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Approved NPC Melty

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 1 year old
  • Species: Akk Dog
  • Height: 1.5 m.
  • Length: 2 m.
  • Weight: 125 kg.
  • Appearance: Melty is a mutated Akk dog due to experiments. It is much smaller than ordinary akk dogs and less scaly. It walks on two feet with its front legs, although small, acts like an arm. It has an antenna kind of scales from its head and has Four eyes.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Melty
  • Loyalties: Sakka's Companion
  • Notable Possessions: None
  • Personality: Melty is a curious and gluttonic beast that devours anything he sees if left unsupervised (Though he is already trained not to devour anything that moves). He happily accompanies Sakka to all his as mission as he also learns from it. Can be sometimes Pesky if he doesn't have anything to do. Other animals fears him as they can sense that Melty wants to eat them. Notably gets along well with other akk dogs even though he looks different from them. Sakka rarely leave Melty alone, but if he does chaos will happen to its last location. A loyal companion that is ready to sacrifice itself to protect its master.
  • Favorite food : Melty almost eats anything it sees but his favorite food are Iron metals, specially Rust.
  • Training: Spit - Melty can fire sticky substance from its mouth to glue or slow down anything it hits. Melty can fire one meter square of gooey substance up to 10 meters if fired directly, and double if fired like an artillery. Its intensity is like an epoxy that will become solid like a concrete after one hour. This mutation was due to his appetite of devouring things and the body's metabolism of digesting things. If his stomach is full and he sees something new to his taste or his favorite food, Melty will spit out the digested food from its mouth.
  • Combat Function: Melty is good on long range combat and acts like a range cavalry in battle. It has less scales to protect its body and will be scared if confronted in close combat even though the enemy is small . If left unfed, it will devour stuffs it sees uncontrollably. Melty is also a cold blooded animal so his movements in cold climates drastically slows.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Sakka found Melty still as an egg after he was hired to eliminate failed experiments from a laboratory. Sakka felt pity and hid the egg from the authority. After the egg hatched Sakka raised and trained Melty. At first, Sakka had a problem on how to control the hunger of Melty to the point that he is ready to abandon the dog. But he realized Melty was also like him, alone at birth knowing nothing. So Sakka decided not to control Melty but to help the dog. Melty, In response, felt the compassion of Sakka and gained its trust.
 
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Hi there, welcome to the Codex. You've a fairly nice and basic submission, but I think it could be greatly improved upon, namely in the Historical Information and Personality sections. Here's a few questions to get those creative juices flowing:
  • What exactly does Melty enjoy consuming? His favorite foods?
  • Most notable memory with its owner Sakka.
  • Is Melty a generally happy or sad companion? Does he eagerly await the return of his master when running errands?
  • Does he get along well with other beings? Other Akk dogs?
I'd also like a little bit of clarification on Melty's "spit" ability. Canonically, Akk dogs aren't able to spit fire or sticky, gelatinous substances. How did this mutation come about? What's the range and intensity of this substance?

Tag me when you're done making edits.
 
Usually divergences from canon would require a new species submission, however since this is a unique creature and no others like him exist I think we can give it a pass.

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