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Amarok-class Battlecruiser

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Faer'hia'nuruodo

Grand Admiral Rhianu
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Initial Ratings:
Production: Limited
Armament: Very High
Defenses: Very High
Maneuverability Rating: Low
Speed Rating: Low
Hangar: 4

Updated Ratings:
Production: Semi-Unique (-1 Tier)
Armament: Extreme (+1 Tiers)
Defenses: Extreme (+1 Tiers)
Maneuverability Rating: Low
Speed Rating: Low
Hangar: 0 (-4 Squadrons)

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[*]Frame:

[*]Misc:


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  • Classification: Battlecruiser
  • Length: 3000m
  • Width: 1400m
  • Height: 750m
  • Maneuverability Rating: Low
  • Speed Rating: Low
  • Hyperdrive Class: Class 0.6 (Class 15.0 Backup)
  • Crew: 102,400
    Minimum Crew: 25,600

[*]Passengers: 24,000
[*]Cargo Capacity: Astronomical
[*]Consumables: 6 years
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[*]Environmental Systems:

[*]Medical Bay
[*]Navigation System
[*]Ray Shields

[*]Propulsion Systems:

[*]Sensor and Targeting Systems:

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[*]Warhead Armament:


[*]Total: 850

[*]Defensive Armament:


[*]Overall Total: 5,210
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[*]Reinforced Hull

[*]Systems:


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  • 0 x Squadron
  • Many x Transports
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  • Strengths:
    [+] Interdiction Capabilities: Equipped with Gravity Well Projectors, the Amarok is able to trap its prey, preventing them from escaping via hyperspace.
  • [+] Offensive Capabilities: With a variety of powerful weaponry, the Amarok boasts unrivaled firepower.
  • [+] Defensive Capabilities: Equipped with double redundant deflector shields, and a reinforced hull, the Amarok possesses unmatched defenses.

[*]Weaknesses:
  • [-] Hangar Capacity: Unable to house any starfighters, the Amarok is reliant on support craft to protect it.
  • [-] Firing-Arc: Few of the Amarok's weapons can fire on targets to its rear.

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The Amarok-class Battlecruiser was a warship conceived for planetary defense, planetary assault, troop transport, and ship-to-ship combat. It was designed by Iron Wrath Industries, and produced by the Iron Empire. It saw use as part of the Iron Imperial Navy, serving the role of a Interdiction Battlecruiser. At 3,000 metres in length, the Amarok was one of the largest warships in the Iron Imperial fleet.

Expected to be deployed across a variety of combat scenarios, the Amarok-class Battlecruiser was outfitted with a diverse range of offensive weaponry. Primarily intended for space supremacy, the Amarok featured: 40 Heavy Long Range Turbolaser Batteries, 40 Long Range Turbolaser Batteries, 50 Heavy Turbolaser Batteries, 60 Turbolaser Batteries, 30 Long Range Ion Batteries, 40 Heavy Ion Batteries, 50x Ion Batteries, 60x Mass Driver Batteries, 12 Hyper Velocity Guns, 2 Orbital Autocannons, and 85 General Purpose Warhead Tubes. These weapons allowed the Battlecruiser to engage enemy vessels at any range. However, it was at its most effective in close-to-mid range combat.

To protect the vessel, the Amarok was equipped with Primary Deflector Shields, Redundant Deflector Shields, Double Redundant Deflector Shields, and a reinforced hull. While the Primary, and Redundant, Shield Generators sat nestled within the Amarok itself, the Double Redundant Shield Generators stood atop its bridge tower.

This combination of extreme offensive weaponry, and supreme defensive equipment, left the Amarok with no space to transport starfighters. As such, it could not house any starfighters. However, so as not to be easy prey for enemy starfighters, the Amarok was outfitted with numerous anti-starfighter weaponry, including: 60 Point Defense Cannons, 60 Anti-missile Octets, 60 Flak Cannons, and 60 Quad Laser Cannons.
 
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Gir Quee

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[member="Faer'hia'nuruodo"], same formatting issue as with the Asena-class. I'll place it here again:

[member="Faer'hia'nuruodo"], looks solid conceptually.

For the formatting though, we have to consider one of the "Standardized Codex & Factory rules":
  • The entire template must be used in your submission. The template's fields are not to be changed/removed/altered, additional information may be added but base fields may not be changed or removed. If you have nothing to add for a certain section, simply put ‘N/A’
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With that in mind, if you replace several of the "rating" headings with "armament" and "defenses". Additionally (and I just made this exact same mistake myself), if you will change "Advanced Features" to "Advanced Systems".


As far as conception wise, this is one rating too high. Alternatively, the two squadrons of fighters can be removed, and this will be balanced.

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