The Onyx Nexu

[NessimaJedi]

(Not my image, just the basis for it)

The Onyx Nexu is a larger take on the Charger c70 retrofit of the Consular-class Republic Cruiser. It was intended to be a larger due to the needs of the purchaser, a Jedi Seer, as such it was created to have several features not seen in the smaller original. Such as that the "salon pod" being retrofitted to serve as storage for cargo and consumables. Unlike others in it's class the Onyx Nexu has been repainted with the colors of Durasteel grey and green with several white accents along the sides to indicate stripes.

Due to it's larger size, the main cargo hold now serves as a Hangar bay that contains 6 Eta-2 Actis-class interceptors, 2 landspeeders, 2 airspeeders, and 6 swoop bikes.

The Nexu serves as both home and base for the Nessima Jedi ant the living quarters deck reflects this design. the extra rooms for additional passengers were kept for those times when the Nessima needed to act as escorts, bodyguards, or help with extraction of others. The floor not only contains spacious living quarters in each room, but a small exercise gym, a full mess/dining area, a spacious central gathering/ command center, an armory, and a fully stocked medical lab (which is one of the larger full rooms on the ship).

Manufacturer
Corellian Engineering Corporation

Model
Refitted Consular-class cruiser

Class
Frigate


Length
216 meters

Hyperdrive rating
Class 1.5

Hyperdrive system
Equipped (Longe Voltrans tri-arc CD-3.2)

Power plant
Advanced power generator

Shielding
Equipped

Navigation system
Advanced navicomputer

Armament
Clone Wars-era

• Twin turbolaser cannon batteries (5)
• Point-defense medium laser cannons (2)

Additional Equipment

• Cloaking Device (powered by Hibridium crystals, drawback was perhaps the "double-blind" nature of the cloaking shield, which also blocked the host ship's scanners and communication systems.)
• Hyperradio Comm Array

Escape craft

• Escape pods (8)

Crew
8

Passengers
30

Cargo capacity
6,000 tons


Affiliation

• Galactic Republic
• Jedi Order

Droid Complement
Class 1:

• 2-1B Surgical Droid (2-1B5)
• FX Medical Assistant Droid (FX B9-3)
• GH-7 Medical Droid (GH-743)
• SP-4 Analysis Droid (SP-47)
• JN-66 Analysis Droid (JN-668)

Class 2:

• 8 Astromech Units (R2-J7, R4-D8, R2-Z12, R3-K3, R4-H2, R3-K4, R2-D24, R4-U3)

Class 3:

• 2 Protocol Droid 3PO Units (KL-3P0 and ST-3P0)
• WA-7 Waitress Droid (VAL-73)

Class 5:

• 4 ASP Droid Units
• C00 Cook Droid (CU55-C00)
• 8 Pit Droid Units

 

[Gir Quee]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Gir Quee]

[member="NessimaJedi"], welcome to Star Wars Chaos, and specifically the factory forums. I like how you've listed a specific set of droids for use in your ship.

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[Hailyn]

[member="NessimaJedi"]
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[Hailyn]

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