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Approved Location Trade Station 318

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Name: Trade Station 318

Image Source: http://orig01.deviantart.net/b1ad/f/2013/144/2/e/insomniac_s_fuse_space_station_by_meckanicalmind-d66eph0.jpg

Intent: To create a trade station owned and operated by the OCA and UTC that control's all Terminus Trade

Classification: Trade, Merchant

Location: Terminus System

Affiliation: OCA, UTC

Population: Navy Personel, 2,350 Marine Personel, 1,650 Permanent Merchants-Store Owners, 3,000 Residents, 1,000

Defenses:

Points of Interest: Docking Bays, 318 Marketplace, Security Checkpoint, Military Base/Docking Area

Description: I shall describe it per POI (Point of interest, than a general Desc.

Trade Station 318| Trade Station 318 is a wonderful place to visit, and an even better place to trade. Mostly a mercantile station it is also largely used for OCA operations and is the only considered military space station for them in the Terminus system. It's shape largely resembles a sword blade down surrounded by a ring. And each part has it's own value. The Ring is mainly the Docking Bay and partly 318 Marketplace. The part that most resembles the handle (The part of the station above the ring) is 318 Market with the top levels being Security Checkpoint. And the part that mostly resembles the blade (everything below the ring) is the military installation.


The Docking Bays| The docking bays are very operational. If docking cables are out anything up to a military grade frigate can attach to a docking bay on that space station. But under normal circumstances, each bay can hold up to 3-5 freighters depending on each size. With up to 4 Docking Bays the Trade station could hold up to 20 Freighters at max capacity. Each docking bay has 3 inspection teams made up of 1 Naval Officer and 5 Unarmored but armed OCA Marines, once a ship is thoroughly checked it can begin to unload it;s goods or get permission from the security checkpoint to go down to the surface. And all Docking Bays are situated on the ring of the station

318 Marketplace| The 318 Marketplace is one of the biggest in the entire Terminus system, with traders from all over the galaxy one could find a variety of Nerf Steaks up to the finest Mandolorian Armors. It resides within the ring, the long stems towards the center, and most of the top of perpendicular station. Each stall is a small cube of durasteel with an open front wall and no door for the merchants to display their goods. In bigger market areas one could find more permanent stores and restaurants on the station. But nonetheless, a great place to shop.

Security Checkpoint| Security Checkpoint, the gateway to Terminus, now that station 318 stands in between Terminus and the galaxy, all traders, vessels, or tourists have to get a pass before entering the system, lest have they use their patrol craft to escort you out of the system. Located at the top of the station it requires a 30 minute journey through the space station, and a chance to look at the 318 marketplace. Manned by mainly naval officers and some marines, it is military run, like most government buildings on Terminus.

Military Installation| The Military Instillation in the lower part of the station is one of the most important installations for the OCA, keeping a small garrison of OCA Marines, and a place for sailors to reside between deployments. It is specially built so a ship up to the size of a Victory Class Star Destroyer could attach to the side of the station. There are also some parts were Marines can launch in their space compatible suits to board attack ships. Many refueling depots are placed in the station.



History: There is little no history on the station. It is freshly built just this month, it is soon to have it's grand opening.

Links: Dev Thread - http://starwarsrp.net/topic/63365-the-doors-are-open/
The thread where I received the Patrol Craft - http://starwarsrp.net/topic/55225-contracts-companies-and-captains-open-to-companies-and-factions/#entry892367
 
William Kerkov said:
318 is a wonderful p[lace to visit,
Typo here



William Kerkov said:
| The Military Instillation taking residence
Another Typo



William Kerkov said:
Defenses: 20 Point Defense Turrets 2 TurboLasers 15 Laser Canon Turrets 4 XQ2 System Patrol Craft
Also I need links to all the defense even if it is just canon links on wookiepedia.



William Kerkov said:
The docking bays are 'special' on this station because they have the capability of fitting an entire military cruiser inside.

Alright reading this, you can fit possibly up to 4 cruisers within the space station. Depending on the Cruiser that's between 500-1000 meters per the factory template. The maximum in factory for a space station is 4000 meters. If going on the high side of the numbers, the math quickly does not add up, especially considering what else you'd like to have within the station.

Also conferring with the other judges there isn't a canon example of a cruiser being docked within a space station. The Death Star didn't even have that capability. If you were to arrange external docking for such a large ship, that would be fine. Just internal docking for something so large, seems unreasonable. So that being said, you either need to alter the sub to reference external docking for larger ships of that nature, or remove the reference of housing such large ships all together.

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