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[Darth Metus]

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[Jagen Wren]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To finally make a personal set of Mandalorian armor for Jagen Wren.
• Image Source: Here.
• Development Thread: SoonTM

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Jagen Wren
• Model: N/A
• Affiliation: Jagen Wren
• Modularity: Wrist gauntlets are interchangeable
• Production: Unique
• Material:
  Beskar-Ciridium Alloy
• Stygian Triprismatic Polymer
• Alum
• Durafiber
• Durasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Beskar'gam
• Weight: 22 kilograms
• Quality: 10

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Resistances:
  Major resistance to lightsaber attacks, heavy strikes can be withstood by the plated parts of the armor.
• Major resistance to blaster bolts, civilian-grade and military-grade weaponry alike will only scorch the plates and hurt somewhat, but will pierce areas only covered by the durafiber bodysuit.
• Major resistance to vibroblades, most blades and vibroblades would only scratch the armor, though enhanced blades might just cut.
• Medium resistance to slugs, slugs hurt more than regular blaster bolts would towards the user, but still not powerful enough to piece the armor.

[*]​Helmet/HUD:​

• Thermal Imaging
• Infrared Imaging
• Low Light Imaging
• Night Vision
• Dark Vision
• Target Tracker
• Long Range Target Assistance
• Holo Recorder
• Internal Overlay Display
• Macrobinoculars
• Motion Sensors
• Environmental Scanners
• Sonic Nullifying Ear Protectors
• Polarizing Visor Lenses
• Medical Status Monitor
• Encrypted Internal Commlink
• Internal Broadband Antenna
• Internal Oxygen Scrubber System

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• ​JT-12 Jetpack
• Blast Energy Sinks
• Combat De-Ionizers
• Electromagnetic Boots​

[*]​Weapons Systems:

• Left Arm: ​ZX Miniature Flame Projector
• Left Arm: Dur-24 Wrist Laser
• Right Arm: MM9 Rocket System
• Right Arm: ARGH Echani-Graphite Grappling Hook

Strengths:

• Technology: The suit of beskar'gam has many technological suits in both the body and helmet portions, mainly enhancing combat with weapons and multiple vision modes. This easily gives the wearer an advantage over others in certain terrains such as complete darkness.
• Strong: The plating is made up of a plethora of durable alloys such as Beskar and Ciridum, giving it a variety of resistances against blades, blasters, and even lightsabers.

Weaknesses :

• Technology: While the technology in the body and the helmet give an advantage, an EMP burst or the like will most likely knock it out, leaving it a durable suit of armor. This can also affect the gauntlet weapons and the jetpack.
• Unprotected: While the plating itself is extremely durable, the joints and other unplated areas are susceptible to blows and blasts.

Description: Modeled after the armor of Mandalorian Crusaders during the Cold War and oncoming Great Galactic War; Jagen Wren's armor combines durability with technology to give him an edge over his opponents on the battlefield. Made primarily of Mandalorian Iron, Beskar, mixed with Ciridium to form a very durable alloy that plates this armor coinciding with other materials such as Durasteel and Durafiber, the armor provides a decent amount of resistance against lightsabers, blasters, and blades.

Like other Mandalorian beskar'gam, the armor features a jetpack as well as multiple gauntlet weapons. Unlike other Mandalorian armors, the armor is less bulkier which means less heavy, giving the wearer more agility than normal armor would permit. Integrated into the helmet are multiple technological suites as well as vision enhancing modes and targeting computers.

A few weaknesses that the armor has is actually the technology, it is rather unprotected meaning an EMP burst or stray ion grenade could fry the systems. The joints themselves as well as other unplated areas are not as durable as the plated areas, meaning that a lightsaber strike or the like could cleanly cut through with relative ease. Overall, the armor will serve as a powerful addition to Jagen's arsenal.

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Jagen Wren"]

I stopped reading when i saw quality 6, go 10.

 

[Vilaz Munin]

For the resistance part, Mandalorian armor with beskar on it can take major blows from lightsabers and blaster bolts.

You're good on the virboblade resistance.

The armor will have some resistance to slugs, but they will hurt more than a blaster bolt.

Also, bump the quality up to 9 or 10.

[member="Jagen Wren"]

 

[Ria Misrani]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  Intent: To create a gunship that can help rebuild the Mandalorians.
  
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  Image Source: Ansel Haiso // Artstation (x)
  
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  Canon Link: Tractor Pressor (x)| Sensor Masks (x) | Optical Shield (x) | IFF Confuser (x) | Chaff (x) | Anti-Ion Emissions Tracer (x) | 4x-Phantom Short Range Sensor Jammer (x)
  
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  Restricted Missions: N/A
  
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  Primary Source: BTK-599 Orbital Drop Pod | SWRP Factory (x)
  

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

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  Manufacturer: House Verd Hangar and Armory (x)
  
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  Model: Mantis-type, HVGS-A2 “Auli’i”
  
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  Affiliation: House Verd | Open Market [Contract Thread Required]
  
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  Production: Mass-Produced
  
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  Material:
  
  Quadanium-steel Plating, Outer Hull
  
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  Turadium/Durasteel Compound Liner
  
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  Alusteel-reinforced Hull
  
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  Tunqstoid Blast Doors
  
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  Transparisteel Viewports w/ Durasteel Shutter Rigs
  
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  Reinforced Duraplast Insulator between the Hull and Liner
  

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

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  Classification: Large Gunship
  
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  Length: 72m
  
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  Width: 86m
  
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  Height: 68m
  
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  Armament: High
  
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  12 Twin Rapid-fire, Turbolaser Cannon
  
  2 Starboard, 2 Port, 2 Forward, 4 Rear
  
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  180° Arc and Turn
  

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Twin Heavy Turbolaser Cannon,

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  180° Arc, Top
  
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  360° Turn
  

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2 Heavy Plasma Cutters

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Defenses: High

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  Sensor Masks (x)
  
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  Optical Shield (x)
  
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  Reinforced Hull, Insulated
  
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  Standard Warship Shield
  
  Atmospheric Modification
  

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IFF Confuser (x)

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Chaff (x)

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Anti-Ion Emissions Tracer (x)

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4x-Phantom Short Range Sensor Jammer (x)


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Squadron Count:

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  4 Balutar-class Swoops (x) (Lower Hangar)
  
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  2 BTK-599 Orbital Drop Pod (x) (Upper Hangar)
  

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Maneuverability Rating: Very Low

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Speed Rating: Very Low

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Hyperdrive Class: 1

SPECIAL FEATURES

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  Cockpit: Navigations, main communications, flight control, main system controls are here, the cockpit has room for four people, the pilot, co-pilot, navigations and communications.
  
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  Medbay: Two medical personnel can work here, there’s room for two beds and one bacta tank should the need arise for it.
  
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  Cargo Hold: Extensive cargo storage for whatever it is the Knight should need or want to haul around with them.
  
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  Workshop: Between the hangar and cargo hold you’ll find a workshop complete with benches, shelves and tools so that those aboard can craft, modify or repair arms and armor. It’s just wide enough to allow a track through to move the drop pods/swoops.
  
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  Repair Bay: Where the drop pods and swoop bikes are repaired it sits in the cargo hold with a track to help move the drop pods.
  
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  Cabins: Four to a room, there are three cabins with two that are conjoined by a shared latrine.
  
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  Kitchenette: While not a large galley, the kitchenette should serve the appropriate function it is designed for.
  
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  Captain’s Cabin: Large enough to fit the Captain, along with one companion should the Captain chose to do so. It comes standard with a desk, and built in latrine.
  
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  Armoury: Essential to every Mandalorian are their weapons and armour and within the Auli’i you will find a place to store them.
  
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  Holotable: The main meeting area and thru traffic center of the ship.
  
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  Gunner’s Nests: Located around the ship, this is where gunners would sit and manually operate the ship’s weapons.
  
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  Engine Room: This is where the Auli'i type's engines are housed, it's also where the bulk of her tricks (control systems) are located.
  
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  Lower Hangar: Houses the four swoop bikes and also houses a set of lockers and cargo containers for storage.
  
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  Upper Hangar: The lower hangar has another set of stairs that leads toward the Upper Hangar, where the drop pods are launched from.
  
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  Standard Warship Hazard and Damage Control Systems
  
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  Standard Warship Sensors and Targeting Systems
  
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  Standard Warship Communications Systems
  
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  Standard Warship Environmental Control Systems
  
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  Standard Warship Tractor Beam
  

Strengths:

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  [+] Crafty, Sheila: The Auli’i has a variety of tricks of up her sleeves, and a strong hull to keep her going through a fight.
  

Weaknesses:

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  [-] Magpies: A lack of warheads and ion weaponry means that the Auli’i is susceptible to large capital ships as well as smaller attack craft that can out manoeuvre her.
  
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  [-] A Roo’s Bag: She’s slower than she looks, speed and manoeuvrability are not on her side, meaning whatever the Auli’i is looking to do, she needs to do fast and move.
  

Description:

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  After arriving on Bespin, Amaya Verd sat down with [member="Ashin Karrde"] and a set of lawyers, geneticist and whoever else needed to be there at the meeting. The meeting to confirm and solidify her place as the Heir to House Cardei, the daughter of Lady Ajira Cardei. Access to Theed Hangar and a seat with the Naboo Court. More importantly this also meant access to her inheritance. Lady Ajira Cardei bequeathed to her daughter an obscene amount of money that would be overseen by a trust until her daughter reached the age of twenty-one. Amaya was twenty-two when this was read and given to her.
  
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  She used part of this money to fund HVHAR. HVHAR ran and operated by Amaya and a handful of Clan Verd worked to mass produce the Auli’i based off her own redesign of the D5 Mantis patrol craft from over millennia. Amaya created her Auli’i Mantis from salvage she found while growing up and living on Taris. Once she and Ashin had concluded business on Bespin. Amaya returned home to Onderon where she began working on what initially started as a refit to the Auli’i and snowballed into a mass-produced dual roled, gunship and dropship for the Mando’ade as provided by HVHAR.
  

 

[Kurayami Bloodborn]

Armored Flightsuit

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: Replace the Mk. 4 Expeditionary armor

Image Source: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/50524827044739231

Canon Link: N/A

Restricted Missions: N/A

Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: Kurayami Bloodborn and Mandalorian armorsmiths

Model: 'Aquila' Armored Flightsuit

Affiliation: Kurayami Bloodborn

Modularity: Yes

Production: Unique

Material: Phrik armorweave, Folded Beskar alloy(Ciridium and carbon added), Faraday cage, Reinforced duraplast, Electronic components

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Medium Armor

Weight: 13 kg

Quality:10(plates/helm/joint protection)
Bodysuit/flight jacket-8

SPECIAL FEATURES

-Modularity
-360 degree HUD
-Enhanced sensor suite(MULTI enhanced vision system, Bioscanners, sound suppression/amplification, and optical zoom up to 30x)
-EMP hardened
-Helmet includes Environmental filter/rebreather systems and can be environmentally sealed to the suit
-Encrypted commlink and Holonet access
-Highly resistant to, blasters, lightsabers, and slug throwers
-Crushgaunts
-Knuckle-plate vibrobaldes
-Magno-grip boots

DETAILED SPECIAL FEATURES

-Modularity: Allows for various weapons to be equipped to hardpoints on the forearm of the gauntlets
-360 degree HUD:Allows for enhanced situational awareness
-Enhanced sensor systems: MULTI enhanced vision system(bioscanners,passive light amplification, thermal signature reading, ultrasound pickup, millimeter wave emission, and video capture), Sound suppression/amplification, Optical zoom up to 30x
-EMP hardened: Through the use of a faraday cage the suit is highly resistant to EMP attacks
-Crushgaunts:Help get out of melee engagements a good bit faster
-Kuckleplate vibroblades:One on either hand, good for a quick strike
-Magno-grip boots: Help maintain solid footing onboard a ship if artificial gravity takes a dive

DESCRIPTION
Designed after his acceptance as a Mandalorian by others after the debacle in orbit over Obroa Skai, Kurayami started to work with Mandalorian smiths to design a lighter set of armor that would provide superior protection. What ended up was a set of beskargam that was tailored for a pilot, the Aquila Armored flightsuit. Many systems and ideas were borrowed from his earlier Mk. 4 Expeditionary armor, with the crystadurium replaced by beskar sandwiched between reinforced duraplast for the plates and helm and an insulated phrik armorweave was utilized for the flight jacket and envirosuit. The optical zoom was upgraded slightly to provide a greater edge in visual confirmation of targets in combat situations as well as help maintain accuracy at long range. The modular hardpoints on the gauntlets are able to mount dart launchers, wrist rockets, or other various weapons or tools with 2 per gauntlet located on the forearm of each. After the event at Obroa Skai bioscanners were added to the enhanced sensor suite to provide the ability to designate and monitor targets when necessary. One feature many take not of right away is the lack of a visor. This was done for increased protection for the head and is the main reason the suit includes a faraday cage and EMP hardening, due to the fact that if the sensors were to be taken offline it would blind the user completely while the system rebooted.

Strengths:
-Highly resistant to slugs, lightsabers, EMP, and blasters
-Vacuum Proof
-Enhanced situational awareness
-Lightweight
-Modular weapon mounts(4 total, 2 per gauntlet on the forearm)

Weaknesses :
-Kinetic impacts are still transferred in large part to the user
-Can only be repaired by trained Mandalorian smiths due to construction
-Joints are only minimally protected by kneepads/elbow pads
-No protection at the neck other than that provided by the armorweave
-No stealth systems, completely reliant on the user not making too much noise

 

[Kista Bralor]

[SIZE=18pt]Kista’s Personal Beskar’gam[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=9pt]Playby: Image of one version of Hunter Armor from Destiny the Video Game / Image Source Giantbomb.com[/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]​

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Intent: To give Kista Bralor a personal set of Beskar’gam.​

Image Source: Destiny Female Hunter Armor / giantbomb.com​

Canon Link: NA​

Restricted Material: Beskar (Mandalorian Metal)​

Primary Source: Beskar'gam // Crushguants // Echoy'lii Shuk'orok (Echoy'lan Crushgaunts)​

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION​

Manufacturer: Kista Bralor (Kista's Workbench) ​

Model: Beskar'gam, unique by design.​

Affiliation: Kista Bralor / Closed Market​

Modularity: Unlike most Beskar'gam this suit does not contain parts that can be easily swapped for other modifications or weapons.​

Production: Unique​

Material: Beskar plates, Beskar mesh weave, Beskar cord weaves, rancor leather, plastiod parts, transparasteal​

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[SIZE=14pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]​

Classification: (Anti-Blaster, Anti-Ballistic, Multipurpose, Other)​

Weight: 18.5 kg​

Quality: Beskar Plates 10 Beskar Cord Weaves 9 Beskar Mesh Weave 8 (Joints)​

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[SIZE=14pt]SPECIAL FEATURES[/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14pt]Armor[/SIZE]​

Armor liner, gel​

Body glove​

Electronics​

Inner armor liner, thermal gel​

Sealed Environment​

Power system​

Life Support System​

Enhanced Strength​

Enhanced Speed​

Agility enhancement​

Copper Faraday Cage / EMP Shielding ​

Digital life support system readout​

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[SIZE=14pt]Helmet[/SIZE]​

Military Grade HUD​

Holo Recorder​

Anti-flash lenses​

Targeting System​

Sonic dampeners​

Macrobinoculars ​

Broadband antenna​

Comlink​

Combat sensor ​

Multi-frequency sensor array​

Environmental Filter, Rebreather, Oxygen Filtration System, Nutrient/Water Dispenser, Oxygen Tank (30 Minute Supply)​

Advanced bio-stabilizer mask​

Cooper Faraday cage / EMP Shielding​

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Gauntlets/Crushgaunts​

Echoy’lan Crushgaunts ​

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Back​

[SIZE=11pt]WESTAR BA-01 “Mr Bubble” [/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14pt]Boots[/SIZE]​

EMP Sheilding​

Grav-boot tech ​

Mango-grip tech​

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Combat Harness​

Grenade Hooks​

Ammo Pouches​

Energy Sinks​

Medpacks (2) ​

EMP Disruptor​

Anti-Security Blade​

Sound Dampening Belt​

Field Security Overloader​

Individual field disruptor​

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[SIZE=14pt]Strengths:[/SIZE]​

1. Enhanced Strength: This armor uses similar tech to crushgaunts. It doubles the user’s strength capabilities. If a person could normal bench 200 pounds in this armor they could bench 400 pounds. Crushgaunts typically only enhance grip.
2. Enhanced Speed: Due to the specialized technology within the armor it boosts the wearer’s speed. Just like Force Speed its quickness it one size fits all. While wearing this suit it does not enhance Kista’s speed faster than a Force User could move with Force Speed. The total speed is a side effect of the armor and Kista's genetic enhancements.
3. Agility: Due to it having specialized moving parts this suit is more flexible then your typical beskar'gam.

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[SIZE=14pt]Weaknesses:[/SIZE]​

1. The Force: Kista may have some resistances to some Force Skills but the armor does not. It can be detected through the Force. The gauntlets are Force Imbued.
2. Modularity: This suit does not have the capability to swap out weapon mods like other Beskar'gams have.
3. Some Restrictive Movement: It is armor. Metal parts linked together. It does not bend so easily. It does slightly restrict agile movements.
4. There is No Inbuilt Weapons: Unlike Mando'ade Beskar'gams this armor does not contain weapons. This is done to open up systems so the armor can have systems that enhance the wearer's physical attributes.

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[SIZE=14pt]DESCRIPTION[/SIZE]
Kista’s strengths have never lain with brute strength. Because of the bio technology that enhances Kista, she has always favored stealth and her agility. So when she designed her own suit of Beskar’gam, she designed it to fit her own style of fighting. How do you make a heavy suit of armor move fast and make it more agile then other suits? Kista spent hours pondering this. Most of those hours were spent at a computer reviewing data on other suits. It took far more then reviewing what other Mandalorian had done with their armor.​

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She researched alternative power sources. She developed new ideas on how to make servos more fluid and efficient. In her search she developed the idea of beskar cord weaves. It was a pretty simple idea. Thin cords of beskar wrapped together into slightly larger cord weaves. It was slightly different then beskar weave. It made for a stronger material. It also had a higher resistance value. And it was lighter then beskar plate. The down side it had a lower value then beskar plate. It helped to make a balance though. It meant she could make a lighter set of beskar’gam without eliminating too much of its armor value.​

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She made progress but she was not done. Then her idea was formed as she was reviewing data on crushguants. Crushguants increases the wielder's strength but only the grip. Applying this tech to the rest of this armor gave new possibilities. Although there was a drawback to this idea, in order to do that you would not have any room for weapon mods. The tech to enhance the suit with crushguant tech to much room. It was a drawback. One that not every Mandalorian would have chosen to do.​

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There were two things Kista had found out while testing this armor. One that it doubled the amount she could lift, push, or drag. It effectively doubled her physical strength.These increases of strength in combination with her own quickness, it effectively gave her increased movement speeds. It was still armor though; there were still limitations you could not avoid. Like rotation movement of the joints. Metal does not bend like organics joints. It could be closely mimicked but never duplicated.​

 

[Kista Bralor]

I am still waiting on one piece I am trying to buy in the market place to attach to this sub. I was hoping to get some feedback on what I do have so far? Any suggestions? Does it look like a solid sub?

 

[Kad Tor]

[member="Kista Bralor "]This looks awesome!

 

[Kurayami Bloodborn]

[member="Kista Bralor "]Looks solid, only thing I can think of is that they may ask you to put something generic in the model field. Just a basic descriptor like heavy armor or some such. Other than that I dont see anything that would raise red flags. Well done.