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Approved Starship The "Stardust Melody"

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Stardust Melody

Exterior view:​
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Deck plan:​
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Intent: To provide Cassius Droma with a mobile base of operations and personal transport.
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Image Source:
  • The exterior render: It’s actually a 3D model of the Millennium Falcon from EA’s Battlefront, hacked together and rendered to look more like a YT-1000 by yours truly.
  • The deck plan: A mash-up of images, taken from:
    A YT-1930 deck plan for most of the fore section.
  • A YT-1300 deck plan for the aft section.
  • This guy’s DeviantArt for the line art of the aft section.
  • The line art for the fore section can be found around the web, but I believe it’s originally from the book [SIZE=11pt]Millennium Falcon Owner’s Workshop Manual[/SIZE]

[*]Canon Link: N/A
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Restricted Missions: N/A
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Primary Source: YT-1000 light freighter
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Manufacturer: Corellian Engineering Corporation
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Model: YT-1000
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Affiliation: Cassius Droma
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Production: Unique
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Material:
  • Durasteel hull
  • Transpirasteel cockpit
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Classification: Unique Freighter
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Length: 28m
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Width: 22m
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Height: 8m
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Armament: Average
  • 2 Quad laser cannon turrets (ventral and dorsal; can be locked in forward position to be fired by pilot)
  • 1 forward-facing laser cannon centered below cockpit
  • 2 Concussion missile launchers
    4 torpedoes each

[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Defenses: Average
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Squadron Count: 1
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Maneuverability Rating: High
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Speed Rating: High
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Hyperdrive Class: 1
SPECIAL FEATURES
· Medical bay
· Wide-bar engine for improved speed and maneuverability


Strengths:
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE][+] Rough and Tumble: Because of its improved engines and weapon capabilities, Cassius has the ability to pilot the Stardust in combat situations and keep up with some starfighters out in the field.
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE][+] Flying In Style: Cassius made absolutely sure that he would have everything he needed while flying around the galaxy in the Stardust, with refreshers, autochefs, and a fully-functioning shower.
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE][+] Patches For All Your Tears: The Stardust has a more advanced medbay than one would see on a light freighter, with two bacta tanks large enough for one normal-sized Human in each.
Weaknesses:
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE][-] She's No Hauler: Due to the port cargo bay being converted into a medical bay, there isn’t a lot of room for hauling freight, which wasn’t its intended purpose in the first place, but it makes it difficult to carry vital supplies if needed.
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE][-] TLC: Since it’s a larger ship and has a lot of modifications, the Stardust requires a lot more attention than Cassius is used to giving a ship. He’s worked on his starfighters before, but he’s no mechanic, so if there were a serious issue with it, he’d have to take it to a professional that he trusts.

Description:
After finding himself more interested in archaeological projects and embarking on longer-term missions, Cassius Droma realized that the old U-wing he was flying wasn’t going to cut it. So, he began saving up for a light freighter. After pouring over numerous designs, he decided to go with the oldest YT-model from Corellian Engineering Corporation: the YT-1000. The smaller design and centered cockpit were the biggest features that sold Cassius on the vessel.

Rather than just buying a stock model, however, Cassius decided to spend a few more credits and outfit it with various modifications, including an extra quad laser turret on the ventral side, concussion missile launchers, and a wide-bar engine set for better speed and maneuverability. He also wanted a medbay included, so that way he could have a place where he or a friend could recover from injuries out in the field or on the move.

The Stardust Melody is truly meant to be Cassius’s home away from home, with full amenities to make sure he could live in relative comfort out in the field. While Cassius will still use his A-wing for combat, and shorter trips where he knows he’ll stay somewhere, the Stardust Melody is for the times where he just needs to get away.
 
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Cassius Droma said:
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Armament: Average
  • 2 Quad laser cannon turrets (ventral and dorsal; can be locked in forward position to be fired by pilot)
  • 1 forward-facing laser cannon centered below cockpit
  • 2 Concussion missile launchers
    4 torpedoes each

[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Defenses: Moderate
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Squadron Count: 1
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Maneuverability Rating: High
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Speed Rating: Very High
[SIZE=10pt]· [/SIZE]Hyperdrive Class: 1
Your ratings are currently too high.
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While reducing production to unique is an excellent way to enable yourself to improve ratings across the board, there is a limit which is outlined in an example within the templates. I have taken a snapshot of the example in the starfighter template for unique freighters for ease of reference, and as you can see your ratings, overall, exceed what is above. In order to bring your submission into a balanced state you could lower one rating twice, or two ratings once.
 
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