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Approved Starship Alex

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Alor of Clan Gred, Mando'ad'jetii
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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Concord Specialized Technology[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [member="Noah Corek"][/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Model:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Enigma-class FAC[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Production[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Unique[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Material: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Durasteel[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Fast Attack Corvette[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Length[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 170 m[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Width[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 134 m[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Height[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 30 m[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Armament[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Extreme[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt](2x Forward mounted [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Varactyl Dual Heavy Turbolasers[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], 2x Universal launch tubes, 2x quad laser turrets, Composite-beam laser) ([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Very Low[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] when at [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Boost[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Speed)[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Defenses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Low[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt](Shielding)[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Hangar Space[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Low[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 0[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Maneuverability Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderate[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]High [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]when at Boost Speed)[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Speed Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderate[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt].([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]High [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]when at Boost Speed)[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Hyperdrive Class[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 1[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]STANDARD FEATURES[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Landing gear[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Shields[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Durasteel hull[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]C1 “Spark” Tactical Droid[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]2x Varactyl Dual Heavy Turbolasers[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]2x Universal launch tubes[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]2x Quad laser turrets[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]1 Escape pod (Forward bridge)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]ADVANCED SYSTEMS[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Boost Speed: The Enigma-class can divert power from it’s Varactyl Dual Heavy Turbolasers to its drive systems. When it does this, the forward weapons are deactivated, and the engines gain a speed boost.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Composite-Beam Laser: The Alex is equipped with a composite-beam laser similar to that of the B-Wing Prototype. The weapon is powerful enough to decimate much larger vessels, notably capable of punching straight through the shields and hull of an Imperial Arquitens-class light cruiser with ease, but it has a slow rate of fire. The range of the weapon is also a factor, only having an effective range of 2500 meters, meaning that the Alex needs to get up close and personal in order to damage its target. Also, when firing, all other weapons system cannot fire, as all power is diverted to power the beam. For pvp purposes, it can only be fired once every other turn.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Strengths[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Fast and maneuverable.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Forward firepower.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Composite-beam laser.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Shields and sensors housed in lower nacelles.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Limited firepower outside of its forward arc.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Slow composite-beam fire.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Description[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: The [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Alex [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]is a custom built Enigma-class FAC built for Noah Corek. The corvette features a composite-beam laser that allows it to decimate larger vessels. This beam is slow however, and in the fast paced combat that the Enigmas excel in may not always be able to fire at a target.[/SIZE]
 
[member="Mig Gred"]

Hey, I like the idea behind this submission, but there were a few questions I wanted to clear up with you.



Mig Gred said:
Armament: Extreme (2x Forward mounted Varactyl Dual Heavy Turbolasers, 2x Universal launch tubes, 2x quad laser turrets, Composite-beam laser) (Very Low when at Boost Speed)


Mig Gred said:
4x Varactyl Dual Heavy Turbolasers
In one place you say the ship has 2 Varactyl Dual Heavy Turbolasers, but in the other you say it has 4. Could you clarify which is correct?

Also, the composite beam weapon is a very powerful weapon. Could you please go into some more details as to it's capabilities? As it currently stands I'm not sure of the range of the weapon, or it's damage capabilities which could lead to confusion should the weapon be used in Pvp. I would suggest you do a separate submission for this weapon so that anyone who wants has a clear idea of the weapons range and power etc. Baring that could you please expand upon the weapon in this submission to give us a better idea of what it's capable of.

As always, the above are just requests, and if you wish I'll approve the submission in it's current form. Please tag me once you have decided what you want to do.
 
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[member="John Locke"]

Sorry about the Turbolaser count. as using another app as a base. Also, added details to the Composite-beam using the B-Wing as a base for what's said.
 
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