal regions on the continent Cnuruodo, which is parallel to the continent Slian, have been converted to a private resort/vacation home to the Arch Family.
Notable PC's: While Chiss Twins Arch'elie'lia and Arch'aza'cnuruodo were born on Csilla, they spent many vacations on Arch, it almost becoming a second home.
 
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Hello there, I'll be looking at your submission today.

From the offset I see a number of issues with the Template itself. Please could you make sure that all submissions you submit follow the correct Template; This is the one for Planets.

Template aside, as someone who has written at the board I presume you originate from, I know that Arch and the Yali are directly taken from another roleplaying site. In fact, the family/characters mentioned within are the work of another - unless you happen to be Weiss, in which case you're free to PM me in order to clarify this.

12. Plagiarism is not allowed.

Unless you are one of the individuals who worked on Arch, this is a direct violation of the above rule.

You're welcome to change up the submission in order to fit with our template and timeline, so long as you provide substantial edits - including the removal/renaming of the PC Characters and their Lineage. Please be aware that the Chiss Ascendancy is not an official government on Chaos, and planets such as Csilla have been claimed by other Factions.

I'm willing to work with you on this, if you're open to the edits. I'll go into more detail on exactly what needs expanding upon/changing if you are.
 
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