Approved Starship Admonition-class Transport

[Ashin Varanin]

[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]Intent:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] A new line of elite personal transports[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Image Source:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]EVE Online: Amarr Retribution[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] screencap[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Canon Link:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] N/A[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Development Thread:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] The Admonition is built to exploit weaknesses in heavy First Order and Imperial Remnant capital ships. Theed Hangar obtained in-depth scans of various heavy capital ship models in the following threads:[/SIZE]
  [SIZE=9pt]Empty Threats: Void Station Attack[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] - 3 posts ([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]32[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]38[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt],[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]47[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]) - scanning First Order and Imperial Remnant capital ships[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Border Surveillance: GA Dominion of Asmeru and Barkhesh[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] - 21 posts ([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]2[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]11[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]13[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]18[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]25[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]29[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]30[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]36[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]37[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]39[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]41[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]47[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]49[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]60[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]78[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]79[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]84[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]96[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]99[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]108[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]111[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]) - Theed Hangar obtains in-depth scans of two First Order capital ships - note that I’ve opted to just link the capital ship engagement and negotiation posts for the most part, as they’re the most relevant bit[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Varunda IX: Scouting Mission[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] - 11 posts - Theed Hangar performs a recon run on the First Order and obtains scans of a capital ship and a station[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Total: 35 posts[/SIZE]

[*][SIZE=9pt]Primary Source:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] None[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Theed Palace Space Vessel Engineering Corps[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Model:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Admonition-class Transport[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Closed Market, Theed Hangar, Government of Naboo[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Production[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Semi-unique[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Material:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Durasteel hull[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]Classification[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Elite personal transport, light corvette[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Length[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 50m[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Width[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 30m[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Height[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 20m[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Armament[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 17[/SIZE]
  [SIZE=9pt]6 heavy quad ion cannon turrets, centreline-mounted[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]4 quad laser cannons[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]6 antimissile octets[/SIZE]

[*][SIZE=9pt]Defenses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 10[/SIZE]
[*][SIZE=9pt]Hangar[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 0 Squadrons[/SIZE]
[*][SIZE=9pt]Maneuverability Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 3[/SIZE]
[*][SIZE=9pt]Speed Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 3[/SIZE]
[*][SIZE=9pt]Hyperdrive Class[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: 1[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]SPECIAL FEATURES[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]Centreline-mounted heavy turrets[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Advanced engines and maneuvering thrusters[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Advanced astromech-based self-repair protocols[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Strengths[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]Heavy, laterally omnidirectional, ion-based loadout[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Very fast and nimble[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Limited self-repair capability[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]Light defensive loadout[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Pretty much incapable of doing actual damage[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Description[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: The Admonition-class doesn’t fit the usual operational profiles for a vessel its size. It fails at every classic role of a corvette and, as personal transports go, it’s far from the most versatile. It can’t throw a punch or take much in the way of a hit. At best it’s unusually quick for its size, though there are certainly faster elite transports around. To some eyes it’s a curiosity, a boondoggle, an oddity, and a darn good way to wind up dead if you don’t know exactly what you’re doing. To others, it’s one of the most uniquely capable starships ever built. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]The Admonition’s defenses are nothing impressive, but they’re more than enough to handle fire from capital ship defensive weapons and the occasional turbolaser, as long as the Admonition keeps moving. For armament, the Admonition has not much more than ion cannons -- good ones, to be sure, but incapable of causing anywhere near a standard emplacement’s damage. Excellent engines and maneuvering systems, including lateral maneuvering jets, advanced etheric rudder assemblies, and a highly-tuned close-range navigational sensor, allow the Admonition to run rings around larger ships. As far as amenities go, the Admonition has a modular residential compartment that can fit varying proportions of crew and passengers in confined space or elegant comfort. It’s fairly simple to operate, but deceptively challenging to use correctly.[/SIZE]

 

[Julius Sedaire]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[Julius Sedaire]

Specialized ship with a very odd use... I'd advise lucky fuzzy dice on the mirror, if this thing gets hit hard it might not end well.

 

[Julius Sedaire]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Cira"]

 

[Raziel]

Approved.