Anti matter torpedo

[sabrina]

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Intent: To create a powerful, and deadly war head for ship to ship battles
Development Thread: Does it matter or is it Anti matter
Manufacturer: Krayt Industries
Model: KI-AMT-MkI
Affiliation: One Sith and her allies
Modularity: No
Production: Mass Production
Description: The warhead is designed to give off a major explosion, directed at the ships hull. While a single war head, is not capable of destroying a ship, unless a lucky shot. It can pierce hull and shields, though the damage is in small radius of hull. Though the internal damage would be greater as the anti matter is thrown into the hull.

The weapon requires a heavy launch bay, as it has to be kept in charged. Other wise the stasis feild may drop and destroy the ship. Due to this it can only be deployed on corvettes and higher. Also is only available on minor production ships, due to production capabilities.

Classification: Heavy warhead
Size: Ship mounted
Length: 5 meters
Weight: 2 ton
Status: military
Ammunition Type: Anti matter
Ammunition Capacity: 1 Shot
Effective Range: 10000 Meter

Rate of Fire: Single

 

[Valik]

[member="sabrina"]


I'm extremely confused here. I can't get a feel for what kind of damage the warhead can do, and you're not taking the time to explain how it works, why it works that way, and the explanation on how much damage it does seems jumbled and difficult to read. Plus the range, while unexplained in it's nature, is five times larger than the biggest non-even ship that can be produced on the board, and still larger than the largest even ship on the board. Not to mention mass-production(which oddly conflicts with the description). Ultimately this submission is going to require extensive edits in order to get through.

 

[sabrina]

[member="Valik"] the weapon is mass production, but it could only be used on minor production ships. As I intend to make few of them, which would be capable of using the weapon. So while the ships is minor production, a few of them would require a mass production missile.

1: you want damage assessment
2: not sure by what you mean 5 times larger, cruise missile is bit longer
3: range was not sure what to put their so copied some else

 

[sabrina]

[member="Valik"] I am redoing my entry explosive, as it was same dev thread for both. Could you archive this for know

 

[Valik]

Archived at owner's request.