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Approved Tech Shatory Stun Stick

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Stun Stick
  • Size: Average
  • Weight: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Advanced Power Source: Designed with an iso-didact power source giving it a massive and long shelf life.
  • Penetrates Armor and Shields: Designed to penetrate large rock like beings and stun them the power of the baton at close melee range
    Generally within the shield range of armor and clothing
  • Sasori Beamer is able to bend around lightsaber blades
STRENGTHS
  • Self Repairing: Designed to repair itself from damage and fractures that accure with use.
  • Overly Engineered: Designed to stun a wide range of armored and unarmored beings as well as some made out of rock.
  • Exotic Matter: Altered at the molecular level and force enhanced to be force enhanced to be highly protective.
WEAKNESSES
  • Self repairing: While it can repair its own micro stress fractures the capabilities can take days to hours depending on how damaged they become from use.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Exotic Matter: The exotic matters are explosive when they come into contact with anti or dark matter.
  • Poor accuracy: The beamer built into the hilt is very short range and aiming it is more difficult making shots harder to take.
DESCRIPTION
Designed By sasori based on an old model stun stick, the Shatory riot baton is two pieces, the first part is a rod of synthweaved duraplast that has been reinforced to better protect it. Made to be used and restricted to the jedi it is the same size as a rare and exotic lightsaber baton. NOrmally set in a pair of batons that can be used and interlocked at the hilts to make small staffs a jedi could use. The small built in beamer weapons designed to knock other unconscious from a short range. The baton itself is made like a shock stick to penetrate armor and thick skin. The sleek design of the reinforced duraplast also adds to the design with small rings of metal that discharge the shock into others at close range. Careful when they use it and with the beamer providing itself a small measure of range that can be used but targetting with it can be difficult.
 
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Netherworld

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<p>Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.</p>
 

Netherworld

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Matsu Ike said:
Reinforced Duraplast
  • If this is meant to be 'Reinforced against EMP/Ion damage' please list this under Strengths.


Matsu Ike said:
Weight: 8.75kg
  • This is obscenely heavy for such a small one-handed weapon. Please list the weight under Weaknesses.
From the Sasori Beamer sub, under Strengths:
  • Able to bend around Lightsaber blades
  • Please add this under Strengths.


Matsu Ike said:
Penetrates Armor and Shields: Designed to penetrate large rock like beings and stun them the power of the baton at close melee range
  • You'll need to be more specific here. What kinds of armor? What kinds of shields?


Matsu Ike said:
Force enhancable: Designed with the synthweave so that it can be made stronger against lightsabers and increase the durability
  • What's the upper limit to this durability enhancement? Is it a quick process or can it be done in the middle of a fight?
From the Sasori Synthweave sub:
  • Calmness: The more potent crystals being applied allow the ones using it to feel serenity andbe calm. They can connect to the force at a higher level then other things and it allows for an augmented ability relative to the one using it.
  • Please add this under Strengths.


Matsu Ike said:
Cannot work on worlds without the Force
  • Does this also include other Force-nullifying sources, like Ysalamiri, Yuuzhan Vong, Voidstone, etc.?
  • If yes, please change the wording of the weakness to reflect this.

Finally, just to clarify – since you're using the lightsaber baton as a source – this is not a lightsaber, correct?
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Netherworld"]

edited and correct these are not lightsabers. they are similar size to them and you can use them. Telekinetically wielding more then you have hands would be easier then the strain of going after several sabers.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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edited and upper range of durability would be a standard force weapon which can resist and parry lightsabers. The longer you can focus the longer it can last.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Cira"] the vor'cha are rock people as described by Ben. The stun sticks can knock them out and these are just slightly modified version with the duraplast and crystal that you can infuse with the force to make stronger. otherwise it is just a stun rod you can smack people around with
 

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FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Light Praestigiae's Luminous Overlaid Technological Shields
Link to Submission: Light Praestigiae's Luminous Overlaid Technological Shields
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

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Submission Name: Heavy Praestigiae's Luminous Overlaid Technological Shields
Link to Submission: Heavy Praestigiae's Luminous Overlaid Technological Shields
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates

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Submission Name: Sasori Hand Axe
Link to Submission: Sasori Hand Axe
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Submission Name: Monitoring Stations
Link to Submission: Monitoring Stations
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Submission Name: Shatory Stun Stick
Link to Submission: Shatory Stun Stick
Reason for Factory Modification Request: updates
 
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