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The Pal'goon [VERY EARLY WORK IN PROGRESS]

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. THE PAL'GOON


Name: Pal'goon
Designation: [Sentient, semi, or non-sentient]
Homeworld: [Name of homeworld, and link to the thread for the homeworld if custom]
Language: They never came in contact with another contact so the language they are speaking itself does not have a name, but it is mos
Average Lifespan: 250 - 310 (But due to how they attack almost anything, it is most likely shorter)
Estimated Population: 60
Average height of adult male: 7"5 (Common) 6"8 - 7"4 (Short) 7"5 - 8"2 (Tall)
Average height of adult female: 6"4 - 6"8 (Common) 6"0 - 6"3 (Short)
Skin color: The only skin color they can have is light blue.
Hair color: The only hair colors they can have is Black, Grey, and White, most of the time only the alphas or the taller Pal'goons had hair, making it very rare, as time goes on it fades from black to grey to white, hair can only grow on their heads and no where else on their body.
Distinctions: [Unique physical traits that define what they are]

Breathes: [Type of atmosphere or medium it breathes]
Strengths:

[]Force Sensitive[]
Weaknesses:

[] Savage [] They were a savage race, if you even tick one off, it will try to kill you and eat you. This comes from the brain of the race, they will attack and attempt to slaughter and eat anything that seems like it will threaten or attack it, but since they viewed almost everything as a threat, they will most likely try to kill everything they see, it is possible to "calm one down" but it will require a ton of work to prove you are not going to attack one, or if your a sith it might just praise you as a god.

[] Cannibal [] Yeah, they will eat their own kind if they get hungry enough, they will pretty much each anything if they are hungry so that is why this one is pretty short, they will eat their own children, they will pretty much eat anything.

[]No experience in the force[] Even though the race has strong connections to the dark side of the force, the tribe has no idea how to use the force itself due to them never being taught how it works, they do not even know that someone can manipulate the force since they think "The Force" is a god like being that watches over them.



Races: [Not subspecies, distinct cultural or physical races (aka, just like human races).]

Diet: They are carnivores, they will eat pretty much any kind of meat without harm. They will get a deadly sickness if they eat anything that is a plant that will 9 times out of 10 will lead to death.

Communication: [List common communication medium]

CULTURE
Technology level: Primal
General behavior: [Describe general behaviors]
Tribe Ranks:

Mal'goony: These are the lowest of the low, most of these are the newborns or the injured, this is a rank that can only be kept for 10 weeks to allow them to prove their strength, if they are unable to they are killed and ate. The only thing they have is a stone hammer and a cloth to cover their lower body. After the time has passed and they did not prove themselves useful, they are killed and ate.

Ma'goon: These are the average Pal'goons that passed the first rank, they have the same gear all of that, they are the ones that are mostly crafters (which make spears and stone hammers) they are still disrespected by the O'goon and the ranks higher then that, like all other ranks they have to get their own killings and food.

O'goon: These are the warriors of the tribe that go out and do most of the killing, they are due to carry out any and every order the chief gives, they are mostly made out of the taller Pal'goons and the more bloodthirsty ones. This is the rank before chief, if one O'goon has proven themselves enough and the chief agrees, after the chief's death they will become the new captain. They are armed with a spear, and cloth. Instead of hunting they are the ones that get to kill and eat the Mal'goonys that fail, so they only have to guard the chief and do his orders.

Mat'goon: This rank is filled with only woman, since this is the only rank the women are, they are only used for mating, they are not disrespected, infact they are treated with more respect then the O'goon, their tasks are to give birth and go hunting and only that.



History: [Describe an abridged history. If your species is genetically engineered or Sithspawn, this is where to add links to the thread(s) where your new species was developed. A development thread, whether of creation or discovery, is required for all genetically engineered/alchemically created life forms being submitted to the Factory.]

Notable Player-Characters: N/A (right now anyway.)

Intent: [Describe the plan for this species. NOTE: This section alone can have your species dismissed. Species created on a whim or for purposes to undermine the integrity of Star Wars will not be approved.]
 
[member="Swafty"]

Good evening Swafty. I see you are a new member here to Chaos and perhaps not entirely familiar with the rules for the various sections. We do not allow Works In Progress submissions within the Codex or Factory, so I will be closing this submission of yours and archiving it.

I suggest you copy and paste what you have here so far either into a Word document on your computer or into a Google Doc and work on it there. When you are finished and ready to post up the finalized submission, send me a PM here on the forum and I will pull this submission back out of the archives for you to paste in the final piece and then we can get on to the Judging portion.

Archived.
 
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