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Approved Starship OSA-17 "Restoration" Class Medical Cruiser

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OSA-17 "Restoration" Class Medical Cruiser
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a medical ship for Obsidian Star and Silver Jedi use.
  • Image Source: [x]
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Medical Cruiser
  • Length: 750 meters
  • Width: 150 meters
  • Height: 200 meters
  • Armament: Very Low
  • Defenses: High
  • Hangar Space: Very High - 7 Squadrons
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 2 squadrons
    • Support Craft: 5 squadrons
  • Maneuverability Rating: Low
  • Speed Rating: Average
  • Hyperdrive: Yes
  • Hyperdrive Class: 1.0
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Sensor Suite
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Propulsion Drive
  • Standard Communications System
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Advanced Medical Suites
    • Including:
      • Bacta Tanks
      • Medical Beds
      • Operating Theatres
      • State-of-the-art Medical Droids
      • Rehabilitation facilities
STRENGTHS
  • Heavy Defenses
  • State-of-the-art Medical Facilities
WEAKNESSES
  • Minimal offensive weaponry
  • Heavy power consumption
DESCRIPTION
The Restoration-Class medical cruiser was designed in a joint project between Obsidian Star Aerospace division and the Federal Cooperative. It carries a crew of approximately 500 officers and enlisted personnel and an additional 1000 medical personnel ranging from doctors and nurses to physiotherapists and counsellors. The Restoration is essentially a travelling hospital and is capable of setting up in orbit of a warzone or other disaster and using medical support craft to conduct mass medical aid operations.
 
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Beltran Rarr Beltran Rarr - Just a few things here.

As you've named Durasteel in your materials section, it will have to be linked. For ease of editing purposes, I've hyperlinked the article in this response. In addition, it seems that you're one rating overbalanced, as the total of the current ratings is -3 / +4. To help get this submission ready for approval, I would suggest that you either increase it's production rating to minor production, or decrease one of your ratings to compensate.

From there:

PDC's can be used in an offensive capacity, and as there is a possibility for abuse by ever-shifting armament loadouts - I would recommend listing out what weapons (including the PDC's) that this medical ship has under the armament rating. Just so that possibility can be nipped in the bud before this submission gets stamped.
 
LT-137 LT-137 Okay, all of it should be good now. Knocked the hangar space down to very high, which should solve the balancing issue. Linked the durasteel in the materials section and moved the PDC's to the armament section. Let me know if this sub needs any more TLC.

Thanks!
 
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