Approved Tech Iconiq Bodyarmor

[Cathbodua]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To update Cathbodua's armor
• Image Source: Spider Gwen by Marvel Comics, Edited by Sanya Val Lerium
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: My Subs
• Primary Source:
  • Exotic Matter
  • Programmable Matter

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Sasori Research
• Affiliation: Company Name: Sasori
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: Robe Series
• Modularity: Fitted for the jedi
• Production: Unique
• Material:
  • Sasori Mesh
  • Skylar Hypermembrane
  • Inth
  • Sasori Materia
  • Solarite Metal

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Other
• Weight: Weightless
• Resistances:
  • Energy: Very High
  • Kinetic: Very High
  • Lightsabers: Very High
  • Other: Sonic: Low
  • Other: EMP/ION: Very Low
  • Other: Disruptors: Very Low
  • Other: Radiation: Low
  • Other: Fire: Average
  • Other: Cryo: Average
  • Other: Acid: Average
  • Other: Vacuum: Very Low
  • Other: Darkside: Extreme

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Force Affinity: Designed with force infused materials that imbue to the jedi wearing them a standard slew of protections and capabilities. The ability to better resist the darksides influence, ease the access to learned skills that have been practiced and feeling generally more energized and lively.
  • Force Resistance: Not pure resistance to the force but its influences specifically the darkside.
  • Force Enlightenment: A general enhancement of the specific jedi's talents in the lightside of the force. They don't know everything but using their own abilities is easier, sharper focus.
  • Revitalize: A more robust feeling mentally and physically aids in calming the mind and body to focus.
  • Force Form: Focusing and utilizing the force itself to improve the jedi's focus and mind as well as combative capabilities with the force.
  • Avar Kriss's Network: Connecting her to the jedi as a whole it follows much of what Avar did and lets her hear the song of the force.
  • Tutaminis: Advanced and formed within the robes themselves.. the material absorbs energy, heat, electrical, force, plasma and others to feed it into the jedis body and mind revitalizing their force powers.
  • Cleanse Mind: Focusing the force and clearing the mind of mental influences and those they can focus their attention on.
  • Force Binding: Designed and augmented into the robes, the pockets and robes themselves can be used to bind and contain influences when it is enclosed around a darkside object.
  • Inspire: Focused and empowered the jedi themselves as beacons within the force inspiring those around them to action and to shake off negative thoughts.
  • Controlled Descent: Focusing the force into a cushion around them the jedi are able to land from greater heights.
  • Force Familiar: Controlled and focused, the robes seek out a familiar creature and bonds with it... sadly while it connects them death of the jedi can kill the familiar.
• Healer Focus: Skilled in healing and with augmented robes to improve the jedi's focus as well as ease the strain mentally of healing others.
  • Accelerate Another's Healing:
  • Accelerate Healing:
  • Detoxify Poison:
  • Detoxify Poison in Another:
  • Cure Disease:
  • Cure Poison:
  • Force healing:
  • Transfer Force:
  • Dark transfer:
• Kirano Interface: Standard technical interface for operations.
  • Saotome Smart Interface:
  • Jadeite Interface Upgrade:
• Jedi Utility Belt: For supplies
• Cracken Survival Kit: Standard field kit
• Sigil of Hope: A legacy piece of jediu equipment created from the dark harvesters.
• Kojie: Underslung shoulder pack for extra equipment space.
• Perfumed Sleeves: Defensive Measures designed for jedi robes
• Refined Sleg Ultracapacitors: Designed to improve the power of the suits and augment the shielding for radiation and heat in space or protect them when boarding other ships.
• Advanced Regulator System: Designed to recycle oxygen and filter poisons for the common peoples in case of attack.
• Seeker Drone: Companion to atrisians and function as one of two organization interfaces. Can work together with an astromech.
• Makie Class Droid: A non-combative companion droid that works with the Atrisian citizens.
• Heavy Praestigiae's Luminous Overlaid Technological Shields: Protective shielding designed to be used with the pilot suit in the event of out of ship combat scenarios.
• Advanced Micro Thrusters: Designed to increase movement speed of the jedi while moving around.
• Strength/Speed Enhancement: Enhancing the body to increase the pilots natural state. In the event they are without their ships they can defend themselves.
• Temperature control/heat reflection: Designed for additional comfort when on other worlds
• Locator beacon: For emergencies to be retrieved with rescue ships.
• Ablative Plating: Designed with the standard robes and armor plating itself in a combination.
• Reflects Sensor Scans minorly
• Kiyomi Field Kit: Additional field kit included
• Sakura Field Kit: Additional medical supplies
• Sakura Healers Gloves: Improved gloves designed for medical assessment.
• Rebirth: An advanced medical AI designed to aid the chief healer

STRENGTHS

• Superior Protection: Designed using the Synthmesh, wintrium that as it ages continues to grow stronger and skylar which offers a form fitted compression material.
• Force Affinity: Infused and crafted with the force, the synthmesh, skylar and inth metal used all add force abilities to the outfit.
• Protection: The hypermembrane provides a robust degree of protection so it can be used.
• Self Repairing: Designed with the hypermembrane for protection but also the ability to repair itself over time with small damage being a few minutes to hours and sections of the suit being days.
• Overly Engineered: Designed to give the jedi a powerful sense of control and protection.
• Exotic Matter: Altered at the molecular level and force enhanced to be force enhanced to be highly protective.
• Healer Focused: Bringing force and medical technologies together into a more focused design. Unlike the Arukirī who maintain and bring the injured and dead to them... the healers are doctors and medics who go into battle.

WEAKNESSES

• Requires Connection to the Force: For the synthweave effects to function within it the material needs to be able to feel the force energies around it. Vong tech, yalisimiri, voidstone, dampening fields are all counter to what the material can handle.
• Self repairing: While it can repair its own micro stress fractures the capabilities can take days to hours depending on how damaged they become from use.
• Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
• Exotic Matter: The tetherite and solarite metals are explosive when they come into contact with anti or dark matter.
• Lightside beacon; The robes radiate the lightside of the force.
• Lightside: Designed with the jedi and lightside in mind, the material can be worn andused by neutral and darksiders but it is uncomfortable.

DESCRIPTION
Designed and created for the healer Cathbodua as a more progressive bodysuit then what she normally had. he base of the suit uses the Sasori Bodysuit that is designed as a highly protective bodyglove with the Ranger's Utility Boots set for them. Then slowly spread over with micronized crystal shards slowly added to create a focus and channeling suit much like the Sasori Gloves that are designed to allow the force to be channeled through using the force force crystals. The bodygloves abilities to enhance strength and grip along with its increased protection and lightweight gave her an advantage already.

Using designs from Chai La a mandalorian company Sasori purchased getting their beskarsmiths and workers. The designs of the apprentice Basaba's kinetic mesh on her Osik Naast Alor Kal'vod Beskar'gam was impressive. That it was built using the Sasori equipment and upgraded to incorporate more of it with mandalroain equipment showed how adaptible they were. The sme could be said for the giant of a woman Anita's Anita's Armor that featured the same style mesh giving birth to some ideas but none more then they should use and have armor smiths who work for them and know how to make the equipment properly.

The the second layer was focused and designed based on the Phenex produced Song of the Sun which is based off information in the armor of the former jedi healers master the then Vigo of the black Suns. The Vigo being a friend of Matsu's and leaving the designs in the company. Over it the Sasori Harness is set to provide pouches and clasps for gear with the lightweight hybrid plexisteel a strong and very lightweight material used by sasori to reduce weight in most of their equipment. The added high blaster protection is also a plus. The work on it to give her movement as well as protection so a healer didn't get injured while actually trying to heal.

The addition of the Sasori Toolkit on her wrists provides more weight but it is managable same with the Ranger's Sheath that go onto the thighs between t he harness. Providing flexibility and creating a protective suit with armor protection that would bypass a number of armors produced. To protect herself the jedi knight encouraged cortosis bands for protection at her wrists and at her neck being used to hook under the jaw and seal her normal mask. A palm scanner for medical scans she could work and bring to her forearm pad to observe the status of patients. The standard contents of the jedi utility belt in the harness,

The uppermost layer of the armor was protective shell spider silk armor which provided additional protection and adding more crystal shards to it to work as a channel to attune the armor charging the force through it and making its level of protection increase. The phrik plating was threaded and weaved into the outer layer of shell spider silk allowing the lightweight material to add protection. With the self regulating bodysuit and seals allowing it to protected from chemicals while on the back a rebreather pack can easily be held. Her additional gear is able to be stored like the Sasori Crystal.

The addition of several smaller Sasori gadgets like the built in Sasori Amulet that can provide a shield and the Sasori Circlet which can provide protection and aid. The outer layer and coating of the armor is coated with the Sasori Coating providing a micro crystal sheen making it look more like a synthatex zentai suit with her mask and hood designed to house the Murr Earrings near her but not confined to press the crystals into her skull. The power lining to make the weight of the gear less and the gravity level built into the belt allows carrying weight to be decreased. For its coating it can create a small electrical charge to activate the optical camo.

The name day crystals built into the armor are not for attuning it and hardening it for a time with the force to create stronger armor. Reducing flexibility in favor of protection from lightsabers and blasters. Unlike traditional force gear it is fashioned like Master Vodo's quarterstaff which was charged with force energy to become stronger but not at all times. It lets the armor go from lighter weight protection able to let the healer to run around. Then change over to a medium style highly protective armor made to keep the healer safe. The crystals and armor requiring the force is a major thing and it requires not being on worlds that can't access the force.

The armor is not special or the first of its design, it has basing with groups within the galaxy. The Jal Shey skilled in imbuing the force into their equipment permanently through their meditations that could provide them protection and added force powers and effects. The workers at Sasori skilled in adding power to items for the jedi to use and the Jensaarai who crafted cortosis weaved force armor in custom ways to their own style. The armor is not as strong or permanent as those but has the flexibility of the Jal Shey with the durable material being used like the Jensaarai being used to spin it for the jedi healer.

Cathbodua has only in her years gotten stronger with the force and Hapan standards for it thanks to Allana as she acts as a master and healer for the Sibsi N Sanilër For'ta Nidan within the consortium. Sasori's engineers working with them improved her outfit slimming it down with some of the packs and equipment into a full bodysuit that is highly protected. With healing augmentation that can match and outdo many others. The jedi master and one of the chief healers who has worked on many injured is able to augment her healing abilities and lessen the strain... though given the heavy training she does it is amazing how the armor augments herself.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

Under review

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

[member="Cathbodua"]

her bodyglove for the processing implant being kept on her belt Whihc

Spelling mistake

Also can you explain the self repairing mesh on how long dose it take to work and how long it takes to repair.

 

[Cathbodua]

[member="Sanya Val Lerium"]

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Laminanium

There is not really a timetable or amount. It is vague and only says at almost any temperature. That is what makes it good for blast vests and explorer armor.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

Approved pending secondary [member="Spencer Jacobs"]

 

[Alric Kuhn]

[member="Cathbodua"]

I'm going to be honest with you, the Dev Threads you have for this armor are not sufficient for what you're trying to make it do. The dev threads for Phrik and Laminanium are absolutely bare bones with only 10 posts each and each post being barely over 100 words. The thread for the Crystals, although lengthy, is over a year old and as far as I can tell doesn't even have your character in it, how did she get these crystals?

If I'm going to approve this I would like to see a little bit more current effort put into it, an additional 10-15 posts of things being put together. You're trying to create the highest quality armor on the board and tack on additional effects including lightsaber resistance and force enhancements. This is something that traditionally requires a little more effort.

To go on;

Enhanced Mental Focus (micronized adegan shards) Enhanced Force Connection (micronized kyber shards) Enhanced Healing Abilities (micronized name day healing shards)

I'm going to need you to detail out these effects in the description other than just blanket statements. How much does the focus help? What does it help with? How does the connection aid? How powerful does this make a user? What is the upper limit of the healing capability?

Please explain as its important to the sub and anyone who might roleplay with it in the future.

 

[Cathbodua]

[member="Alric Kuhn"] I'll get more posts for the dev right away.

For the rest, Name day crystals were jedi crystals used for healing and given on birthdays to aid in healing and focus. They are a canon common item same as the adegan whihc was used commonly by jedi to create a connection to their lightsaber.

The description is edited and talks about the crystals explaining them. If there are more edits I will make them or message you to pull out this from the archives when I finish the dev thread.

 

[Alric Kuhn]

[member="Cathbodua"]

Cool, thank you.

Just PM me when you're ready.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Cathbodua"] pulled from archives

 

[Cathbodua]

[member="Alric Kuhn"] new dev thread added where phrik is gathered in npc perspective for the challenges. Some small edits for things added as well. Major weakness of the suit requiring the force to channel and augment. It will not work on worlds without the force.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Cathbodua"] Alric Kuhn isn't the FA anymore...Im currently reading your devs so please do give me a day or so - this is a quality 10 armor so I'm review it.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Cathbodua"]

[SIZE=13.3333px]Thank you for allowing me the time to review the dev threads in full. Dev threads work and are passable for the submission. As for the submission itself there are several problems. I’ll list them and provide explanations.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]General Issues:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=13.3333px]First off there’s no strength and weaknesses category, these are beneficial to both the judges, people reading the submission and yourself. Please include this. Also if you could beef up the description, if you look at other Quality 10 rating armors their descriptions are very in depth providing a solid understanding of the armor that is being presented. Quality 10 is a rating for armor that is difficult to accomplish. You’ve put in work, just need to beef it up a bit – specially to help others understand what they’re facing in a PVP sense. In most cases, try to answer any questions someone could possibly have with your armor.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]Laminanium Issues:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=13.3333px]“Laminanium-Kinetic Mesh” there’s no such thing in canon – if there is can you provide some sort of proof I’ve been looking for it all day and haven’t found mention of it. If this is custom tech, please provide an explanation and you may need to dev/submit the new tech to the factory.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]If you want self-healing mesh, you need to explain how it avoids healing back into a big glob. Laminanium flows together, for example if you make Laminanium chain mail and broke a part of it – the broken links wouldn’t re-form they would make one blob. Laminanium is the “stuff” around the “fibers” of course if you have it made into mesh or what have you, it won’t repair into the same state again it would be a blob.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]TL;DR – Such a fine structure wouldn’t repair perfectly[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]Weight/Quality Issues:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=13.3333px]“Boots 3.5kb, toolkit 2.5kg, Harness 4kg, bodyglove 4kg” Four items out of the massive list of things over and above the metal mesh of what the character is wearing weight almost as 3x as much as the entire suit does. This doesn’t even mention the 90-minute air supply which would weigh roughly around 5.5kg. You’re trying to load like 50lbs of equipment onto a skin tight body suit.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]Another thing which more would be explained farther down in the judgement is the quality 10. I’m confused at this, it’s a leotard with the same armor rating as Popo’s tank or other heavy Quality 10 armors. There’s no protection from blunt force attacks which makes me question its ability to be a Quality 10 rating[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]Crystals:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=13.3333px]The crystals are interesting, but if something hits the armor because it is just mesh from the sound of it – they would and could cause massive injury as soon as something hits it. Even micronized it would be like sandpaper on the skin.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]Phrik Issues:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=13.3333px]I understand the use of Phrik you’re trying to improve the protection of the mesh, the problem is though it doesn’t work like that. It is possible to weave together fine metal wires to get a cloth like material, the problem though you wouldn’t get the same level of protection if you were to use the metal as a plate or even mail. You might be able to increase the tensile strength, much like you would with a steel cable made of individual wires. Yet, that still doesn’t give you any real protection against shearing, also it relies on the mental being pliable, which Phrik is not.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=13.3333px]Conclusion[/SIZE][SIZE=13.3333px]:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=13.3333px]All of the above items can be fixed, I’m still working my way through the submission. These were the big things that stuck out to me. Honestly, there are two things we can do here. We can continue to work and get this concept to work or I can deny it on concept and you can re-use the development threads and make an entire new suit that works with what you’re trying to do. From the above this armor just doesn’t work the way you want it to.[/SIZE]

 

[Cathbodua]

[member="Spencer Varanin"] edited with more links and given this armor is a concept accepted in canon it isn't a snowflake. Just different using existing technology and strong lightweight materials.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Cathbodua"]

Minor thing, can you spoiler the image for me just to clean up the submission or make it a shorter image. Its kind of long in dimension. Also thank you for lengthening the description filled in a lot of questions I had come across.

Judgement:
The Song of the Sun has no laminanium in it. So I'm somewhat lost as to what you're referring to when you claim its based off of it. Also, after doing some looking around at the Song of Mandalore [operator's kit]- it has what you want which is a good thing, but its a unique event prize. Which means is you need to have had access to it to reverse engineer so you could recreate it. I couldn't find any mention of any reverse engineering on the unique event item.

• Without additional Dev: Remove the Unique Event Item [Operater's Kit from Song of Mandalore]
• With additional Dev: 15 solid [written by the character that is doing the reverse engineering] posts of reverse engineering the Unique Event Item

I see that you mentioned Hybrid Plexisteel stating that it will reduce the weight, that's great, but you're still carrying 50kg of gear and metal. The gravity level built into the belt allows the ability to the weight is decreased, but if you're constantly using it - the unit would burn out. So you still need to state the actual weight that is on the suit because you can't constantly run the tech that counters the gravity. You could separate it so that its apparent at the weight difference ie: Without Grav tech off: 50kg* and with grav tech on: 5.5kg*

The Primary sources really don't make sense honestly. I would link the Song of Mandalore and the Song of Sun to the primary sources than the really bland and vague examples you have listed currently. It looks as if you're just trying to fill space with something. None of the examples you provided in the primary sources state anything that helps your sub.

As for stating its not snowflake...most armors that are quality 10 if not all armors that are quality 10 are snowflake. Any armor that's uniquely made for a specific character is snowflake. There's nothing wrong with that. Speaking of, can you please put the character's name in the affiliation tab since she will be the one using it. If she's not the one using it, the submission needs to be changed to the character that will be using it. Any changes after the fact of approval it will need/can be done in the factory tech mod thread.



*These are just estimated examples you'll need to do the proper math to figure this out.

 

[Cathbodua]

[member="Spencer Varanin"] the Song of the Sun was made by Phenex which is owned by Sasori. It is stated and deved being made based off Wendy's master's armor the Song of Mandalore. There is studying it in the dev threads to have systems of the armor. The other armors fit with what this is as it uses force attuning to increase the protective capabilities of it. They aren't to fill space they are to point out that the concept of this armor is based in canon to oppose you "I'd deny this on concept" remark. This isn't special this is something a force sect could make in their sleep and likely ten times better. As to the weight, I am not seeing your numbers... I mean the bodyglove is in the armor 4kg of the initial 5.5kg. The rest would be the mesh and shell spider on top so 1.5kg and then she has a harness for pouches and beltwhich is another 4kg a built in circle, amulet and crystal. The thigh sheats are there fair enough (additional 2.5kg) and her gloves with the wrist weapons (2.5kg) but aside from the rebreather which are a backpack designed to be carried with far heavier armor in mind (so 6kg maybe). 9kg + 6kg = 15kg additional weight maybe round to 20 for accessories if being generous. So 20kg at best compared to the 50kg you are claiming. It might not be pretty but far from encumbering her movements to the point she can move around. She has several threads training by herself and with padawans to carry actual loads and larger people.

 

[Allyson Locke]

The other armors fit with what this is as it uses force attuning to increase the protective capabilities of it. They aren't to fill space they are to point out that the concept of this armor is based in canon to oppose you "I'd deny this on concept

They make no sense mostly because there's nothing beyond "Light armor". They don't state what equipment went along with the armor, they don't state weights of the armor - there's no substantial ties to your armor beyond the concept of "its light weight armor and they can move". If you would have put down the Song of Mandalore and the Song of the Sun it would have made more sense. There isn't even any mention of Jal Shay in any of your devs. That's a minor thing, but still. I'm not trying to fight with you here I'm trying to make sure that the bases are covered and the armor works and makes sense.

So 20kg at best compared to the 50kg you are claiming.

As for the weight and the variables that are unknown, I'm completely okay with it being 25kg to give or take the unknown weights. Also, the 50 was done in pounds and I was dumb and didn't convert it apologies for the confusion. Again 22~25kg give or take to cover the unknown weights as well.

It is stated and deved being made based off Wendy's master's armor the Song of Mandalore

Going through the devs again I did a search on the following keywords:

"Song of Mandalore"
"Laminanium - Kinetic Mesh"
"Wendy"

Nothing came up, when I read through originally there was no mention of the armor, the concept or the character that owns the armor. So I return to my original request of asking for a reverse engineering dev of 15 solid posts. I know originally the issue was with the dev threads lacking. I understand they're annoying, but they need to have quality to them especially with a quality 10 armor.

Affiliation: Vathbodua

Also please make sure you go through the submission and clear up any grammar / spelling errors.

 

[Cathbodua]

[member="Spencer Varanin"] edited and I think I'll go with the references to the Sasori owned designs featuring self repairing kinetic meshes that you approved. One as a submission modification and one as a suit of armor. Both part of class ten armor.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Weight: 5.5kg

Please do as we had talked about with the weight. I get that its light weight, but you still need to show that there is a weight change. 22kg~25kg

Spencer Varanin edited and I think I'll go with the references to the Sasori owned designs featuring self repairing kinetic meshes that you approved. One as a submission modification and one as a suit of armor. Both part of class ten armor.

Lol, sounds good you were always good at linking stuff to get out of things. Good research work, that clears up that issue. [member="Cathbodua"]

 

[Cathbodua]

[member="Spencer Varanin"] edited

 

[Allyson Locke]

22kg~25kg

@Cathbodua