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N&Z Special Project 8709 "Autarch" Class Star Battlecruiser

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a true behemoth for all of fleet kind
  • Image Source: Fractalsponge
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: [x]
  • Primary Source:
    • Various Cannon and Legends Refrences
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Heavy Battlecruiser
  • Role: Flagship, Siege Breaker, Pocket Dreadnought, Bombardment Platform, etc
  • Length: 5,000 Meters
  • Width: 2,750 Meters
  • Height: 1,750 Meters
  • Armament: Extreme
    • 25x Octuple Barbette Super-Heavy Long Range Turbolaser Cannon Turrets
      • [Rotary Mounted; Independent Targeting; Stutter and Single Fire Capable; Adjustable Emitters, etc]
    • 25x Octuple Barbette Super-Heavy Long Range Ion Cannon Turrets
      • [Rotary Mounted; Independent Targeting; Stutterand Single Fire Capable; Adjustable Emitters, etc]
    • 10x Heavy Plasmatic Pulse Cannon Turrets
      • [Stationry Mounted; Bursts and Single Fire Capable; Adjustable Emitters]
    • 5x Octuple Barbette Long Range Mass Driver Cannon Turrets
      • Five Turrets Per Battery, Eight Cannons Per Turret
      • (Rotary Mounted; Retractable Mountings; Stutter Fire Capable; Fast Track Mountings, etc)
    • 5x Octuple Barbette Long Range Heavy Turbolaser Turrets
      • Five Turrets Per Battery, Eight Cannons Per Turret
      • (Rotary Mounted; Retractable Mountings' Stutter Fire Capable; Fast Track Mountings, Adjustable Emitters, etc)
    • 50x Turreted Variable Output Warhead Launcher Batteries
      • 10 Projectors Per Battery, Five Launchers Per Projector
      • Standard Loadout (Heavy Concussion Missiles, Heavy Energy Torpedoes, Mag Pulse Warheads, Brilliant Missile, Disrupt er Torpedoes, etc)
    • 10x Quad Barbette Kyber Enhanced Heavy Turbolaser Batteries
      • Five Turrets Per Battery, Four Cannons Per Turret
      • (Rotary Mounted; Retractable Mountings' Stutter Fire Capable; Fast Track Mountings, Adjustable Emitters, etc)
    • 8x Quad Barbette Kyber Enhanced Heavy Ion Cannon Batteries
      • Five Turrets Per Battery, Four Cannons Per Turret
      • (Rotary Mounted; Retractable Mountings' Stutter Fire Capable; Fast Track Mountings, Adjustable Emitters, etc)
    • 220x Heavy Point-Defense Laser Cannon Turrets
      • Rotary Mounted; Retractable Mountings; Rapid-Fire Capable; Fast Track Mountings;, etc)
    • 40x Ventral Quad Concussion Missile Launcher Turrets
      • Four Launchers Per Turret
      • Standard Loadout: Light Concussion Missile, Medium Concussion Missile, Heavy Concussion Missile, Advanced Concussion Missile
  • Defenses: Extreme
  • Hangar Space: Low
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 18 or Eighteen Squadrons
    • Support Craft: 2 or Two Squadrons
  • Maneuverability Rating: Average
  • Speed Rating: Very Low
  • Hyperdrive: Yes
  • Hyperdrive Class: Very Fast
  • Primary Hyperdrive: 0.3
  • Secondary Hyperdrive: 1.50
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STANDARD FEATURES
  • Hyperdrive Type: OS-10 "Heremes" Class Hyperdrive System
  • Optimal Crew: 17,750 Officers, Crewmen and Integrated Droid Brains
  • Minimal Crew: 5,500 Officers, Crewmen and Integrated Droid Brains
  • Passengers:
    • 6,000 - Onboard Security Attachment
    • 25,000 - Planetary Assault Attachment
  • Primary Power Unit: Advanced Battlecruiser Class, Solar Ionization Reactor
  • Secondary Power Unit: Standard Battlecruiser Class, Solar Ionization Reactor
  • Maximum Cargo Capacity: 150,000 Metric Tonnes (Including Vehicle Load-out, Starship Equipment, and Various Other Supplies)
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Internal Advanced Systems
    • State of the Art Power Distribution Node(s)
    • Phrik Reinforced Bridge Module(s)
    • Molecular Furnace
    • Prototyper
      • Numerous Duplicators
      • Numerous Synthesizers
      • Numerous Placeholder
      • Numerous Garment-Fabricators
    • Internal Bridge Equipped with State of the Art Holographic Interface System
    • Advanced Communications Suite
    • Advanced Sensor Suite
    • Central Artificial Intelligence
    • Decentralized System Array
      • Tactical Computation Distribution Core(s)
      • Maineline Distributed Central and Secondary Ship Functions
    • Internal Ray Shields
    • Self-Regulating Droid Factories
  • External Advanced Systems
    • Numerous Sensor Drone Emplacements
    • Molecular Shields
    • Composite Armor
STRENGTHS
  • [+] 'Smart' Ship
  • [+] Hammer and Anvil
  • [+] Speed Demon
WEAKNESSES
  • [-] Not a Carrier
  • [-] Lack of Maneuverability
DESCRIPTION

A marvel of technological and structural engineering, the Autarch Class Heavy Star Battlecruiser was a reality breaker.

A five kilometer long warship armed to the teeth with the most advanced and devastating weaponry the companies within the conglomerate had it's disposal. No expense was wasted and within the months of its original design having been edited and approves by the Board of Directors, the frame of the first of ten of these behemoths was assembled.

Rather than follow the normal design processes utilized when designing the Princeps and later Dictator line of warships, the man in charge of executing the will of the Board decided to take a different approach.

At first, there seemed to be no change whatsoever, the ship was being constructed the exact way it's designs had specified. But once the internal systems had been installed, the Engineering Foreman immediately had them ripped out and replaced with more advanced and interactive software designed to distribute vital systems across the entirety of the ship, theoretically allowing to surrive even a Holdo Maneuver, albeit on multiple fully functional pieces of it's former glory.

By the time the warship had been constructed it was far too late to go back to had been intended. Whispers of a mass firing circulated and yet none never came. In a shock, the Board ordered all ships of the line to be designed the way the Foreman had instructed.



 
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We have a good magnitude of problems.

  • Image Source: [x]
  • Permissions: [x]
No Links, please fix.

Manufacturer: N&Z Umbrella Corporation
  • Primary Manufacturer: Nagarth Holdings [Engineering Prowess, Weapons, Starship Systems]
  • Secondary Manufacturer: Infiniverse [Starship Design, Engineering Prowress]

Affiliation:
  • The Eternal Empire
These all need to be linked to factions and/or companies. Please do so.

Material:
  • Impervium Reinforced Durasteel
  • Tunqstöid
  • Glasteel
  • Various Other Shipbuilding Materials
Link your materials as this is needed.

  • Width:
  • Height:
This is empty, please fill in!

  • Hangar Space: Low
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 0 Squadrons
    • Support Craft: Squadrons
This is not completed, in addition at this rating it be 20 squadrons, please distrubute.

  • Hyperdrive:
  • Hyperdrive Class:
  • Primary Hyperdrive:
  • Secondary Hyperdrive:
These are empty, please fill in!

STANDARD FEATURES
  • Hyperdrive Type:
This is also empty, fill in please.


I cannot accurately rate this until the required is all fixed. In addition, I will be asking if you wished to be put back into Pre-Factory as this seems rushed and not properly prepared.

Regardless, let me know when you do your changes or if you decide to want this back in Pre-Factory.
Tristan Evore Tristan Evore
 
You still have not fixed the following:

  • Permissions: [x]
  • Primary Manufacturer: Nagarth Holdings [Engineering Prowess, Weapons, Starship Systems]
  • Secondary Manufacturer: Infiniverse [Starship Design, Engineering Prowress]
Link them please.


  • Primary Hyperdrive: 0.05
That is illegal. The fastest allowed is 0.3. We are not going plad here!


Let me know when you do the required changes.
Tristan Evore Tristan Evore
 
Tristan Evore Tristan Evore

What is the status of this submission? As per the rules of the pre-factory, which can be found here, submissions may only remain in the pre-factory for one month before being archived. Unfortunately, your submission has been in the pre-factory for longer than a month, if you could please update us on if you still intend to complete it, or if you would rather the submission be moved to the archives till you're ready to work on it.
 
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