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969 Luminous Sin - Advanced Droid

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: An ancient, advanced droid to be found by the Galactic Empire.
  • Image Source:
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    Found here.
  • Canon Link: N/A.
  • Restricted Missions: N/A.
  • Primary Source: 343 Guilty Spark from the Halo franchise.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Ancient, advanced and now-extinct race.
  • Model: N/A.
  • Production: Unique
  • Affiliation: Galactic Empire (for now, anyway)
  • Modularity: No.
  • Material: Advanced type of steel, resistant to most types of damage.
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: Third Degree.
  • Weight: 100kg
  • Height: 40cm
  • Movement: Repulsor-lift
  • Armaments: Advanced laser beam
  • Misc. Equipment: Sensors, scanners, analysis/access laser, energy shield, gravity field generator,
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Able to access most places and bypass security doors and such defenses.
  • Its offence and analysis capacities are all located in its eye, which is the most reinforced part of its hull.
Strengths:
  • Enormous amount of knowledge.
Weaknesses:
  • Unreliable in battle; the laser, albeit powerful, needs some seconds to effectively neutralize a threat, something which would probe to be fatal against several ennemies.
  • Strict adherence to protocol, no matter what.
DESCRIPTION

Built by an advanced race thousands of years ago, this special artificial intelligence was engineered to lead the efforts in the containment of a catastrophic outbreak of one of the most deadly plagues in the galaxy. Failing in its task, it shut itself down, only to be found and reactivated by scavengers much later. Since then, it roams the galaxy in search of a way to fulfill his programming - something which he would get an opportunity to accomplish during the Gulag Plague, working hard in order to limit the damages as much as possible. When the plague finally ended, it kept searching for a definitive way to end it should it come back, and resumed its roaming, searching for new lifeforms, pursuing an endless search for knowledge.

Because of its programming, this intelligence is quite limited, following protocol to the letter, despite how little sense it might make in a certain situation. after thousands of years of existence, its integrity has been slightly hampered, frustrated by its inability to feel emotions as humanoid races do, filling it with jealousy and contempt for most organics.
 
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NT-6922 said:
this special artificial intelligence
NT-6922 said:
frustrated by its inability to feel emotions as humanoid races do, filling it with jealousy and contempt for most organics.
AI are a restricted material requiring a restricted mission objective to be completed. As there is not one listed, please go through this submission and edit any perceivable notion that this is an AI unless you intend to perform the AI objective, in which case I will archive this submission until you are ready to proceed.

NT-6922 said:
Able to access most places and bypass security doors and such defenses.
  • Please elaborate on what its limitations and abilities are regarding this. What definies 'most places', how does it bypass doors and defenses?
NT-6922 said:
energy shield, gravity field generator
  • These should be listed in the strengths, and what is the gravity field generator's primary function in this submission? how big is it?
NT-6922 said:
Material: Advanced type of steel, resistant to most types of damage.
  • This needs to be a specific type of material. It cannot simply be stated to be resistant to damage whilst being a vaguely referenced steel.
NT-6922 said:
Armaments: Advanced laser beam
  • How powerful is this? What is its range? Is this a blaster?
NT-6922 said:
Strengths: Enormous amount of knowledge.
  • Knowledge of what?
One other thing to note: This submission is dancing dangerously close to the plagiarism clause. I would suggest you make edits to the description and wording in this submission because as it appears now, in its very name and description this is quite literally just a Halo crossover.
 

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